Feb. 16, 2025
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I am living. They are engineers from an oil state-owned company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims. Interestingly, my friend said although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies. Two guests in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's, they will be staying in different hotels.
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Picking Up Guests
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will comeare arriving/coming to themy city where I am living.
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia are arriving/coming to my city.
They are engineers from an oil state-owned company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up, said they are all Muslims. They are engineers from an oil state-owned company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up, said they are all Muslims.
Interestingly, my friend said that although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work inat state companies.
Interestingly, my friend said that although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work at state companies.
Two guests will go in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's, t. They will be staying in different hotels.
Two guests will go in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's. They will be staying in different hotels.
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Picking up guests
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I am living.
They are engineers from an oil state-owned company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims.
Interestingly, my friend said although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies.
Two guests in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's, they will be staying in different hotels.
They are engineers from an oil state-owned oil company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims.
They are engineers from a state-owned oil company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims.
Reordering the adjectives are to make it sound more natural, as native speakers generally keep the type of company very close to the noun company. This is pretty advanced stuff though, so your sentence still makes sense with the order swapped.
Two guests (are? will travel?) in my car andwhile the other three will travel toin my friend's, as they will be staying in different hotels.
Two guests (are? will travel?) in my car while the other three will travel in my friend's, as they will be staying in different hotels.
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Overall this is very good, just a few small tweaks
They are engineers from an oil state-owned company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they that are all Muslims. They are engineers from an oil state-owned company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they that are all Muslims.
Interestingly, my friend said although there are no written rules, regarding about it, most Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies.
Interestingly, my friend said although there are no written rules regarding about it, most Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies.
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お久しぶりです!
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I am livinglive.
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I live.
このの方が自然です。
They are engineers from an oil state-owned oil company, and, my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims.
They are engineers from a state-owned oil company and, my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims.
Interestingly, my friend said that although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies. Interestingly, my friend said that although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies.
Two guests in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's, t. They will be staying in different hotels.
Two guests in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's. They will be staying in different hotels.
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面白かったです。よくできました!
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I am livinglive.
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I live.
They are engineers from an oil state-owned oil company, and m. My friend, who asked me to help him pick them up, said they are all Muslims.
They are engineers from a state-owned oil company. My friend, who asked me to help him pick them up, said they are all Muslims.
Interestingly, my friend saidtold me that although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies.
Interestingly, my friend told me that although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies.
TI will drive two guests in my car and t. The other three will travel todrive with my friend's, t. They will be staying in different hotels.
I will drive two guests in my car. The other three will drive with my friend. They will be staying in different hotels.
Picking up Gguests
Picking up guests
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I am livinglive.
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I live.
They are engineers from an oil state-owned oil company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims.
They are engineers from an state-owned oil company and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims.
Interestingly, my friend said although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies.
Two guests in my car and the other three will travel towith my friend's, t. They will all be staying in different hotels.
Two guests in my car and the other three will travel with my friend. They will all be staying in different hotels.
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Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I am living.
They are engineers from an {oil-state-owned company | state-owned oil company}, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims.
They are engineers from an {oil-state-owned company | state-owned oil company}, and my friend who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims.
“Oil-state-owned company” is possible (a company that is owned by an oil state, such as Saudi Arabia), but I think “state-owned oil company” is probably what you mean.
Interestingly, my friend said although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies.
Two guests will ride in my car and the other three will travel to (in?) my friend's, t. They will be staying in different hotels.
Two guests will ride in my car and the other three will travel to (in?) my friend's. They will be staying in different hotels.
“Travel to my friend’s” seems odd, because you don’t tell us HOW they will travel to your friend’s home, and you then go on to say they’ll be staying in a hotel, which makes me wonder why they would go your friend’s home. Maybe you mean “travel in my friend’s (car)”?
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Picking Up Guests
Thinks 'Picking up" sounds better.
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I am livinglive.
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I live.
Present tense for live as your current state.
They are engineers from an oil state-owned oil company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up, said they are all Muslims.
They are engineers from a state-owned oil company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up, said they are all Muslims.
state-owned describes the "oil company" so goes first.
Interestingly, my friend said although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies.
Two guests in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's, t. They will be staying in different hotels.
Two guests in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's. They will be staying in different hotels.
Two sentences not linked by 'and' so need full stop rather than comma.
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Good work.
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Pick Thinks 'Picking up" sounds better. Picking up Guests Picking up Guests
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Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I am living.
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I Present tense for live as your current state. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I
Tonight, five guests from Indonesia will come to the city where I このの方が自然です。 This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Two guests in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's, they will be staying in different hotels.
Two guests in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's Two sentences not linked by 'and' so need full stop rather than comma.
Two guests will ride in my car and the other three will travel to (in?) my friend's “Travel to my friend’s” seems odd, because you don’t tell us HOW they will travel to your friend’s home, and you then go on to say they’ll be staying in a hotel, which makes me wonder why they would go your friend’s home. Maybe you mean “travel in my friend’s (car)”?
Two guests in my car and the other three will travel
Two guests in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's
Two guests (are? will travel?) in my car This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Two guests will go in my car and the other three will travel to my friend's |
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They are engineers from an oil state-owned company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they are all Muslims.
They are engineers from a state-owned describes the "oil company" so goes first.
They are engineers from an {oil-state-owned company | state-owned oil company}, and my friend “Oil-state-owned company” is possible (a company that is owned by an oil state, such as Saudi Arabia), but I think “state-owned oil company” is probably what you mean.
They are engineers from an
They are engineers from a
They are engineers from a They are engineers from an oil state-owned company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they that are all Muslims. They are engineers from an oil state-owned company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up said they that are all Muslims.
They are engineers from a Reordering the adjectives are to make it sound more natural, as native speakers generally keep the type of company very close to the noun company. This is pretty advanced stuff though, so your sentence still makes sense with the order swapped. This sentence has been marked as perfect! They are engineers from an oil state-owned company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up, said they are all Muslims. They are engineers from an oil state-owned company, and my friend, who asked me to help him pick them up, said they are all Muslims. |
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Interestingly, my friend said although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Interestingly, my friend Interestingly, my friend said that although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies. Interestingly, my friend said that although there are no written rules, Muslims in Indonesia have more opportunities to work in state companies.
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