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Japanese gardens

Japanese gardens are, as it has been said, to be seen, not for us to do something in, such as exercising or taking a break. People who were a child before the World War Ⅱ should have scolded by their mother at least once, “You had better not play in the garden, boy”.


日本の庭は、昔からよく言われるように、見る庭であって、そこで運動したり休息したりするような、何かの行為をする庭ではなかったのである。戦前に育った人たちは、子供のころに、母親から、「お庭で遊んではいけません」といって叱られた記憶をたいてい持っているだろう。

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Japanese gardens are, as it has beenthey saidy, to be seen, not for us to do something in, such as exercising or taking a break.

Use the phrase "as they say" because it is a saying that is still used often. "As it has been said" suggests that it is no longer a common expression. Also it sounds a bit clunky.

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Japanese gardens are, as they say, to be seen, not for us to do something in, such as exercising or taking a break.

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June 2, 2020

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thank you!!

Japanese gardens

Japanese gardens are, as it has been said, to be seen, not for us to do something in, such as exercising or taking a break.

People who were a child before the World War Ⅱ should havehave been scolded by their mother at least once, “You had better not play in the garden, boy”.

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Japanese gardens are, as it has been said, to be seen, not for us to do something in, such as exercising or taking a break.

Japanese gardens are, as they say, to be seen, not for us to do something in, such as exercising or taking a break.

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hebereke

June 2, 2020

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Thank you!!

Japanese gardens

Japanese gardens are, as it has been said, to be seen, not for us to do something in, such as exercising or taking a break.

People who were a child before the World War Ⅱ should have been scolded by their mother at least once, “You had better not play in the garden, boy”.

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thank you!!

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Japanese gardens are, as it has beenthey saidy, to be seen, not for us to do something in, such as exercising or taking a break.

Use the phrase "as they say" because it is a saying that is still used often. "As it has been said" suggests that it is no longer a common expression. Also it sounds a bit clunky.

People who were a child before the World War Ⅱ should have scolded by their mother at least once, “You had better not play in the garden, boy”.


People who were a child before the World War Ⅱ should have been scolded by their mother at least once, “You had better not play in the garden, boy”.

People who were a child before the World War Ⅱ should havehave been scolded by their mother at least once, “You had better not play in the garden, boy”.

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