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Hobbies

I guess playing videogames is a Hobby, it's first in my list.
I'm playing videogames since I was a child, one of my firsts memories is watching the tv while I was playing Spyro in Playstation, I enjoyed it a lot, even now I still loving that game, probably I had 4 or 5 years old then, at 7 y. o. (if I remember well) my family bought the first computer, before that I played in computers just a few times, it was a big change because I had the possibility to play everyday, I remember: Diner dash (1, 2, 3, 4 and many more), sims 1, solitaire spider, crazy taxi, gta vice city, some games of Barbie, and some collections with boring games. At that time cell phones wasn't the big deal, anyways it was funny, old nokia was the first that I remember, some sony ericsson (I remember that I wanted to select a wallpaper for the phone, but I didn't know how to read, so I selected the "delete" option withouth know what I did, absolutely confused haha), many simple and forgettable games, except: Grim Oak - Darkest Fear, a red ball to pass levels, some space shooter, snake, a dance game and a game of Alice in wonderland. I'm not talking about a specific age, my remembers are mixed, just I know I was a kid.
Technology advance changed my life, the incorporation of touch was amazing, I was so happy with my first tablet at 14 years old. My first notebook, everything was something great, the possibility to play whatever I wanted.
Note: My family was the typical poor that buy useless things while they don't have good food or clothes.
This gives me a strange feeling, is sadness, my past is traumatic, videogames was my refuge... I played to ignore, to control, to distract from a sad reality...
And now, I'm here, I still playing videogames, but now is only because I like it, ocassionally if I'm too sad or angry I use it as a way to calm down, but isn't usual.
I like: RE (1, 2, 3, 4), sims (1, 2, 4), beholder, zoo tycoon 2 (old and nostalgic), gta (vice city, san andreas, I want to play the V some day), Spyro, Oxygen not Included, crash bandicoot, legend of zelda (Ocarina of time, A link to the past, Majora's mask)

Another possible hobbie is watch anime (I'm not otaku... I guess... haha), anime was present in my life since my childhood with pokémon, ranma 1/2, digimon (1 and 4), inuyasha. It continued when I was teenager, something more absurd and empty: gore and toxic lovers (terrible, I know). Now I still watching it, is part of my life, but I'm a bit more reflexive with it: thinking about characters development, elements, dialogues, etc. I loved Full metal alchemist:Brotherhood, I liked beastars, shingeki no kyojin, boku no hero. Yakusoku no neverland wasn't exactly what I wanted, I read the manga, I ended it, honestly it wasted a lot of potential!
It was so great with gold pond arc, but then... Just a simple and "happy end", they wasted the potential of Isabella and Emma in this. (I'm talking about the manga). And the anime wasn't a big difference, I had a higher expectation: "surely they will make it better", and I was wrong, a big deception.
I wans't interested in Naruto when I was young, but my boyfriend saw it many times, and that's how I watched it (not all, but the most part), I really liked many characters (except Sasuke and Sakura, with S of Super-unbearable) specially Lee. About Boruto, I can't like the protagonist, is so... Boruto, Himawari is a thousand times better than him (at least for me, sorry if I wasn't nice with that comment about the anime)

As I beign said, I read manga too, that's another hobby. And I guess here is included read comics, although I don't do that for a long time, I was interested in DC comics, even I bought a comic from Spider-man (the paper is so nice, the draws too, but too expensive...), but with rebirth everything got mixed for me and I lost interest.

I used to read a lot of books while I was teenager, so much that many consecutive years I was the best reader in the school (although I didn't had so much competition...). I remember how people talked about "the weirdo that reads book in the library", well kids, library is for read books not play and scream, neither use it as a personal room. But there was too people that admired it, above all because I was really faster reading. Sometimes the school did some speed read tests, so they gived to you a paper with words and estimated how fast you read per minute, I ended the paper many seconds before the time was over, even I had enough time to say "I finished" and see how the teacher was impressed. But it wasn't the big deal, faster isn't better, my comprehension and memory for books is terrible, I just read because it was a funny way to distract from the world withouth a computer. I still enjoying reading, but I try to don't buy books (better a PDF).

