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kiwy

July 10, 2021

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Jazz Drum

One year ago, I decided to learn jazz drum. I never play it before, but I think it is cool.
Before learning, I knew nothing about the music theory. When I was singing, I was always teld that I was wrong with the melody. I was so confused.
There is no melody in jazz drum, you just need to learn the rhythm. But it was still hard for me to feel the rhythm. It took me a long time to learn. I am still confident to depict the details of them.
But it doesn't matter. Once my drum teacher asked me why I learnt playing drum, I teld him that just for fun. I am always impatient in many things. When I was playing drum, I can feel peaceful. It really surprised me. Then I found out that I became more patient in other things, like doing the dishes, cleaning, ect. I used to hate doing the dishes a lot.
As I learned more and more, I got the beauty of some songs. The feeling are so different from before.
And the process of learning to play drum is also the process of getting more self-confidence. When I make mistakes, I keep telling myself: take it easy, you can do it. And when I think I can, then I really can. The pleasure of success drive me practise more. As I practise more, I got more pleasue. It works like a circle.
I love playing jazz drum.

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Jazz Drum

One year ago, I decided to learn jazz drumming.

IBefore then I had never played it before, but I thinkought it is cool.

Before learning, I knew nothing about the music theory.

When I wasould sing ing the past, I was always teold that I was wrong with the melodymy melody was off.

I was so confused.

There is no melody in jazz drumming, you just need to learn the rhythm.

But it was still hard for me to feel the rhythm.

It took me a long time to learn.

I am still confident to depict the details of them.

Not sure what you want to express here, do you mean "I am finally confident about this aspect now"?

But it doesn't matter.

Once mMy drum teacher asked me once why I decided to learnt to playing the drum,s and I teold him that , "just for fun".

I am always impatient inwith many things.

When I was playingplay the drums, I can feel peaceful.

It really surprised me.

Then I found out that I became more patient inwith other things, like doing the dishes, cleaning, ectc.

I used to really hate doing the dishes a lot.

As I learned more and more, I gotbegan to appreciate the beauty of some songs.

The feeling areis so different from before.

And the process of learning to play the drums is also thea process of gettbecoming more self-confidencet.

When I make mistakes, I keep telling myself: take it easy, you can do it.

And when I think I can, then I really can.

The pleasure of success drives me practise more.

As I practise more, I goet more pleasure.

It works like a cirycle.

I love playing the jazz drum.

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Great work, you made me want to try to learn jazz drumming too!

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kiwy

July 11, 2021

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I am still confident to depict the details of them.

Nope. I am still unconfident abouth the aspect now.

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kiwy

July 11, 2021

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It is reallllly interesting. My poor vocabulary can't describe 1 percent of the pleasure of playing drums. You can have a try.😁

Jazz Drum


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One year ago, I decided to learn jazz drum.


One year ago, I decided to learn jazz drumming.

I never play it before, but I think it is cool.


IBefore then I had never played it before, but I thinkought it is cool.

Before learning, I knew nothing about the music theory.


Before learning, I knew nothing about the music theory.

When I was singing, I was always teld that I was wrong with the melody.


When I wasould sing ing the past, I was always teold that I was wrong with the melodymy melody was off.

I was so confused.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There is no melody in jazz drum, you just need to learn the rhythm.


There is no melody in jazz drumming, you just need to learn the rhythm.

But it was still hard for me to feel the rhythm.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It took me a long time to learn.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am still confident to depict the details of them.


I am still confident to depict the details of them.

Not sure what you want to express here, do you mean "I am finally confident about this aspect now"?

But it doesn't matter.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Once my drum teacher asked me why I learnt playing drum, I teld him that just for fun.


Once mMy drum teacher asked me once why I decided to learnt to playing the drum,s and I teold him that , "just for fun".

I am always impatient in many things.


I am always impatient inwith many things.

When I was playing drum, I can feel peaceful.


When I was playingplay the drums, I can feel peaceful.

It really surprised me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Then I found out that I became more patient in other things, like doing the dishes, cleaning, ect.


Then I found out that I became more patient inwith other things, like doing the dishes, cleaning, ectc.

I used to hate doing the dishes a lot.


I used to really hate doing the dishes a lot.

As I learned more and more, I got the beauty of some songs.


As I learned more and more, I gotbegan to appreciate the beauty of some songs.

The feeling are so different from before.


The feeling areis so different from before.

And the process of learning to play drum is also the process of getting more self-confidence.


And the process of learning to play the drums is also thea process of gettbecoming more self-confidencet.

When I make mistakes, I keep telling myself: take it easy, you can do it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And when I think I can, then I really can.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The pleasure of success drive me practise more.


The pleasure of success drives me practise more.

As I practise more, I got more pleasue.


As I practise more, I goet more pleasure.

It works like a circle.


It works like a cirycle.

I love playing jazz drum.


I love playing the jazz drum.

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