June 11, 2025
working holiday
I started text today.I worked a factory job today.I usually packed a meat on box.The factory is many Indonacia people.I have to work for 3month.We have to get up at 4:30.It is so fast for me.so I am going to go to bet at 9 PM today.
私は日記を始めました。私は今日ファクトリーで働きました。普段肉を段ボールにいれる仕事をしています。そのファクトリーはたくさんのインドネシア人がいます。私は3ヶ月この仕事で働かなければなりません。さらに私たちは4時半に起きなければなりません。私にとってとても早いです。私は9時に寝る予定です。
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I started texting today. I worked a factory job today. I usually packed a meat on box.into boxes. The factory ihas many Indonacesian people. I have to work for 3 month.Ws, and we have to get up at 4:30. It is so fastearly for me., so I am going to go to betd at 9 PM today.
I started texting today. I worked a factory job today. I usually pack meat into boxes. The factory has many Indonesian people. I have to work for 3 months, and we have to get up at 4:30. It is so early for me, so I am going to go to bed at 9 PM today.
Not quite sure what you mean by "I started text today," so I just changed it so it would be grammatically correct. A lot of the sentences feel very short, so I combined "I have to work for 3 months" and "We have to get up at 4:30" so that it flows better.
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Capitals at the start
I started textworking today. I worked a factory job today., where I usually packed a meat on box.into boxes. The factory ihas many Indonacesian people. I have to work for 3 month.Ws, and we have to get up at 4:30. It i's so fastearly for me., so I a'm going to go to betd at 9 PM todaynight.
I started working today. I worked a factory job, where I usually pack meat into boxes. The factory has many Indonesian people. I have to work for 3 months, and we have to get up at 4:30. It's so early for me, so I'm going to go to bed at 9 PM tonight.
'it is' is can be abbreviated to 'it's' and 'I am' can be abbreviated to 'I'm' for a more casual tone. Do you mean working instead of writing?
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Use commas to put short sentences into longer, compound sentences.
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For titles, I would at least capitalise the first word.
I started textwriting today. I worked a factory job today. I usually packed a meat oin box.es. The factory ihas many Indonacia people.esian workers. I have to work for 3 month.s. We have to get up at 4:30. It is so fastearly for me., so I am going to go to betd at 9 PM today.
I started writing today. I worked a factory job today. I usually packed a meat in boxes. The factory has many Indonesian workers. I have to work for 3 months. We have to get up at 4:30. It is so early for me, so I am going to go to bed at 9 PM today.
Or "I started writing a journal today".
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working holiday
For titles, I would at least capitalise the first word.
Capitals at the start |
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I started text today.I worked a factory job today.I usually packed a meat on box.The factory is many Indonacia people.I have to work for 3month.We have to get up at 4:30.It is so fast for me.so I am going to go to bet at 9 PM today.
I started Or "I started writing a journal today".
I started 'it is' is can be abbreviated to 'it's' and 'I am' can be abbreviated to 'I'm' for a more casual tone. Do you mean working instead of writing?
I started texting today. I worked a factory job today. I usually pack Not quite sure what you mean by "I started text today," so I just changed it so it would be grammatically correct. A lot of the sentences feel very short, so I combined "I have to work for 3 months" and "We have to get up at 4:30" so that it flows better. |
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