Write is another hobby although I don't do it daily, only if I'm "inspired" in some way. But in general are sad and tragic histories, marked for my past and my sad vision of the world. Yesterday I wrote a poem in Spanish, I'm gonna put it in another post because this is too long, I don't think someone will want to correct this...

And I like to draw, I'm not the best but I practice sometimes, I learned from videos and taking photos of myself in a specific position to know how body and clothes are in that way. I want to found my personal style some day, maybe publish.

So, my principal hobbies are: 1) Videogames 2)Watch anime 3)Read (manga, books, comics) 4)Write 5)Draw

Honestly, with all my hobbies I want to do something, I mean I want to write a book, make my own comic, work in videogames development. I want to be someone recognized, a person that gived a good history, a good style, something that people liked and shared because is good, is nice, is enough to be enough. (Yes, "enough to be enough" was intentional, not a error)

If someone correct this, thank very much for your time, seriously I appreciate it.

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(Yes, "enough to be enough" was intentional, not a error)

If someone correct this, thank very much for your time, seriously I appreciate it.

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I'mve been playing video games since I was a child, o. One of my firsts memories is watching the tvTV while I was playing Spyro ion Playstation,. I enjoyed it a lot, e. Even now I still lovinge that game,. I was probably I had 4 or 5 years old then, at 7 y. o.

The last sentence doesn't make sense. Were you 4 or 5? Or were you 7?

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(iIf I remember well)correctly, my family bought theour first computer, b when I was 7. Before that I had only played ion computers just a few times, i. It was a big change because I had the possibility to play everyday,. I remember: Diner dDash (1, 2, 3, 4 and many more), sSims 1, sSpider Solitaire spider, cCrazy tTaxi, gta vGTA Vice cCity, some games of Barbie games, and some collections withof boring games.

I think that 7 year old part is meant to be here.

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At that time, cell phones waseren't thea big deal, anyways it was funny,. An old nNokia wais the first cell phone that I remember, some s. I remember Sony eEricsson models (I remember that I wanted to select a wallpaper for the phone, but I didn't know how to read, so I selected the "delete" option withouth knowing what I did, absolutend got totally confused haha), had many simple and forgettable games, exceptincluding: Grim Oak - Darkest Fear, a red ball to pass levels, some space shooter, sSnake, a dance game and a game of Alice in wWonderland.

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The advance of technology advance changed my life, t. The incorporation of touch was amazing,. I was so happy with my first tablet at 14 years old.

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My first notebook, everything was something great,Each piece of technology was great, because I had the possibility tof playing whatever I wanted.

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Note: My family was the typical poor that buy useless things while they don't havepoor but we bought useless things instead of good food or clothes.

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This gives me a strange feeling, is sadness, m and makes me sad. My past is traumatic, and video games was my refuge...

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I like: RE (1, 2, 3, 4), sThe Sims (1, 2, 4), bBeholder, zZoo tTycoon 2 (old and nostalgic), gtaGTA (vVice cCity, sSan aAndreas, and I want to play the V some day), Spyro, Oxygen not Included, cCrash bBandicoot, lThe Legend of zZelda (Ocarina of tTime, A lLink to the pPast, Majora's mMask)

That list is full of nostalgia!

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It continued when I was teenager, something with more absurd and empty anime genres: gore and toxic lovers (terrible, I know).

I don't know if toxic lovers is a genre, but I'll leave it just in case.

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Now I still watching it, it is part of my life, but I'm a bit more reflexive with it: reflect on the stories more; thinking about characters development, elements, dialogues, etc.

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And tThe anime wasn't a bigvery difference,t. I had a higher expectation:s; "surely they will make it better", and I was wrong, a big deception.

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AboutRegarding Boruto, I can't bring myself to like the protagonist, is so... Boruto,. Himawari is a thousand times better than him (Boruto, at least for me, sorry if I wasn't nice with that comment about the anime).

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As I beign said, I read manga too,; that's another hobby.

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And I guess here isthat includeds read comics, although I dohaven't do thatne so for a long time,. I was interested in DC comics,. I even I bought a comic from Spider-man (the paper is so nice, the drawings too, but too expensive...), but with rthe Rebirth everything got mixedthe plots became confusing for me and I lost interest.

