Feb. 1, 2022
I listened to a podcast about jealousy, envy and respect.
Envy is a kind of instinct that I want to get other's things.
When I have an envy of some things, I can act between positive or negative way.
If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makes my mind destroy.
If I admire it, the positive mind makes me better.
Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respect.
However, keeping peaceful mind, I need to do more positive way.
Jealousy, Envy and Respect
I listened to a podcast about jealousy, envy and respect.
Envy is a kind of instinct that I want to gewhat other's thingshave.
When I have an envy of some thingsexperience envy, I can act between positively or negative waly.
If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makedestroys my mind destroy.
If I admire it, the positive mindset makes me feel better.
Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to and to instead have respect.
However,To keeping a peaceful mind, I need to dothink in a more positive way.
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Great writing! :)
Jealousy, Envy and Respect
I listened to a podcast about jealousy, envy and respect.
Envy is a kind of instinctfeeling that I want to get other'possess other peoples things.
When I have an envy of some things, I can act betweeneither in a positive or negative way.
If I get jealous about it, the negative act finally makes my mind destroy.destroys my mind.
If I admire it, the positive mindact makes mey mind better.
Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, butand to respect.
However, to keeping peaceful a calm mind, I need to doact in a more positive way.
Jealousy, Envy and Respect
I listened to a podcast about jealousy, envy and respect.
Envy is a kind of instinct that I want to get other's thingsfeeling that occurs when I want the things other people have.
You could use "feeling" or "emotion" here. "Instinct" is used more often when the reaction is unconscious and happens quickly, or when you have a gut feeling about a situation.
When I have an envyget envious of some things, I can act between positive oreither react in a positive way, or in a negative way.
"To get envious" or "to be envious" is the passive form of "to envy" in English.
Also, I added "in a positive way" / "in a negative way" to provide more clarity to the sentence.
If I get jealous about itsomething, the negative act finally makes my mind destroycan destroy my mind.
You should "something" rather than "it" as a pronoun here, because you aren't talking about a specific item you are jealous of. You're talking about the concept of being jealous.
If I admire itsomething, the positive mindset makes me better.
Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respect instead.
However, in order to keeping a peaceful mindset, I need to do more positive waythinking, like admiration.
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If I admire it, the positive mindfeelings makes me feel better.
Actually, it is very hard not to get jealous, but to respectto respect something, instead of becoming jealous.
However, to keeping a peaceful mind, I need to do more things in a positive way.
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Well done :)
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