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An Ancient Village

There are three ancient villages on my Mid-Autumn-Holiday hiking trail in Anhui Province.

The first one is a village built near the top of a mountain. Its biggest feature is the buildings made of rammed earth.

It's said that first people came here from Henan Province to avoid a war. It was more than 800 years ago. At that time, it was difficult to transport materials up to the mountain. As a result, the people developed a method to construct houses using only the materials available in the mountains.

You can find some pictures here:https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/uOFKkbZIBDolpRovKzfNQw and a video here:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ELnP2vcdWmM

I really love this small village. It's cozy and relaxing, even just walking along the small stone path.


我中秋节在安徽的徒步路线上,有三个古村落。

第一个是建在山顶附近的一个村庄。它最大的特点是用夯土建造的土楼。

据说第一批村民是从河南来到这里的,为了躲避战乱。那是800多年前的事了。当时,把物资运到山上是很困难的。因此,人们发明了一种方法,只使用山上可用的材料来建造房屋。

你可以在这里找到一些图片:https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/uOFKkbZIBDolpRovKzfNQw和视频:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ELnP2vcdWmM

我真的很喜欢这个小村庄。即使只是沿着小石板路漫步其中,也是舒适轻松的。

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An Ancient Village

The first one is a village built near the top of a mountain.

It was more than 800 years ago.

It's cozy and relaxing, even just walking along the small stone path.

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At that time, it was difficult to transport materials up to the mountain.

As a result, the people developed a method to construct houses using only the materials available in the mountains.

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An Ancient Village

At that time, it was difficult to transport materials up to the mountain.

You can find some pictures here:https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/uOFKkbZIBDolpRovKzfNQw and a video here:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ELnP2vcdWmM I really love this small village.

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An Ancient Village

It was more than 800 years ago.

As a result, the people developed a method to construct houses using only the materials available in the mountains.

You can find some pictures here:https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/uOFKkbZIBDolpRovKzfNQw and a video here:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ELnP2vcdWmM I really love this small village.

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An Ancient Village


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There are three ancient villages on my Mid-Autumn-Holiday hiking trail in Anhui Province.


There are three ancient villages on my Mid-Autumn- Holiday hiking trail in Anhui P/the province of Anhui. There are three ancient villages on my Mid-Autumn Holiday hiking trail in Anhui/the province of Anhui.

There are three ancient villages on my Mid-Autumn-H holiday hiking trail in Anhui Province. There are three ancient villages on my Mid-Autumn holiday hiking trail in Anhui Province.

Mid might also be lowercase.

There are three ancient villages on my Mid-Autumn-Holiday hiking trail in Anhui Provincealong the hiking trail I traveled on in Anhui Province during the mid-autumn holiday . There are three ancient villages along the hiking trail I traveled on in Anhui Province during the mid-autumn holiday .

COMPARE: (A) on my Mid-Autumn-Holiday hiking trail → 如果您是这条小路的主人。 (B on/along the mid-autumn-holiday hiking trail → 如果您不是小路的主人。

There areI visited three ancient villages on my Mid-Autumn-Holiday hiking trail in Anhui Province. I visited three ancient villages on my Mid-Autumn-Holiday hiking trail in Anhui Province.

The first one is a village built near the top of a mountain.


The first one iwas a village built near the top of a mountain top. The first one was a village built near a mountain top.

注意:用过去时更好,因为您的旅行已经结束。

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Its biggest feature is the buildings made of rammed earth.


Its biggest feature is the buildings made of rammed earth. Its biggest feature is the buildings made of rammed earth.

The biggest feature of the buildings are made of rammed earth.

Its main feature is the buildings made of rammed earth./ Its biggest feature is the buildings made of rammed earth. Its main feature is the buildings made of rammed earth./ Its biggest feature is the building made of rammed earth.

biggest is more like largest in this context. unless you mean there is only one building?

Its biggest feature is that the buildings are made of rammed earth. Its biggest feature is that the buildings are made of rammed earth.

Possible "from rammed earth", but I don't know what you mean by rammed earth.

Its biggest feature is the buildings made of更平滑: Its most noteworthy feature was its rammed earth buildings. 更平滑: Its most noteworthy feature was its rammed earth buildings.

Its biggestmost amazing feature is the buildings made of rammed earthclay. Its most amazing feature is the buildings made of clay.

🧱, I'm not sure what you mean there.

It's said that first people came here from Henan Province to avoid a war.


It's said that its first peopleresidents came here from Henan Province to avoidto flee a war. It's said that its first residents came here from Henan to flee a war.

in English we do not usually say "province" after a province name, better to leave it out here unless it's very formal. they "fled" a war because it was already happening when they left. if they "avoid" a war it means they don't want a war to happen

It's said that firstthe original people that came here fromcame from the Henan Province to avoid a war. It's said that the original people that came here came from the Henan Province to avoid a war.

"the first people" is a little awkward since first is more used to compare things to the second or the third people, which does not really make sense here.

把后面两句话合并成一句话,就像这样: It's said that first people came there from Henan Province to avoid a war over 800 years ago. 把后面两句话合并成一句话,就像这样: It's said that first people came there from Henan Province to avoid a war over 800 years ago.

It's said that the first people who came here where from Henan Province to avoid a war. It's said that the first people who came here where from Henan Province to avoid a war.

It was more than 800 years ago.


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IThat was more than 800 years ago. That was more than 800 years ago.

"that" is used when referencing events, but "it" is okay.

It was more than 800 years ago.[SEE THE PREVIOUS SENTENCE] [SEE THE PREVIOUS SENTENCE]

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At that time, it was difficult to transport materials up to the mountain.


At thate time, it was difficult to transport materials up to the mountain. At the time, it was difficult to transport materials up the mountain.

up to the mountain means it was transported upwards and arrived at the mountain up the mountain means it was transported to the top of the mountain

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As a result, the people developed a method to construct houses using only the materials available in the mountains.


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As a result, the people developed a method to construct houses using only the materials available ion the mountains. As a result, the people developed a method to construct houses using only the materials available on the mountains.

The comma is not needed but adds style.

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As a result, the people developed a method to construct houses using only the materials available in the mountains. As a result, the people developed a method to construct houses using only the materials available in the mountains.

It's cozy and relaxing, even just walking along the small stone path.


It's cozy and relaxing, even just walking along the small stone path. It's cozy and relaxing walking along the small stone path.

It's cozy and relaxing, e更好的: Even just walking along the small stone path was cozy and relaxing. 更好的: Even just walking along the small stone path was cozy and relaxing.

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You can find some pictures here:https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/uOFKkbZIBDolpRovKzfNQw and a video here:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ELnP2vcdWmM I really love this small village.


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You can find some pictures here: https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/uOFKkbZIBDolpRovKzfNQw and a video here:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ELnP2vcdWmM I really love this small village. You can find some pictures here: https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s/uOFKkbZIBDolpRovKzfNQw and a video here:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ELnP2vcdWmM I really love this small village.

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