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Jealousy, Envy and Respect

I listened to a podcast about jealousy, envy and respect.

Envy is a kind of instinct that I want to get other's things.

When I have an envy of some things, I can act between positive or negative way.

If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makes my mind destroy.

If I admire it, the positive mind makes me better.

Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respect.

However, keeping peaceful mind, I need to do more positive way.

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Jealousy, Envy and Respect

I listened to a podcast about jealousy, envy and respect.

Envy is a kind of instinct that I want to gewhat other's thingshave.

When I have an envy of some thingsexperience envy, I can act between positively or negative waly.

If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makedestroys my mind destroy.

If I admire it, the positive mindset makes me feel better.

Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to and to instead have respect.

However,To keeping a peaceful mind, I need to dothink in a more positive way.

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Great writing! :)

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 2, 2022

402

고맙습니다!

Jealousy, Envy and Respect

I listened to a podcast about jealousy, envy and respect.

Envy is a kind of instinctfeeling that I want to get other'possess other peoples things.

When I have an envy of some things, I can act betweeneither in a positive or negative way.

If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makes my mind destroy.destroys my mind.

If I admire it, the positive mindact makes mey mind better.

Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, butand to respect.

However, to keeping peaceful a calm mind, I need to doact in a more positive way.

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 2, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

Jealousy, Envy and Respect

I listened to a podcast about jealousy, envy and respect.

Envy is a kind of instinct that I want to get other's thingsfeeling that occurs when I want the things other people have.

You could use "feeling" or "emotion" here. "Instinct" is used more often when the reaction is unconscious and happens quickly, or when you have a gut feeling about a situation.

When I have an envyget envious of some things, I can act between positive oreither react in a positive way, or in a negative way.

"To get envious" or "to be envious" is the passive form of "to envy" in English.
Also, I added "in a positive way" / "in a negative way" to provide more clarity to the sentence.

If I get jealous about itsomething, the negative act finally makes my mind destroycan destroy my mind.

You should "something" rather than "it" as a pronoun here, because you aren't talking about a specific item you are jealous of. You're talking about the concept of being jealous.

If I admire itsomething, the positive mindset makes me better.

Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respect instead.

However, in order to keeping a peaceful mindset, I need to do more positive waythinking, like admiration.

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잘 쓰셨습니다!

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 1, 2022

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너무 고맙습니다. 많이 배웠습니다.

Envy is a kind of instinct that Iemotion that arises when you want to gethave other's things.

When I have an envy'm envious of some things, I can act betweenin a positive or a negative way.

If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makes my mind destroyemotion takes over my mind.

If I admire it, the positive mindfeelings makes me feel better.

Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respectto respect something, instead of becoming jealous.

However, to keeping a peaceful mind, I need to do more things in a positive way.

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Well done :)

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 1, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

Envy is a kind of instinct that Ifeeling that makes you want to gethave other people's things.

When explaining something like an emotion or feeling we use "you".

When I havefeel an envyious of some things, I can act betweenin a positive or negative way.

If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makeity destroys my mind destroy.

If I admire it, the positiveity mind makes me feel better.

Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respect it.

"but to respect" feels like there is another part to the sentence, it ends too soon.

However, to keeping a peaceful mind, I need to dobe more positive way.

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 1, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

Jealousy, Envy and Respect


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Envy is a kind of instinct that I want to get other's things.


Envy is a kind of instinct that Ifeeling that makes you want to gethave other people's things.

When explaining something like an emotion or feeling we use "you".

Envy is a kind of instinct that Iemotion that arises when you want to gethave other's things.

Envy is a kind of instinct that I want to get other's thingsfeeling that occurs when I want the things other people have.

You could use "feeling" or "emotion" here. "Instinct" is used more often when the reaction is unconscious and happens quickly, or when you have a gut feeling about a situation.

Envy is a kind of instinctfeeling that I want to get other'possess other peoples things.

Envy is a kind of instinct that I want to gewhat other's thingshave.

When I have an envy of some things, I can act between positive or negative way.


When I havefeel an envyious of some things, I can act betweenin a positive or negative way.

When I have an envy'm envious of some things, I can act betweenin a positive or a negative way.

When I have an envyget envious of some things, I can act between positive oreither react in a positive way, or in a negative way.

"To get envious" or "to be envious" is the passive form of "to envy" in English. Also, I added "in a positive way" / "in a negative way" to provide more clarity to the sentence.

When I have an envy of some things, I can act betweeneither in a positive or negative way.

When I have an envy of some thingsexperience envy, I can act between positively or negative waly.

If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makes my mind destroy.


If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makeity destroys my mind destroy.

If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makes my mind destroyemotion takes over my mind.

If I get jealous about itsomething, the negative act finally makes my mind destroycan destroy my mind.

You should "something" rather than "it" as a pronoun here, because you aren't talking about a specific item you are jealous of. You're talking about the concept of being jealous.

If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makes my mind destroy.destroys my mind.

If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makedestroys my mind destroy.

If I admire it, the positive mind makes me better.


If I admire it, the positiveity mind makes me feel better.

If I admire it, the positive mindfeelings makes me feel better.

If I admire itsomething, the positive mindset makes me better.

If I admire it, the positive mindact makes mey mind better.

If I admire it, the positive mindset makes me feel better.

Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respect.


Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respect it.

"but to respect" feels like there is another part to the sentence, it ends too soon.

Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respectto respect something, instead of becoming jealous.

Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respect instead.

Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, butand to respect.

Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to and to instead have respect.

However, keeping peaceful mind, I need to do more positive way.


However, to keeping a peaceful mind, I need to dobe more positive way.

However, to keeping a peaceful mind, I need to do more things in a positive way.

However, in order to keeping a peaceful mindset, I need to do more positive waythinking, like admiration.

However, to keeping peaceful a calm mind, I need to doact in a more positive way.

However,To keeping a peaceful mind, I need to dothink in a more positive way.

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