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I used to read a lot of books while I was teenager, so much that many consecutive years(so) that I was the best reader in the school for many consecutive years (although I didn't had sove much competition...).

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I want to be someone recognized, a person that gived as someone that writes good history, a good style,ies or has a good drawing style, or does something that people liked and shared because it is good, is nice, or is enough to be enough.

In Spanish, "historia" may mean both history and story, but in English the two are different and not interchangeable, watch out! ;)

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April 4, 2021

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If I had said "anyways I enjoyed them", could be fine? Could be fine "it had many simple and forgettable games"? I wanted to day "except" because it was a memorable game for me. "Excepting" could be a better option?. Thanks.

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April 4, 2021

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When should I use comma or point?

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geminaura

April 4, 2021

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I don't think that's an option to express what I tried to say. Maybe "My first notebook was something great", is better? or "My first notebook was something great, because I could play whatever I wanted"?

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geminaura

April 4, 2021

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Maybe, "My family was the typical dumb poor family that bought useless things instead better food or clothes" Could that be an option?

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geminaura

April 4, 2021

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Not specifically. But I wanted say "series where people is dumb, obsessive, possessive and harmful". "with absurd and empty series", Could that be an option?

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April 4, 2021

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Thanks! Although I still a bit confused about when I must to use "ing" or not. I know that If I'm doing an action I must to use it: I'm watching it. But in other context I'm lost. And I still can't know when I must to use at/on/in, specifically in/on. Is that something that I will learn with practice?

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April 4, 2021

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Thanks! Although I still a bit confused about when I must to use "ing" or not. I know that If I'm doing an action I must to use it: I'm watching it. But in other context I'm lost. And I still can't know when I must to use at/on/in, specifically in/on. Is that something that I will learn with practice?

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geminaura

April 4, 2021

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"wasn't very different", It's okay? "I had higher expectations", It's fine? Why should I delete "a big deception"? "and I was wrong, it was a big deception", It's okay?

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April 4, 2021

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Regarding is a useful word. "I never liked the protagonist", It's fine? When I said "is so... Boruto" I had the intention to emphasize that's someone so unbereable that their own name is synonymous of that kind of personality. In Spanish is a common expression "Sakura is so Sakura", "María is so María". But I know that maybe isn't natural in English. Why should I delete "sorry if I wasn't nice with that comment about the anime"?

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geminaura

April 4, 2021

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It's enough without "being"? When is it neccesary to add "being"?

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geminaura

April 4, 2021

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The "..." is for expression, emphasis. It's not usual in English?

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April 4, 2021

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"so much that I was the best reader at school for many consecutive years", It's better?

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Miya_Miya

April 4, 2021

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"but I enjoyed them, anyway" would be good Okay, if you meant to use "except" the ":" needs to be deleted and I'd rather say "except for" or "with the exceptions of"

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April 4, 2021

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You use a period at the end of a sentence and a comma to distinguish between subordinate clauses. It's sort of hard to explain. "The incorporation of touch was amazing." The subject of this phrase is different to the last phrase. "I was so happy with my first tablet..." again the subject is different. There are cases where you can have two subjects, but then you usually have a word like "but" or "and" or "because", etc.

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April 4, 2021

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Again, I should have deleted "a" in the original sentence, in those first sentences. "A big deception" just didn't seem to fit. I'd say you're either wrong or you're deceived. If you had an expectation that was false, then your expectation was wrong. If the marketing of the anime promised you something that led to this expectation then you were deceived. But you had read the manga and thought they'd change it - so you were wrong, unless the marketing team spoke about big changes. If you want to keep it in, I'd rephrase that part to say, ""surely they will make it better", but I was wrong, they had deceived me." Or maybe you blame yourself for the deception? ""Surely they will make it better", but I was wrong and had deceived myself".

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Miya_Miya

April 4, 2021

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Here I believe you mixed up two phrases. "That being said, ..." and "As I said, ...". There is also "having said that, ...".

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April 4, 2021

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I wouldn't say it emphasizes things in English. It softens what you say and makes you sound hesitant. Its generally used for pauses or "trailing off"/not finishing a sentence for some reason. "As I was saying, .... we need to do something about the leak in the roof." The speaker took a pause to think about what they were saying. "I did it, because I thought that maybe... you'd...". Speaker took a pause and did not complete their sentence. Maybe they're feeling shy or intimidated. "The paper and drawings are nice, but... it's too expensive". We also use "..." as a fill in the blank, or to substitute context that's already known.

