April 6, 2022
Jazz Illustration (a text a bit poetic)
The music sounds. It's hot, but the musician is getting out all the musical notes that his saxophone can play. The time pass, but the notes remain in the air. It is still hot, but not matter. The time is stopping, but the music go on.
Jazz Illustration (a text is a bit poetic)
The music soundresonates.
The original isn't incorrect, but it sounded a bit awkward so here's an alternative.
It's hot, but the musician is getting out all the musical notes thatplaying to the full range of what's possible on his saxophone can play.
There are other ways of rephrasing this. Since you use "notes" in the next sentence, stylistically it's better not to use that word in this one to avoid repetition.
It is still hot, but not matter.
The time is stopping, but the music goes on.
April 6, 2022
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Jazz Illustration (a text a bit poetic) Jazz Illustration ( |
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The music sounds. The music The original isn't incorrect, but it sounded a bit awkward so here's an alternative. |
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It's hot, but the musician is getting out all the musical notes that his saxophone can play. It's hot, but the musician is There are other ways of rephrasing this. Since you use "notes" in the next sentence, stylistically it's better not to use that word in this one to avoid repetition. |
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The time pass, but the notes remain in the air. |
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It is still hot, but not matter. It is still hot, but no |
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The time is stopping, but the music go on. The time is stopping, but the music goes on. |
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