Feb. 25, 2023
jianzi
Yesterday I kicked shuttlecock with boys. That's really interesting. Unfortunately, the shuttlecock was trapped in a roof. We couldn't get it. Today I bought a new one, isn't it beautiful?
昨天和小男孩们踢了毽子，很好玩哈哈。不幸的是，毽子掉到了屋顶上，我们拿不下来。今天买了一个新的毽子，漂亮吧。
jJianzi
Yesterday I kickWe played shuttlecock with boysthe boys yesterday and it was fun haha.
From DeepL's translation of the Chinese
That's really interesting.
Unfortunately, the shuttlecock wasgot trapped in athe roof.
or,
Unfortunately, the shuttlecock went up on the roof.
We couldn't get it.
Today I bought a new one, i. Isn't it beautiful?
Feedback
Nice work!
Yesterday I kicked a shuttlecock with the boys.
Don't forget the particles.
That'It was really ienteresttaining.
The original sentence doesn't make much sense in this context. It also needs to be in the past tense.
Unfortunately, the shuttlecock was trapped ion a roof.
We couldn't get it.
Feedback
Be careful with the grammar in this journal. The demonstrative sentence at the end could work if this journal is a script for a presentation, it depends on the usage. Saying "isn't it beautiful?" means that the reader should be able to see the new shuttlecock. Keep up the good work though and good luck :)
Feb. 25, 2023
Thank you so much! You're really nice.非常感谢！
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jianzi
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Yesterday I kicked shuttlecock with boys. Yesterday I kicked a shuttlecock with the boys. Don't forget the particles.
From DeepL's translation of the Chinese |
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That's really interesting.
The original sentence doesn't make much sense in this context. It also needs to be in the past tense.
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Unfortunately, the shuttlecock was trapped in a roof. Unfortunately, the shuttlecock was trapped Unfortunately, the shuttlecock or, Unfortunately, the shuttlecock went up on the roof. |
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We couldn't get it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today I bought a new one, isn't it beautiful? Today I bought a new one |
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