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April 4, 2021

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yeah that works too

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geminaura

April 6, 2021

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First time I read "deceived". I understand it a bit better. When should I use "deception"?. "He was a deception for me", could be?

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I guess playing videogames is a Hobby, it's first in my list.


I guess playing video games is a Hhobby, so it's first ion my list. I guess playing video games is a hobby, so it's first on my list.

I'm playing videogames since I was a child, one of my firsts memories is watching the tv while I was playing Spyro in Playstation, I enjoyed it a lot, even now I still loving that game, probably I had 4 or 5 years old then, at 7 y. o.


I'mve been playing video games since I was a child, o. One of my firsts memories is watching the tvTV while I was playing Spyro ion Playstation,. I enjoyed it a lot, e. Even now I still lovinge that game,. I was probably I had 4 or 5 years old then, at 7 y. o. I've been playing video games since I was a child. One of my first memories is watching TV while I was playing Spyro on Playstation. I enjoyed it a lot. Even now I still love that game. I was probably 4 or 5 years old then.

The last sentence doesn't make sense. Were you 4 or 5? Or were you 7?

(if I remember well) my family bought the first computer, before that I played in computers just a few times, it was a big change because I had the possibility to play everyday, I remember: Diner dash (1, 2, 3, 4 and many more), sims 1, solitaire spider, crazy taxi, gta vice city, some games of Barbie, and some collections with boring games.


(iIf I remember well)correctly, my family bought theour first computer, b when I was 7. Before that I had only played ion computers just a few times, i. It was a big change because I had the possibility to play everyday,. I remember: Diner dDash (1, 2, 3, 4 and many more), sSims 1, sSpider Solitaire spider, cCrazy tTaxi, gta vGTA Vice cCity, some games of Barbie games, and some collections withof boring games. If I remember correctly, my family bought our first computer when I was 7. Before that I had only played on computers a few times. It was a big change because I had the possibility to play everyday. I remember: Diner Dash (1, 2, 3, 4 and many more), Sims 1, Spider Solitaire, Crazy Taxi, GTA Vice City, some Barbie games, and some collections of boring games.

I think that 7 year old part is meant to be here.

At that time cell phones wasn't the big deal, anyways it was funny, old nokia was the first that I remember, some sony ericsson (I remember that I wanted to select a wallpaper for the phone, but I didn't know how to read, so I selected the "delete" option withouth know what I did, absolutely confused haha), many simple and forgettable games, except: Grim Oak - Darkest Fear, a red ball to pass levels, some space shooter, snake, a dance game and a game of Alice in wonderland.


At that time, cell phones waseren't thea big deal, anyways it was funny,. An old nNokia wais the first cell phone that I remember, some s. I remember Sony eEricsson models (I remember that I wanted to select a wallpaper for the phone, but I didn't know how to read, so I selected the "delete" option withouth knowing what I did, absolutend got totally confused haha), had many simple and forgettable games, exceptincluding: Grim Oak - Darkest Fear, a red ball to pass levels, some space shooter, sSnake, a dance game and a game of Alice in wWonderland. At that time, cell phones weren't a big deal. An old Nokia is the first cell phone that I remember. I remember Sony Ericsson models (I remember that I wanted to select a wallpaper for the phone, but I didn't know how to read, so I selected the "delete" option without knowing what I did and got totally confused haha) had many simple and forgettable games, including: Grim Oak - Darkest Fear, a red ball to pass levels, some space shooter, Snake, a dance game and a game of Alice in Wonderland.

I'm not talking about a specific age, my remembers are mixed, just I know I was a kid.


I'm not talking about a specific age, my rememberories are mixed,. I just I know I was a kid. I'm not talking about a specific age, my memories are mixed. I just know I was a kid.

Technology advance changed my life, the incorporation of touch was amazing, I was so happy with my first tablet at 14 years old.


The advance of technology advance changed my life, t. The incorporation of touch was amazing,. I was so happy with my first tablet at 14 years old. The advance of technology changed my life. The incorporation of touch was amazing. I was so happy with my first tablet at 14 years old.

