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My favorite song

I heard English songs as learning English and feel good.
I'd like to introduce my favorite song.

My Chemical Romance -Teenagers-

This is the song I often hearing recently.
It's cool, heartwarming, and strong.
You should hear it
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k6EQAOmJrbw

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I heardlisten to English songs asfor learning English and to feel good.

"hear" = 聞く, listen to = 聴く, "listen to" is much more natural for an intentional action.

My Chemical Romance - Teenagers-

We don't pair up dashes around titles. You can use a single dash to separate the band name and the song name, but you wouldn't include one after.

This is thea song I have often hearing recently.listened to recently.¶

(Or "This is the song I have recently listened to most")

"the song" implies it's the only song you have listened to. "A song" doesn't have this same exclusive feel. If you want to indicate it's the number 1 song (sort of 最も) then you need a "most" in there.

You should hearlisten to it

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I heardlisten to English songs as a way to learning English and feel good.

This is the song I often hearing've been listening to recently.

You should hearlisten to it

My favorite song

I heardlisten to English songs asto learning English and it feels good.

To listen is generally an intentional act/ an act that requires your attention, while to hear is when you happen to just capture sounds/conversations around you

I'd like to introduce my favorite song.

My Chemical Romance -Teenagers-

Is it by Teenagers or by My Chemical Romance?

This is the song I oflisten hearingto often recently.

You should hearlisten to it

Feedback

bear in mind the distinction between to listen and to hear, good job!

My favorite song


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I heard English songs as learning English and feel good.


I heardlisten to English songs asto learning English and it feels good.

To listen is generally an intentional act/ an act that requires your attention, while to hear is when you happen to just capture sounds/conversations around you

I heardlisten to English songs as a way to learning English and feel good.

I heardlisten to English songs asfor learning English and to feel good.

"hear" = 聞く, listen to = 聴く, "listen to" is much more natural for an intentional action.

I'd like to introduce my favorite song.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My Chemical Romance -Teenagers-


My Chemical Romance -Teenagers-

Is it by Teenagers or by My Chemical Romance?

My Chemical Romance - Teenagers-

We don't pair up dashes around titles. You can use a single dash to separate the band name and the song name, but you wouldn't include one after.

This is the song I often hearing recently.


This is the song I oflisten hearingto often recently.

This is the song I often hearing've been listening to recently.

This is thea song I have often hearing recently.listened to recently.¶

(Or "This is the song I have recently listened to most")

"the song" implies it's the only song you have listened to. "A song" doesn't have this same exclusive feel. If you want to indicate it's the number 1 song (sort of 最も) then you need a "most" in there.

It's cool, heartwarming, and strong.


You should hear it


You should hearlisten to it

You should hearlisten to it

You should hearlisten to it

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k6EQAOmJrbw


bye


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