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Today I watched some videos of the Winter Olympics. It's nice to see many foreign athletes speak highly of China. And I also saw the sportsmanship of the athletes.The athletes reminded me once again that I must persevere to the end.A miracle might happen.
In terms of study, I learned the knowledge of specialized courses and practiced oral English. The result of the postgraduate entrance exam will come out soon and I'm still nervous.

Finally, I would like to ask you whether the following sentence is correct(Or is there a better way to say it): "I will rationally analyze the gap between myself and others. Make up for your shortcomings. Every time I pass, I reflect on myself. And keep a diary."

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Today(2.12)

Today I watched some videos of the Winter Olympics.

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Feb. 13, 2022

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Today I watched some videos of the Winter Olympics.


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It's nice to see many foreign athletes speak highly of China.


It's nice to see so many foreign athletes speak highly of China. It's nice to see so many foreign athletes speak highly of China.

不幸的是也有比较多网友用冬奥会来批评中国...making accusations of starving athletes or cheating or whatever

And I also saw the sportsmanship of the athletes.The athletes reminded me once again that I must persevere to the end.A miracle might happen.


And I also saw the sportsmanship of the athletes. The athletes reminded me once again that I must persevere to the end. A miracle might happen. I also saw the sportsmanship of the athletes. The athletes reminded me once again that I must persevere to the end. A miracle might happen.

In terms of study, I learned the knowledge of specialized courses and practiced oral English.


In terms of study, I learned the knowledge of specialized courses and practiced oral English. In terms of study, I learned the knowledge of specialized courses and practiced oral English.

I also studied today. I learned from some specialized courses and I also practiced oral English.

In terms of studying, I learned the knowledge ofabout specialized courses and practiced oralmy spoken English. In terms of studying, I learned about specialized courses and practiced my spoken English.

Specialized courses这里意思不太清楚,你说的是什么样的courses?

The result of the postgraduate entrance exam will come out soon and I'm still nervous.


The results of the postgraduate entrance exam will come out soon and I'm still nervous. The results of the postgraduate entrance exam will come out soon and I'm nervous.

Finally, I would like to ask you whether the following sentence is correct(Or is there a better way to say it): "I will rationally analyze the gap between myself and others.


Finally, I would like to ask you whether the following sentence is correct(Or is there a better way to say it): "I will rationally analyze the gap between myself and others. Finally, I would like to ask you whether the following sentence is correct(Or is there a better way to say it): "I will rationally analyze the gap between myself and others.

Finally, I would like to ask you whether the following sentence is correct (Or if there is a better way to say it): "I will endeavor to understand the difference between myself and others."

Finally, I would like to ask you whether the following sentence iss are correct(O (or isf there is a better way to say ithem): "I will rationally analyze the gap between myself and others. Finally, I would like to ask you whether the following sentences are correct (or if there is a better way to say them): "I will rationally analyze the gap between myself and others.

The sentence is grammatically correct, but you would need some context to clarify what the gap is in (gap in performance, etc.)

Make up for your shortcomings.


Make up for your shortcomings. Make up for your shortcomings.

Alternatively, compensate for your shortcomings.

Every time I pass, I reflect on myself.


Every time I pass, I reflect on myself. Every time I pass, I reflect on myself.

As before, "pass" is ambiguous, would need some context.

And keep a diary.


And keep a diary. And keep a diary.

This is not a whole sentence, it needs to be attached to some other sentence.

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