My first notebook, everything was something great, the possibility to play whatever I wanted.


My first notebook, everything was something great,Each piece of technology was great, because I had the possibility tof playing whatever I wanted. Each piece of technology was great, because I had the possibility of playing whatever I wanted.

Note: My family was the typical poor that buy useless things while they don't have good food or clothes.


Note: My family was the typical poor that buy useless things while they don't havepoor but we bought useless things instead of good food or clothes. Note: My family was the poor but we bought useless things instead of good food or clothes.

This gives me a strange feeling, is sadness, my past is traumatic, videogames was my refuge...


This gives me a strange feeling, is sadness, m and makes me sad. My past is traumatic, and video games was my refuge... This gives me a strange feeling and makes me sad. My past is traumatic and video games my refuge...

I played to ignore, to control, to distract from a sad reality...


I played to ignore, to control, and to distract from a sad reality... I played to ignore, to control, and to distract from a sad reality...

And now, I'm here, I still playing videogames, but now is only because I like it, ocassionally if I'm too sad or angry I use it as a way to calm down, but isn't usual.


And now, I'm here, I still playing video games, but now is only because I like it, oto. Occassionally, if I'm too sad or angry, I use it as a way to calm down, but isn't usualnot normally. And now, I'm here, still playing video games, but now only because I like to. Occasionally, if I'm too sad or angry, I use it as a way to calm down, but not normally.

I like: RE (1, 2, 3, 4), sims (1, 2, 4), beholder, zoo tycoon 2 (old and nostalgic), gta (vice city, san andreas, I want to play the V some day), Spyro, Oxygen not Included, crash bandicoot, legend of zelda (Ocarina of time, A link to the past, Majora's mask)


I like: RE (1, 2, 3, 4), sThe Sims (1, 2, 4), bBeholder, zZoo tTycoon 2 (old and nostalgic), gtaGTA (vVice cCity, sSan aAndreas, and I want to play the V some day), Spyro, Oxygen not Included, cCrash bBandicoot, lThe Legend of zZelda (Ocarina of tTime, A lLink to the pPast, Majora's mMask) I like: RE (1, 2, 3, 4), The Sims (1, 2, 4), Beholder, Zoo Tycoon 2 (old and nostalgic), GTA (Vice City, San Andreas, and I want to play V some day), Spyro, Oxygen not Included, Crash Bandicoot, The Legend of Zelda (Ocarina of Time, A Link to the Past, Majora's Mask)

That list is full of nostalgia!

Another possible hobbie is watch anime (I'm not otaku... I guess... haha), anime was present in my life since my childhood with pokémon, ranma 1/2, digimon (1 and 4), inuyasha.


Another possible hobbiey is watching anime (I'm not an otaku... I guess... haha), a. Anime was present in my life since my childhood with pPokémon, rRanma 1/2, dDigimon (1 and 4), iand Inuyasha. Another possible hobby is watching anime (I'm not an otaku... I guess... haha). Anime was present in my life since my childhood with Pokémon, Ranma 1/2, Digimon (1 and 4), and Inuyasha.

It continued when I was teenager, something more absurd and empty: gore and toxic lovers (terrible, I know).


It continued when I was teenager, something with more absurd and empty anime genres: gore and toxic lovers (terrible, I know). It continued when I was teenager with more absurd and empty anime genres: gore and toxic lovers (terrible, I know).

I don't know if toxic lovers is a genre, but I'll leave it just in case.

Now I still watching it, is part of my life, but I'm a bit more reflexive with it: thinking about characters development, elements, dialogues, etc.


Now I still watching it, it is part of my life, but I'm a bit more reflexive with it: reflect on the stories more; thinking about characters development, elements, dialogues, etc. Now I still watch it, it is part of my life, but I reflect on the stories more; thinking about characters development, elements, dialogues, etc.

I loved Full metal alchemist:Brotherhood, I liked beastars, shingeki no kyojin, boku no hero.


I loved Full mMetal aAlchemist: Brotherhood, and I liked bBeastars, sShingeki no kKyojin, bBoku no hHero. I loved Full Metal Alchemist: Brotherhood and I liked Beastars, Shingeki no Kyojin, Boku no Hero.

