June 12, 2021
Who use messengers more, adults or adolescents?
Some people believe that nowadays adults spend much more time with messengers than adolescents. I wouldn’t say so.
I suppose that everything depends on the type of work people have as, unfortunately, we’re still spending the majority of our time on the work. It’s inevitable to use messengers every now and then if you’re coordinating some processes for instance. On the other hand, there are plenty of jobs that don’t require any immediate connections. Furthermore, those who frequently use messengers (or social media, or even PCs) at work usually get so tired of it that they try to skip using gadgets in their spare time. Ok, it might be a bit exaggerated, but I'm pretty sure they reduce texting and hate answering phone calls.
I suppose that adolescents have never lived in a sans-messenger world, that’s why they’re much more accustomed to using them, while adults get really tired of constant pressure and need to answer and it’s much easier psychologically for them to limit messenger using.
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Who use messengers more, adults or adolescents?
I wouldn’t say so.
I suppose that everything depends on the type of work people have, as, we’re still unfortunately, we’re still spending the majority of our time on theat work.
I suppose that everything depends on the type of work people have, as we’re still unfortunately spending the majority of our time at work.
The comma should go before "as" here :)
Either "we're still unfortunately spending the majority of our time at work" or "we're still unfortunately spending the majority of our time with our work" sounds good - saying "on the work" sounds strange.
It’s inevitable to use messengers every now and then if you’re coordinating some processes, for instance. It’s inevitable to use messengers every now and then if you’re coordinating some processes, for instance.
On the other hand, there are plenty of jobs that don’t require any immediate connections.
Furthermore, those who frequently use messengers (or social media, or even PCs) at work usually get so tired of ithem that they try to skipavoid using gadgets in their spare time.
Furthermore, those who frequently use messengers (or social media, or even PCs) at work usually get so tired of them that they try to avoid using gadgets in their spare time.
You have to write "them" instead of "it" because "messengers" is plural.
Ok, ithis might be a bit exaggerated, but I'm pretty sure they reducetry to reduce the amount of time spent texting and hate answering phone calls.
Ok, this might be a bit exaggerated, but I'm pretty sure they try to reduce the amount of time spent texting and hate answering phone calls.
I suppose that adolescents have never lived in a sans-messenger world, that’which is why they’re much more accustomed to using them, while adults get really tired of constant pressure and need to answer and. Therefore, it’s much easier for them psychologically for them to limit messenger using.
I suppose that adolescents have never lived in a sans-messenger world, which is why they’re much more accustomed to using them, while adults get really tired of constant pressure and need to answer. Therefore, it’s much easier for them psychologically to limit messenger using.
What you wrote was a run-off sentence, so I split the sentence into two.
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June 13, 2021
Thank you for the corrections and explanations!
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Who use messengers more, adults or adolescents? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Some people believe that nowadays adults spend much more time with messengers than adolescents. |
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I wouldn’t say so. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I suppose that everything depends on the type of work people have as, unfortunately, we’re still spending the majority of our time on the work.
I suppose that everything depends on the type of work people have, as The comma should go before "as" here :) Either "we're still unfortunately spending the majority of our time at work" or "we're still unfortunately spending the majority of our time with our work" sounds good - saying "on the work" sounds strange. |
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It’s inevitable to use messengers every now and then if you’re coordinating some processes for instance. It’s inevitable to use messengers every now and then if you’re coordinating some processes, for instance. It’s inevitable to use messengers every now and then if you’re coordinating some processes, for instance. |
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On the other hand, there are plenty of jobs that don’t require any immediate connections. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Furthermore, those who frequently use messengers (or social media, or even PCs) at work usually get so tired of it that they try to skip using gadgets in their spare time.
Furthermore, those who frequently use messengers (or social media, or even PCs) at work usually get so tired of You have to write "them" instead of "it" because "messengers" is plural. |
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Ok, it might be a bit exaggerated, but I'm pretty sure they reduce texting and hate answering phone calls.
Ok, |
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I suppose that adolescents have never lived in a sans-messenger world, that’s why they’re much more accustomed to using them, while adults get really tired of constant pressure and need to answer and it’s much easier psychologically for them to limit messenger using.
I suppose that adolescents have never lived in a sans-messenger world, What you wrote was a run-off sentence, so I split the sentence into two. |
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