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The relationship of between South korea and North.

Korea has a problems for solution. That is a reunification. All men who is health must have the duty of national defense. Because, The war is not over. South Korea and North Korea are in a state of truce until now. Why do we need to the reunification? First of all, The government are spending a lot of moneys to military. It is mandatory to go to the army. The budgets of national defense expenditure are spent to the army. If South and North are to be reunification, The government can reduce that costs. These costs can usually use other parts such as welfare and infrastructure. Secondly, We are a homogeneous country. We are using a same language and We have a same culture and history. There are many separated families both south and north due to the war. How do we know their pain? They want to meet as soon as possible. Lastly, What would happen if South-North were a same country? Korea has a numerous human resources. Samsung, LG, Hyundai and Kia company are popular all of the world. In other hand, There is a natural resources in North. If we are integrated, We will more grow up to have a advantage each country.

To be reunification, Denuclearization is the name of the game. Nuclear is threatening to korea and also other countries. So North government should give up to make a nuclear.

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They want to meet as soon as possible.

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The relationship of between South korea and North.


The relationship of between South korea and North Korea. The relationship of between South and North Korea.

The rRelationship of bBetween South korea and North.North and South Korea The Relationship Between North and South Korea

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adverbs, adjetives, needs to be capitalized in the title. I don't know why, but it feels more natural to write it "North and South" than "South and North".

Korea has a problems for solution.


Korea has a problems for solutionunification problem. Korea has a unification problem.

Korea has a problems for that needs solution. Korea has a problem that needs solution.

I wasn't really sure what you wanted to say here, so I guessed. If you send me a description, I might be able to phrase it better.

That is a reunification.


That is a reunification.

I combined this sentence with the last one.

That is aIt's reunification. It's reunification.

All men who is health must have the duty of national defense.


All men who is healthy musten have the duty of national defenseto defend the country, because war is not over. All healthy men have the duty to defend the country, because war is not over.

All men who isare health musty have the duty of national defense. All men who are healthy have the duty of national defense.

Because, The war is not over.


Because, The war is not over.

combined the sentence with the last one.

Because, T the war is not over. Because the war is not over.

"Is not" is often said/written as "isn't".

South Korea and North Korea are in a state of truce until now.


However, South Korea and North Korea are in a state of truce untilright now. However, South Korea and North Korea are in a truce right now.

South Korea and North Korea are in a state ofhave had a truce up until now. South Korea and North Korea have had a truce up until now.

Why do we need to the reunification?


Why do we need to the reunificationy? Why do we need to reunify?

Why do we need to the reunificationy? Why do we need to reunify?

First of all, The government are spending a lot of moneys to military.


First of all, TheSouth Korean government areis spending a lot of moneys to on the military. First of all, South Korean government is spending a lot of money on the military.

First of all, Tthe government areis spending a lot of moneys to on the military. First of all, the government is spending a lot of money on the military.

It is mandatory to go to the army.


It is mandatory to go toserve in the army. It is mandatory to serve in the army.

It is mandatory to go toserve in the army. It is mandatory to serve in the army.

"It is" is often said/written as "It's".

The budgets of national defense expenditure are spent to the army.


The budgets of national defense expenditure are spent to the army.cost of maintaining an army for national defense represents a big portion of the budget. The cost of maintaining an army for national defense represents a big portion of the budget.

The budgets of nthe National dDefense eExpenditure are spent ton the army. The budgets of the National Defense Expenditure are spent on the army.

I'm not really sure what you mean here. In English, the first letter of all proper nouns are capitalized, (ex: Mount Everest).

If South and North are to be reunification, The government can reduce that costs.


If the South and the North are to be reunification, The governmented, both sides can reduce that costs. If the South and the North are to be reunified, both sides can reduce that cost.

If Southe North and NorSouth are to be reunificationed, Tthe government can reduce thatese costs. If the North and South are reunified, the government can reduce these costs.

These costs can usually use other parts such as welfare and infrastructure.