Yakusoku no neverland wasn't exactly what I wanted, I read the manga, I ended it, honestly it wasted a lot of potential!


Yakusoku no nNeverland wasn't exactly what I wanted,. I read the manga, I ended it, and honestly it wasted a lot of potential! Yakusoku no Neverland wasn't exactly what I wanted. I read the manga and honestly it wasted a lot of potential!

It was so great with gold pond arc, but then... Just a simple and "happy end", they wasted the potential of Isabella and Emma in this.


It was so great with gold pond arc, but then... Just it just had a simple and "happy end", ting". They wasted the potential of Isabella and Emma in this. series It was so great with gold pond arc, but then it just had a simple "happy ending". They wasted the potential of Isabella and Emma in this series

(I'm talking about the manga).


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And the anime wasn't a big difference, I had a higher expectation: "surely they will make it better", and I was wrong, a big deception.


And tThe anime wasn't a bigvery difference,t. I had a higher expectation:s; "surely they will make it better", and I was wrong, a big deception. The anime wasn't a very different. I had a higher expectations; "surely they will make it better", and I was wrong.

I wans't interested in Naruto when I was young, but my boyfriend saw it many times, and that's how I watched it (not all, but the most part), I really liked many characters (except Sasuke and Sakura, with S of Super-unbearable) specially Lee.


I wans't interested in Naruto when I was young, but my boyfriend saw it many times, and that's how I ended up watcheding it (not all, but the most part),. I really liked many characters (except Sasuke and Sakura, with S of Super-unbearable) , especially Lee. I wans't interested in Naruto when I was young, but my boyfriend saw it many times, and that's how I ended up watching it (not all, but the most part). I really liked many characters (except Sasuke and Sakura, with S of Super-unbearable), especially Lee.

About Boruto, I can't like the protagonist, is so... Boruto, Himawari is a thousand times better than him (at least for me, sorry if I wasn't nice with that comment about the anime)


AboutRegarding Boruto, I can't bring myself to like the protagonist, is so... Boruto,. Himawari is a thousand times better than him (Boruto, at least for me, sorry if I wasn't nice with that comment about the anime). Regarding Boruto, I can't bring myself to like the protagonist. Himawari is a thousand times better than Boruto, at least for me.

As I beign said, I read manga too, that's another hobby.


As I beign said, I read manga too,; that's another hobby. As I said, I read manga too; that's another hobby.

And I guess here is included read comics, although I don't do that for a long time, I was interested in DC comics, even I bought a comic from Spider-man (the paper is so nice, the draws too, but too expensive...), but with rebirth everything got mixed for me and I lost interest.


And I guess here isthat includeds read comics, although I dohaven't do thatne so for a long time,. I was interested in DC comics,. I even I bought a comic from Spider-man (the paper is so nice, the drawings too, but too expensive...), but with rthe Rebirth everything got mixedthe plots became confusing for me and I lost interest. And I guess that includes read comics, although I haven't done so for a long time. I was interested in DC comics. I even bought a comic from Spider-man (the paper is so nice, the drawings too, but too expensive), but with the Rebirth the plots became confusing for me and I lost interest.

I used to read a lot of books while I was teenager, so much that many consecutive years I was the best reader in the school (although I didn't had so much competition...).


I used to read a lot of books while I was teenager, so much that many consecutive years(so) that I was the best reader in the school for many consecutive years (although I didn't had sove much competition...). I used to read a lot of books while I was teenager, so much (so) that I was the best reader in school for many consecutive years (although I didn't have much competition).

I remember how people talked about "the weirdo that reads book in the library", well kids, library is for read books not play and scream, neither use it as a personal room.


I remember how people used to talked about "the weirdo that reads book in the library", w. Well, kids, the library is for reading books not playing and scream, neitheing, or use it as a personal room. I remember people used to talk about "the weirdo that reads book in the library". Well, kids, the library is for reading books not playing and screaming, or use as a personal room.

But there was too people that admired it, above all because I was really faster reading.


But there was toere also people that admired it, above allme, because I wascould read really faster reading. But there were also people that admired me, because I could read really fast.

Sometimes the school did some speed read tests, so they gived to you a paper with words and estimated how fast you read per minute, I ended the paper many seconds before the time was over, even I had enough time to say "I finished" and see how the teacher was impressed.


