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Movie review "A house made on splinters".

I am sure people who like the movie industry heard about yesterday's Oscar ceremony. First of all, I want to tell you my opinion of the winner "Everything. Everywhere. All at once". Nobody asks me, but I will tell.
It is just not my type of movie. For sure director's work is amazing, the actor's play was cool, the animation was done on a high level. But it is still fantasy. I have one thing that I liked, this is the actor's speeches. One of the main actors said he spent one year in a refugee camp (this is very common for me), and he had never minded that he will hold an Oscar-like award for his work. These words give me a big hope that every dream can become reality.
The second one is the winner of the nomination for "Documentary movie". I have no desire to talk about the winner because it was a big mistake. But it will be a big pleasure to tell you about one of the applicants, the movie "A house made of splinters".
This picture describes a short part of a big work children's shelter that stay on the border of war. I am a person without children and even my hurt can't be indifferent to this story. A lot of scenes show me what a huge closeness can be between a child and his parents. And it doesn't matter how parents can be tough on their children. Time goes and parents don't come, children go to foster families and siblings stay separate.
When I watched this movie everything frosted inside me. "A house made of splinters" is the best documentary movie I have ever watched.

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I am sure people who like the movie industry heard about yesterday's Oscar ceremony.

First of all, I want to tell you my opinion of the winner "Everything.

Everywhere.

All at once".

It is just not my type of movie.

But it is still fantasy.

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tonyabirds

March 15, 2023

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I am sure people who like the movie industry heard about yesterday's Oscar ceremony.

It is just not my type of movie.

But it is still fantasy.

These words give me a big hope that every dream can become reality.

The second one is the winner of the nomination for "Documentary movie".

I have no desire to talk about the winner because it was a big mistake.

This picture describes a short part of a big work children's shelter that stay on the border of war.

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tonyabirds

March 14, 2023

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Movie review "A house made on splinters".


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I am sure people who like the movie industry heard about yesterday's Oscar ceremony.


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First of all, I want to tell you my opinion of the winner "Everything.


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Everywhere.


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All at once".


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Nobody asks me, but I will tell.


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Nobody asksed me, but I will tellsay it anyway. Nobody asked me, but I will say it anyway.

It is just not my type of movie.


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For sure director's work is amazing, the actor's play was cool, the animation was done on a high level.


For sure the director's work is amazing, the actor's playacting was cool, and the animation was done on a high level. For sure the director's work is amazing, the actor's acting was cool and the animation was done on a high level.

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But it is still fantasy.


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I have one thing that I liked, this is the actor's speeches.


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One of the main actors said he spent one year in a refugee camp (this is very common for me), and he had never minded that he will hold an Oscar-like award for his work.


One of the main actors said he spent one year in a refugee camp (this is very common for me), and he had never minded that he will holdould not earn an Oscar-like award for his work. One of the main actors said he spent one year in a refugee camp (this is very common for me) and he had never minded that he would not earn an Oscar-like award for his work.

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These words give me a big hope that every dream can become reality.


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These words give me a big hope that every dream can become a reality. These words give me big hope that every dream can become a reality.

The second one is the winner of the nomination for "Documentary movie".


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I have no desire to talk about the winner because it was a big mistake.


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I have no desire to talk about the winner because ithat was a big mistake. I have no desire to talk about the winner because that was a big mistake.

But it will be a big pleasure to tell you about one of the applicants, the movie "A house made of splinters".


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This picture describes a short part of a big work children's shelter that stay on the border of war.


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I am a person without children and even my hurt can't be indifferent to this story.


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A lot of scenes show me what a huge closeness can be between a child and his parents.


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And it doesn't matter how tough parents can be tough on their children. And it doesn't matter how tough parents can be on their children.

Time goes and parents don't come, children go to foster families and siblings stay separate.


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When I watched this movie everything frosted inside me.


When I watched this movie, everything frostedze inside me. When I watched this movie, everything froze inside me.

When I watched this movie, everything frosted inside me. When I watched this movie, everything frosted inside me.

"A house made of splinters" is the best documentary movie I have ever watched.


"A hHouse mMade of sSplinters" is the best documentary movie I have ever watched. "A House Made of Splinters" is the best documentary movie I have ever watched.

"A hHouse mMade of sSplinters" is the best documentary movie I have ever watched. "A House Made of Splinters" is the best documentary movie I have ever watched.

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