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zanyzoe

Nov. 12, 2025

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-Create a story with the following words: aloofness, utter, deceive, to wander, hatred, franckly, to waste, seek, thoughtless, spring, indolent and rather.-

When I was younger, I met a lonely and indolent man!
His aloofness made him frankly thoughtless.
In reality, he was rather shy but his behaviour deceived us.
Some people thought he had hatred for them because he spoke with no one.
He is wasted his time to wander on his garden and if someone tried to talk to him, he was springing and uttered strange noises.

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When I was younger, I met a lonely and indolent man!

In reality, he was rather shy but his behaviour deceived us.

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zanyzoe

Nov. 20, 2025

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-Create a story with the following words: aloofness, utter, deceive, to wander, hatred, franckly, to waste, seek, thoughtless, spring, indolent and rather.-

When I was younger, I met a lonely and indolent man!

His aloofness made him frankly thoughtless.

In reality, he was rather shy but his behaviour deceived us.

Some people thought he had hatred for them because he spoke with no one.

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zanyzoe

Nov. 13, 2025

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-Create a story with the following words: aloofness, utter, deceive, to wander, hatred, franckly, to waste, seek, thoughtless, spring, indolent and rather.-


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-Create a story with the following words: aloofness, utter, deceive, to wander, hatred, franckly, to waste, seek, thoughtless, spring, indolent and rather.- -Create a story with the following words: aloofness, utter, deceive, to wander, hatred, frankly, to waste, seek, thoughtless, spring, indolent and rather.-

When I was younger, I met an lonely and indolent man!


His aloofness made him frankly thoughtless.


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His aloofness frankly made him frankly thoughtless. His aloofness frankly made him thoughtless.

This word order is more natural

In reality, he was rather shy but his behaviour deceived us.


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Some people thought he had hatred for them because he spoke with no one.


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Some people thought he hadit was because of his hatred for them becausethat he spoke with no one. Some people thought it was because of his hatred for them that he spoke with no one.

He is wasted his time to wander on his garden and if someone tried to talk to him, he was springing and uttered strange noises.


He is wasted his time to wander oing in his garden, and if someone tried to talk to him, he was springisprang and uttered strange noises. He wasted his time wandering in his garden, and if someone tried to talk to him, he sprang and uttered strange noises.

double check your tenses

He is wasted his time to wander oing in his garden and if someone tried to talk to him, he wasould springing up and uttered strange noises. He wasted his time wandering in his garden and if someone tried to talk to him, he would spring up and utter strange noises.

I know you had to use the word "spring" here but I would probably say "jump up" in this case

When I was younger, I met a lonely and indolent man!


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