June 21, 2020
Japanese customs
In Japan, you have to paste your photo when go on job hunting. So today I went to take a picture for that. It’s strange, isn’t it? Don't need a photo to see what's inside that counts! The only thing I dislike about Japan. I want to finish job hunting soon and travel abroad. I want to work so that I can run around the world.
日本では就職活動をする時、自分の写真を貼り付けなければなりません。だから、私もそのために写真を撮ってきました。おかしいと思いませんか？中身を見るのだったら、写真なんて必要ないと思います。唯一、私が日本の嫌いなとこです。早く就職活動を終わらせて、海外を旅したいです。世界中を駆け回れる仕事がしたいなぁ。
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In Japan, you have to pastrovide your photo when go on job hunting, so today I went to take a picture for that.
In Japan, you have to provide your photo when job hunting, so today I went to take a picture for that.
I am guessing "paste" you mean provide, meaning to make available.
"Job hunting" is an activity like cooking or cleaning, so no verb is necessary, though you can write "going job hunting".
"so" is a coordinating conjunction that connects two clauses together with the use of a comma. Please refer to FANBOYS (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so).
In Japan, you have to pastrovide your photo when go on job hunting.you apply for a job
In Japan, you have to provide your photo when you apply for a job
You could even say 'You have to include a photo on your resume/CV' when you apply for a job'.
So today, I went to take a picture for that. So today, I went to take a picture for that.
DYou don't need a photo to see. It's what's inside that counts!
You don't need a photo. It's what's inside that counts!
This is one of the only things I dislike about Japan. This is one of the only things I dislike about Japan.
I think this is what you wanted to say
I want to work so that I can runtravel around the world.
I want to work so that I can travel around the world.
You wouldn't say 'run around the world', it sounds a bit strange, 'travel' is the verb which fits here!
June 21, 2020
thanks a lot!
Japanese customs
In Japan, you have to pasteut your photo (on your CV?) when you go on job hunting.
In Japan, you have to put your photo (on your CV?) when you go job hunting.
I wasn't quite sure what you meant here. You tend to put your photo on something.
So today, I went to take agot my picture taken for that.
So today, I got my picture taken for that.
It’s strange, isn’t it?
D You don't need a photo to see that it's what's inside that counts!
You don't need a photo to see that it's what's inside that counts!
TheIt's only thing I dislike about Japan.
It's only thing I dislike about Japan.
I want to work so that I can runtravel around the world.
I want to work so that I can travel around the world.
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This was a good attempt. Have a look at the basic structure of sentences as some of yours were missing subjects. (I, you, it).
Japanese customs
In Japan, you have to pastinclude your photo when go onyou go job hunting.
In Japan, you have to include your photo when you go job hunting.
So today, I went to take a picture for that. So today, I went to take a picture for that.
It’s strange, isn’t it?
DYou don't need a photo to see what's inside t, which is what counts!
You don't need a photo to see what's inside, which is what counts!
You could drop the subject if you’re writing informally and what to achieve a certain style, in this specific example, but generally you need the subject for the verb.
Theis is only thing I dislike about Japan.
This is only thing I dislike about Japan.
I want to finish job hunting soon and travel abroad.
I want to workhave a job so that I can runtravel around the world.
I want to have a job so that I can travel around the world.
“Work” is okay, but “job” sounds better here to me as you’re not describing a career-specific goal and the emphasis is on earning money.
June 21, 2020
thanks a lot!
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In Japan, you have to paste your photo when go on job hunting.
In Japan, you have to
In Japan, you have to p I wasn't quite sure what you meant here. You tend to put your photo on something.
In Japan, you have to p You could even say 'You have to include a photo on your resume/CV' when you apply for a job'.
In Japan, you have to p I am guessing "paste" you mean provide, meaning to make available. "Job hunting" is an activity like cooking or cleaning, so no verb is necessary, though you can write "going job hunting". "so" is a coordinating conjunction that connects two clauses together with the use of a comma. Please refer to FANBOYS (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so). |
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So today I went to take a picture for that. So today, I went to take a picture for that. So today, I went to take a picture for that.
So today, I So today, I went to take a picture for that. So today, I went to take a picture for that. |
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It’s strange, isn’t it? This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Don't need a photo to see what's inside that counts!
You could drop the subject if you’re writing informally and what to achieve a certain style, in this specific example, but generally you need the subject for the verb.
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The only thing I dislike about Japan.
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This is one of the only things I dislike about Japan. This is one of the only things I dislike about Japan. I think this is what you wanted to say |
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I want to finish job hunting soon and travel abroad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to work so that I can run around the world.
I want to “Work” is okay, but “job” sounds better here to me as you’re not describing a career-specific goal and the emphasis is on earning money.
I want to work so that I can
I want to work so that I can You wouldn't say 'run around the world', it sounds a bit strange, 'travel' is the verb which fits here! |
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