These costs can usually use other parts such asould be re-apportioned to fund welfare and infrastructure. These costs could be re-apportioned to fund welfare and infrastructure.

These costs canare usually use other partsneed in other sections, such as welfare and infrastructure. These costs are usually need in other sections, such as welfare and infrastructure.

Secondly, We are a homogeneous country.


Secondly, Wwe are a homogeneous country. Secondly, we are a homogeneous country.

Secondly, Wwe are a homogeneous country. Secondly, we are a homogeneous country.

"We are" is often written/said as "we're". I'm not sure that "homogenous" is the right word here.

We are using a same language and We have a same culture and history.


We are using ause the same language and Wwe have athe same culture and history. We use the same language and we have the same culture and history.

We are using ause the same language and We have athe same culture and history. We use the same language and have the same culture and history.

There are many separated families both south and north due to the war.


There are many separated families both south and northMany families are separated on both sides due to the war. Many families are separated on both sides due to the war.

There are many separated families in both southe North and norSouth due to the war. There are many separated families in both the North and South due to the war.

How do we know their pain?


How do we know their pain? How do we know their pain?

When you pose a question, you should follow up by a response. For instance, you asked "how do we know their pain?". Do you know it through reading news articles, watching documentaries, studying it in school?

How do we know their painDoesn't it hurt them? Doesn't it hurt them?

I wasn't really sure what you were trying to say here.

They want to meet as soon as possible.


They want to meet as soon as possible.se families also want to be reunited. These families also want to be reunited.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Lastly, What would happen if South-North were a same country?


Lastly, Wwhat would happen if South-Northboth Koreas were athe same country? Lastly, what would happen if both Koreas were the same country?

Lastly, Wwhat would happen if South-Northe North and South were athe same country? Lastly, what would happen if the North and South were the same country?

Korea has a numerous human resources.


Korea has a numerous human resouvery talented workforces. Korea has a very talented workforce.

Korea has a numerous human resources. Korea has numerous resources.

Samsung, LG, Hyundai and Kia company are popular all of the world.


Furthermore, companies such as Samsung, LG, Hyundai and Kia company are popular all ofver the world. Furthermore, companies such as Samsung, LG, Hyundai and Kia are popular all over the world.

Companies like Samsung, LG, Hyundai, and Kia company are popular all ofver the world. Companies like Samsung, LG, Hyundai, and Kia are popular all over the world.

In other hand, There is a natural resources in North.


In other hand, There is a natural resources inThe same talented workforce also exist in the North. The same talented workforce also exist in the North.

In other hand, There is aThere are also many natural resources in North. There are also many natural resources in North.

"On the other hand" is generally used when you're making a counterpoint.

If we are integrated, We will more grow up to have a advantage each country.


If we are integrated, We will more grow up to have a advantage each country.reunified, each side would be able to benefit from the other. If we are reunified, each side would be able to benefit from the other.

If we are integratunified, Wwe will more grow up to have abe able to combine the unique advantages of each country. If we are unified, we will be able to combine the unique advantages of each country.

To be reunification, Denuclearization is the name of the game.


To bIn order to achieve reunification, Denuclearization is the name of the game. disarmament has to happen. In order to achieve reunification, nuclear disarmament has to happen.

To be reunificationIn order to reunify, Ddenuclearization is the name of the game. In order to reunify, denuclearization is the name of the game.

Nuclear is threatening to korea and also other countries.


Nuclear isweapons are a big threatening to kKorea and also other countries.s well as the rest of the world. Nuclear weapons are a big threat to Korea as well as the rest of the world.

Nuclear is threatening to korea and alsoweapons are a threat to both Koreas, as well as other countries. Nuclear weapons are a threat to both Koreas, as well as other countries.

So North government should give up to make a nuclear.


So North government should give up to make a nuclearin my view, I think North Korea should disarm its nuclear weapons. So in my view, I think North Korea should disarm its nuclear weapons.

You have such good ideas and I can totally relate to the desire for families to reunite.

So the North Korean government should give up ton make aing nuclear weapons. So the North Korean government should give up on making nuclear weapons.

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