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Scarlett_Father

Oct. 30, 2023

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Japanese cars

I am now driving a Japanese Toyota Camry; it is really reliable and dependable. I have heard that some parts in the same Toyota model, like Camry varied though the power engine is the same. I am not sure about it, but I believe different country have different regulations on it, and Toyota generally would obey it.

Electric cars have replaced a lot of traditional gasoline-powered cars in the past three years. I personally believe that Toyota will be a main competitor to challenge Tesla in the near future. Are electric-powered cars really greener or more environmental-friendlier? This is also argued by many people. In the contrast, some people worry that more environmental issues occur when power plants produce more electricity than before.

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I am now driving a Japanese Toyota Camry; i. It is really reliable and dependable.

I have heard that some parts in the same Toyota model, like the Camry, variedy, though the power is the same.

I have heard that some parts in the same Toyota model, like the Camry, vary, though the power is the same.

I have heard that some parts in the same Toyota model, like Camry varied though the power engine is the same.

I am not sure about it, but I believe different countryies have different regulations on it, and Toyota generally would obey itobeys them.

Are electric-powered cars really greener or more environmental-ly friendliery?

In the contrast, some people worry that more environmental issues could occur whenif power plants produce more electricity than before.

In contrast, some people worry that more environmental issues could occur if power plants produce more electricity than before.

Some people worry that more environmental issues occur when power plants produce more electricity than before.

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Good job

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Scarlett_Father

Oct. 31, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections!

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bahnhofversteher

Nov. 1, 2023

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No problem

I am now driving a Japanese Toyota Camry; it is really reliable and depend, a Japanese car that I find reliable.

Grammatically, your original sentence is correct, but it could be better to rephrase so it sounds more natural.

I have heard that some parts inversions of the same Toyota model, like the Camry, varied s although their power engine is the same.

I have heard that some parts inversions of the same Toyota model, like the Camry, varied s although the power is the same.

I'm not sure what you mean by parts? (I don't know a lot about cars)

I am not sure about it, but I believe different country have different regulations on it, andand that Toyota generally would obey itfollows them.

Could also say: I'm not sure, but I believe countries have different regulations and that Toyota generally abides by them.

Are electric-powered cars really greener or more environmental-ly friendliery?

Are electric-powered cars really energeticpowerful?

This is also argudiscussed by many people.

In the contrast, some people worry that more environmental issues occur when power plants produce more electricity than before.

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Well written! I've never used a Toyota car, but I've also heard that Japanese car brands tend to be reliable

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Scarlett_Father

Oct. 31, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections and explanations! :-)

Japanese cars

I am now driving a Japanese car, a Toyota Camry; i. It is really reliable and dependable.

“A Japanese Toyota Camry” sounds like you mean a Camry that was manufactured in Japan (not one that was made in China, the US, or Australia, for example). I think you mean it’s a “Japanese car,” designed and manufactured by a Japanese company.

A semicolon feels unnatural in this context.

“Reliable” and “dependable” are synonymous in this context. Using them together is considered poor writing style—too redundant.

I have heard that some parts, even in the same Toyota model, like the Camry varied, some parts may vary from individual car to car (or from country to country?), though the power engine is the same.

Is this what you mean?

I am not sure about it, but I believe different countryies have different regulations on ithis, and Toyota generally would obey it.them.

Electric cars have replaced a lot of traditional gasoline-powered cars in the past three years.

I personally believe that Toyota will be a main competitor to challenge Tesla in the near future.

Are electric(-powered) cars really [energetic]?

What do you mean by “energetic”?

Are electric-powered cars really greener or more environmental-ly friendliery?

This is also [argued | debated] by many people.

Some people worry that more environmental issues occur when power plants produce more electricity than before.

Feedback

I suspect that the environmental costs of manufacturing and running a new car, gas-powered or electric, for ten years are far greater than the environmental costs of running and maintaining an existing/old car for the same amount of time. It’s usually better for the environment to reuse what we already have than to make something new.

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JoeTofu

Oct. 30, 2023

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I also drive a Toyota, a Venza. I think it was probably manufactured in the US, but I’m not certain.

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Scarlett_Father

Oct. 31, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections! It's a good idea to reuse a car rather than produce new ones.

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I am now driving a Japanese Toyota Camry; it is really reliable and dependable.


I am now driving a Japanese car, a Toyota Camry; i. It is really reliable and dependable.

“A Japanese Toyota Camry” sounds like you mean a Camry that was manufactured in Japan (not one that was made in China, the US, or Australia, for example). I think you mean it’s a “Japanese car,” designed and manufactured by a Japanese company. A semicolon feels unnatural in this context. “Reliable” and “dependable” are synonymous in this context. Using them together is considered poor writing style—too redundant.

I am now driving a Japanese Toyota Camry; it is really reliable and depend, a Japanese car that I find reliable.

Grammatically, your original sentence is correct, but it could be better to rephrase so it sounds more natural.

I am now driving a Japanese Toyota Camry; i. It is really reliable and dependable.

I have heard that some parts in the same Toyota model, like the Camry varied though the power is the same.


I have heard that some parts inversions of the same Toyota model, like the Camry, varied s although the power is the same.

I'm not sure what you mean by parts? (I don't know a lot about cars)

I have heard that some parts in the same Toyota model, like the Camry, variedy, though the power is the same.

I have heard that some parts in the same Toyota model, like the Camry, vary, though the power is the same.

I am not sure about it, but I believe different country have different regulations on it, and Toyota generally would obey it.


I am not sure about it, but I believe different countryies have different regulations on ithis, and Toyota generally would obey it.them.

I am not sure about it, but I believe different country have different regulations on it, andand that Toyota generally would obey itfollows them.

Could also say: I'm not sure, but I believe countries have different regulations and that Toyota generally abides by them.

I am not sure about it, but I believe different countryies have different regulations on it, and Toyota generally would obey itobeys them.

Electric cars have replaced a lot of traditional gasoline-powered cars in the past three years.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I personally believe that Toyota will be a main competitor to challenge Tesla in the near future.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Are electric-powered cars really energetic?


Are electric(-powered) cars really [energetic]?

What do you mean by “energetic”?

Are electric-powered cars really energeticpowerful?

This is also argued by many people.


This is also [argued | debated] by many people.

This is also argudiscussed by many people.

Some people worry that more environmental issues occur when power plants produce more electricity than before.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Some people worry that more environmental issues occur when power plants produce more electricity than before.

I have heard that some parts in the same Toyota model, like Camry varied though the power engine is the same.


I have heard that some parts, even in the same Toyota model, like the Camry varied, some parts may vary from individual car to car (or from country to country?), though the power engine is the same.

Is this what you mean?

I have heard that some parts inversions of the same Toyota model, like the Camry, varied s although their power engine is the same.

I have heard that some parts in the same Toyota model, like Camry varied though the power engine is the same.

Are electric-powered cars really greener or more environmental-friendlier?


Are electric-powered cars really greener or more environmental-ly friendliery?

Are electric-powered cars really greener or more environmental-ly friendliery?

Are electric-powered cars really greener or more environmental-ly friendliery?

In the contrast, some people worry that more environmental issues occur when power plants produce more electricity than before.


In the contrast, some people worry that more environmental issues occur when power plants produce more electricity than before.

In the contrast, some people worry that more environmental issues could occur whenif power plants produce more electricity than before.

In contrast, some people worry that more environmental issues could occur if power plants produce more electricity than before.

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