Oct. 13, 2025
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Hello! Currently I'm in Belarus and life is such slower. I feel serenity. The most of my time I devote to c and funny scratch projects. A feeling of calmness is atypical for me. I suspect that life in my past country made me depressed. Bit by bit my depression is deissapearing. On the other hand, I came back to my birthplace and this may be the reason why I feel better.
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Currently I'm in Belarus and life is smuch slower.
Currently I'm in Belarus and life is much slower.
The mMost of my time I devote to cC and funny sScratch projects.
Most of my time I devote to C and funny Scratch projects.
"C" and "Scratch" as the names of specific programming languages, have their first letter capitalised.
Of course in C, that's the only letter :)
I suspect that life in my pastrevious country made me depressed.
I suspect that life in my previous country made me depressed.
Bit by bit my depression is deisisappearing.
Bit by bit my depression is disappearing.
On the other hand, I came back to my birthplace and this may be the reason why I feel better. On the other hand, I came back to my birthplace and this may be the reason why I feel better.
The birthplace
Hello!
CI'm currently I'm in Belarus, and life is such slower here.
I'm currently in Belarus, and life is such slower here.
* Starting with a sentence with "Currently" isn't a grammatically wrong, but I think it sounds too strong unless you want to emphasize the timing.
* The present tense "I'm" already implies "now", "currently".
I feel serenitye.
I feel serene.
Or "I feel a sense of serenity."
The mMost of my time I devote to cC programming and funny s Scratch projects.
Most of my time I devote to C programming and fun Scratch projects.
* I'm guessing you mean "C programming" by "c".
* I'm also guessing you mean the Scratch platform by "scratch".
* "funny" means смешной, whereas "fun" means весёлый. "fun" seems more appropriate here... unless you actually laugh while doing the projects. :)
AThe feeling of calmness is atypic is unusual for me.
The feeling of calm is unusual for me.
"The feeling of calm" or "A sense of calm" sounds more natural to me.
I suspect that life in my pastrevious country made me depressed.
I suspect that life in my previous country made me depressed.
* "past" describes time, so "my past country" is incorrect.
* "my previous country" or "my former country" or "the country I used to live in" all work.
On the other hand, I came back to my birthplace and this may be the reason why I feel better.
On the other hand, I came back to my birthplace and this may be the reason I feel better.
* "the reason why" is redundant.
* Either "this may be the reason I feel better" or "this may be why I feel better" sounds more natural.
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I can only imagine what you're been through. I'm glad you're finding some peace there.
P.S. I missed correcting one more line, and LangCorrect doesn't let me add a new correction once I've submitted. "deissapearing" is misspelled -- it should be "disappearing".
Oct. 14, 2025
Thank you! Sometimes I really laugh while doing the projects :)
"a sense of serenity" is new form for me
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Currently I'm in Belarus and life is such slower.
* Starting with a sentence with "Currently" isn't a grammatically wrong, but I think it sounds too strong unless you want to emphasize the timing. * The present tense "I'm" already implies "now", "currently".
Currently I'm in Belarus and life is |
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I feel serenity.
I feel seren Or "I feel a sense of serenity." |
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The most of my time I devote to c and funny scratch projects.
* I'm guessing you mean "C programming" by "c". * I'm also guessing you mean the Scratch platform by "scratch". * "funny" means смешной, whereas "fun" means весёлый. "fun" seems more appropriate here... unless you actually laugh while doing the projects. :)
"C" and "Scratch" as the names of specific programming languages, have their first letter capitalised. Of course in C, that's the only letter :) |
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A feeling of calmness is atypical for me.
"The feeling of calm" or "A sense of calm" sounds more natural to me. |
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I suspect that life in my past country made me depressed.
I suspect that life in my p * "past" describes time, so "my past country" is incorrect. * "my previous country" or "my former country" or "the country I used to live in" all work.
I suspect that life in my p |
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Bit by bit my depression is deissapearing.
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On the other hand, I came back to my birthplace and this may be the reason why I feel better.
On the other hand, I came back to my birthplace and this may be the reason * "the reason why" is redundant. * Either "this may be the reason I feel better" or "this may be why I feel better" sounds more natural. On the other hand, I came back to my birthplace and this may be the reason why I feel better. On the other hand, I came back to my birthplace and this may be the reason why I feel better. |
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