Sometimes the school did some speed read tests, so they gived to you a. They would give you a piece of paper with words and estimated how fast you read per minute,. I ended the paper many seconds before the time was over,ran out. I even I had enough time to say "I finished" and see how impressed the teacher was impressed. Sometimes the school did some speed read tests. They would give you a piece of paper with words and estimate how fast you read per minute. I ended the paper many seconds before the time ran out. I even had enough time to say "I finished" and see how impressed the teacher was.

But it wasn't the big deal, faster isn't better, my comprehension and memory for books is terrible, I just read because it was a funny way to distract from the world withouth a computer.


But it wasn't thea big deal, f. Faster isn't (necessarily) better, m. My comprehension and memory for books is terrible,. I just read because it was a funny way to distract myself from the world withouthhen I didn't have a computer. But it wasn't a big deal. Faster isn't (necessarily) better. My comprehension and memory for books is terrible. I just read because it was a funny way to distract myself from the world when I didn't have a computer.

I still enjoying reading, but I try to don't buy books (better a PDF).


I still enjoying reading, but I try to don'tnot to buy books (PDFs are better a PDF). I still enjoying reading, but I try not to buy books (PDFs are better).

Write is another hobby although I don't do it daily, only if I'm "inspired" in some way.


Writeing is another hobbyone of my hobbies, although I don't do it daily, only if I'm "inspired" in some way. Writing is another one of my hobbies, although I don't do it daily, only if I'm "inspired" in some way.

But in general are sad and tragic histories, marked for my past and my sad vision of the world.


But in general ar, I write sad and tragic histories, marked forbecause of my past and my sad vision of the world. But in general, I write sad and tragic stories, because of my past and my sad vision of the world.

Yesterday I wrote a poem in Spanish, I'm gonna put it in another post because this is too long, I don't think someone will want to correct this...


Yesterday I wrote a poem in Spanish,. I'm gonna put it in another post because this is too long,. I don't think someone will want to correct this... Yesterday I wrote a poem in Spanish. I'm gonna put it in another post because this is too long. I don't think someone will want to correct this...

;)

And I like to draw, I'm not the best but I practice sometimes, I learned from videos and taking photos of myself in a specific position to know how body and clothes are in that way.


And I like to draw,. I'm not the best but I practice sometimes,. I learned from videos and taking photos of myself in a specific position to know hosee/learn how to draw bodyies and clothes are in that wayposition. And I like to draw. I'm not the best but I practice sometimes. I learn from videos and taking photos of myself in a specific position to see/learn how to draw bodies and clothes in that position.

I want to found my personal style some day, maybe publish.


I want to fouind my personal style some day, and maybe publish. I want to find my personal style some day and maybe publish.

So, my principal hobbies are: 1) Videogames 2)Watch anime 3)Read (manga, books, comics) 4)Write 5)Draw


So, my principal hobbies are: 1) VPlaying video games 2) Watching anime 3) Reading (manga, books, comics) 4) Writeing 5) Drawing So, my principal hobbies are: 1) Playing video games 2) Watching anime 3) Reading (manga, books, comics) 4) Writing 5) Drawing

The noun form of verbs is usually the "-ing" form.

Honestly, with all my hobbies I want to do something, I mean I want to write a book, make my own comic, work in videogames development.


Honestly, with all my hobbies I want to do something, I mean I want to like writeing a book, makeing my own comic, work indeveloping/designing video games development. Honestly, with all my hobbies I want to do something like writing a book, making my own comic, developing/designing video games development.

the last bit could be "working in video game development".

I want to be someone recognized, a person that gived a good history, a good style, something that people liked and shared because is good, is nice, is enough to be enough.


I want to be someone recognized, a person that gived as someone that writes good history, a good style,ies or has a good drawing style, or does something that people liked and shared because it is good, is nice, or is enough to be enough. I want to be recognized as someone that writes good stories or has a good drawing style, or does something that people like and share because it is good, nice, or is enough to be enough.

In Spanish, "historia" may mean both history and story, but in English the two are different and not interchangeable, watch out! ;)

(Yes, "enough to be enough" was intentional, not a error)


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