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English writting practice Day one

Today I'm starting to write in English. I'm willing to improve my language skills, I'm 40 years old and my contact with English began in my teens, I'm self-taught but about 2021 I learned English formally on an online school. Since then, I've become passionate for learning other languages, on that same school I've learned French and a little bit of Italian and a tiny little bit of Spanish. Before that I already knew a tiny little bit of Japanese due to my interest in the culture, mostly anime, manga, music and folklore.
I have a very good listening because I consume a very large quantity of content in English, so I had too much input but never had much output.
That said, it is very difficult for me to express my opinions and thoughts by writing or speaking. I'm not very good at it, but I'm willing to improve. This text is my very first serious try, so please for those who will read this, bare with me.
Thank you very much for your time.

Corrections

English wWritting pPractice - Day oOne

A lot of people will correct all sentence case titles to title case, but I actually think it's ok in casual settings to use sentence case in titles if the title is a sentence. However, this title is not a sentence, so it should be title case.

"Day One" is also a little separate from "English Writing Practice", you've sort of pushed two noun phrases right next to each other, so it sounds better to use something like a dash to separate that in a title.

Today I'm starting to write in English.

I'm willing to improve my language skills, I'm 40 years old and my contact with English began in my teens,. I'm self-taught, but abroutnd 2021 I learned English formally onat an online school.

This reads a little better with more breaks - broke it into two sentences and added a comma to pause.

Since then, I've (found a passion/become passionate) for learning other languages, onat that same school I've learned French and a little bit of Italian and a tiny little bit of Spanish.

"found a passion for" is a little bit more natural and advanced of a phrase, but "become passionate for" is acceptable too.

I have a very good listening ability because I consume a very large quantity of content in English, so I had too much input but never had much output.

This text is my very first serious tryattempt, so please for those who will read this, beare with me.

to bare - to expose, reveal, show off (especially parts of your body)
to bear - to endure, tolerate, have patience for

Both pronounced the same though.

English writting practice Day one

I'm willing to improve my language skills,. I'm 40 years old and my contact with English began in my teens,; I'm self-taught, but about 2021 I learned English formally oin an online school.

Since then, I've become passionate for learning other languages, o in that same school, where I've learned French and, a little bit of Italian and a tiny little bit of Spanish.

Before that, I already knew a tiny, little bit of Japanese due to my interest in the culture, which is mostly anime, manga, music and folklore.

Since you already used "tiny, little bit" you could try using something different like "very small amount" to keep thing varied and from sounding repetitive.

I have a very (or really) good listening skills because I consume a very large quantity of content in English,; so I had too much input, but never had much output.

I'm not very good at it, but I'm willing to improve.

End the previous sentence with a command and join this one with it.

This text is my very first serious try, so please, for those who will read this, bare with me.

Feedback

Good job!
You use 'very' a lot, so maybe try to replace it with other words like 'really,' 'extremely,' and others with similar meaning.
I have used Langcorrect for only a short while, but I find that it is already helping me get better.
Hope you'll enjoy writing in English!
Good luck!

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RodrigoFM

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I love the explanation and tips.
Much appreciated

English writting practice Dday one

Today I'm starting to write in English.

I'm willing to improve my language skills,. I'm 40 years old and my contact with English began in my teens,. I'm self-taught but abroutnd 2021 I learned English formally onthrough an online school.

Since then, I've becomedeveloped a passionate for learning other languages, onand through that same school I've learned French and, a little bit of Italian, and a tiny little bit of Spanish.

Before that I already knew a tiny little bit of Japanese due to my interest in the culture, mostly through anime, manga, music and folklore.

I have a'm very good at listening because I consume a very large quantity of content in English, so I've had too mucha lot of input but never (really) had much output.

That said, it is very difficult for me to express my opinions and thoughts by writing or speaking.

I'm not very good at it, but I'm willing to improve.

This text is my very first serious try, so please for those who will read this, beare with me.

Thank you very much for your time.

Feedback

I wish you the best on your journey with writing in English!

Very good first attempt, and I hope you continue writing here and feel motivated to continuously improve :)

We're all learning here, so never feel bad to make mistakes (it's what I tell myself, so I thought it useful to tell you too).

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RodrigoFM

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Is always good to learn from our mistakes, and I appreciated your help.
Thank you.

English writting practice Day one


English writting practice Dday one

English writting practice Day one

English wWritting pPractice - Day oOne

A lot of people will correct all sentence case titles to title case, but I actually think it's ok in casual settings to use sentence case in titles if the title is a sentence. However, this title is not a sentence, so it should be title case. "Day One" is also a little separate from "English Writing Practice", you've sort of pushed two noun phrases right next to each other, so it sounds better to use something like a dash to separate that in a title.

Today I'm starting to write in English.


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Today I'm starting to write in English.

I'm willing to improve my language skills, I'm 40 years old and my contact with English began in my teens, I'm self-taught but about 2021 I learned English formally on an online school.


I'm willing to improve my language skills,. I'm 40 years old and my contact with English began in my teens,. I'm self-taught but abroutnd 2021 I learned English formally onthrough an online school.

I'm willing to improve my language skills,. I'm 40 years old and my contact with English began in my teens,; I'm self-taught, but about 2021 I learned English formally oin an online school.

I'm willing to improve my language skills, I'm 40 years old and my contact with English began in my teens,. I'm self-taught, but abroutnd 2021 I learned English formally onat an online school.

This reads a little better with more breaks - broke it into two sentences and added a comma to pause.

Since then, I've become passionate for learning other languages, on that same school I've learned French and a little bit of Italian and a tiny little bit of Spanish.


Since then, I've becomedeveloped a passionate for learning other languages, onand through that same school I've learned French and, a little bit of Italian, and a tiny little bit of Spanish.

Since then, I've become passionate for learning other languages, o in that same school, where I've learned French and, a little bit of Italian and a tiny little bit of Spanish.

Since then, I've (found a passion/become passionate) for learning other languages, onat that same school I've learned French and a little bit of Italian and a tiny little bit of Spanish.

"found a passion for" is a little bit more natural and advanced of a phrase, but "become passionate for" is acceptable too.

Before that I already knew a tiny little bit of Japanese due to my interest in the culture, mostly anime, manga, music and folklore.


Before that I already knew a tiny little bit of Japanese due to my interest in the culture, mostly through anime, manga, music and folklore.

Before that, I already knew a tiny, little bit of Japanese due to my interest in the culture, which is mostly anime, manga, music and folklore.

Since you already used "tiny, little bit" you could try using something different like "very small amount" to keep thing varied and from sounding repetitive.

I have a very good listening because I consume a very large quantity of content in English, so I had too much input but never had much output.


I have a'm very good at listening because I consume a very large quantity of content in English, so I've had too mucha lot of input but never (really) had much output.

I have a very (or really) good listening skills because I consume a very large quantity of content in English,; so I had too much input, but never had much output.

I have a very good listening ability because I consume a very large quantity of content in English, so I had too much input but never had much output.

That said, it is very difficult for me to express my opinions and thoughts by writing or speaking.


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I'm not very good at it, but I'm willing to improve.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm not very good at it, but I'm willing to improve.

End the previous sentence with a command and join this one with it.

This text is my very first serious try, so please for those who will read this, bare with me.


This text is my very first serious try, so please for those who will read this, beare with me.

This text is my very first serious try, so please, for those who will read this, bare with me.

This text is my very first serious tryattempt, so please for those who will read this, beare with me.

to bare - to expose, reveal, show off (especially parts of your body) to bear - to endure, tolerate, have patience for Both pronounced the same though.

Thank you very much for your time.


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