We searched for a place for the night and we found a room in an hotel that namcalled Evermore.

You need the preposition 'for' here, search (verb) is always followed by FOR. ie "are you searching for your phone?"

"Hotel" starts with a consonant so you don't need aN

When talking about an object or anything that is not a person you use 'called'. 'named' is more reserved for people or animals.

HeIt wasn't expensive and heit seemed very qualitativegood.

HE is for people/animals. Objects or anything else is IT.

qualitative is really formal and for something measured by the quality of something rather than its quantity. you could use good, nice, etc

In the pictures, the room weres looked spacious, with a queen-size bed, and the bathroom had a big bathtub.

Room is singular → was, not were.
Also, looked is more natural when describing photos.

When we arrived onat the parking lot, we were totally lost, because we couldn't find anythe reception.

you don't arrive ON the parking lot. you arrive AT the parking lot. There is one hotel reception.

We passedspent almost a quarter of an hour to walking around, searcheding for something or someone who can help us.

When you want to indicate time passing, you would say 'spent' to quantify it. Because this was happening DURING that 1/4 of an hour, you say SEARCHING because it was continuous (in the past).

A moment later, a man wentcame out of the building and asked us what we were doing there.

Come out is naturally used when the speaker is outside.
Here is more verbal, there sounds a bit nicer

Well... it was I supposed, because he only spoke jJapanese.

I don't understand the meaning of this sentence. But we capitalize the name of languages in English.

So, we showed him our reservation on Booking.com and he understood we were just big tourists.

Booking.com is the name of a website. No need to say BIG tourists (this means that you are PHYSICALLY big).

WE = group, therefore its touristS

He invited us to park our car in a little closed place and he pullinged a big curtain to hide the car.

pullING= past continuous. He did this once so its pullED.

Because, in a love hotel, intimitacy is the first rule.

At this moment, we couldn't have known it was a Llove Hhotel, because in Bthe booking, we could read "Aadult only", but we thought it was a hotel that didn't accept children.

"could not HAVE known' --> because couldn't know would be present and you are talking about the past.

Don't capitalize 'love hotel' because it's not the name of a specific hotel.

We were really naives.

Subject agreement. Collective nouns like "team," "committee," or "family" can be singular or plural- in this case WE is one unit.

Behingd the car, there was a door with a corridor that took us in front of another door.

The guy waithelped us there and he explained how did it worked.

again HERE vs THERE because you are not actually there while you are telling this story.

How DID it work would be question form. You are not asking a question, so it becomes how it workED.

After that, he asked us if we wanted to eat something and he showed us a magazine with a lot of food and drink choices.

He explained usto us that we could just fill out a form with our choices and slided it on a little trap.

Need the preposition TO us. Things get explained TO someone.

Need THAT in between to join the ideas together.

In reality, it was possible to do everything without see someing anyone, but he was very kindpatient with us and he took time to explain everything.

for WITHOUT; you need "without + verb-ing”
ie without SEEING

Or In negative-like contexts (after “without”), English normally uses anyone instead of someone.

We couldn't see him again.

InAt first, I saw the tv that was turned on, and on the screen, some choice of strange movies.

either AT first or FIRSTLY

the tv that was turn on” → “the TV, which was turned on”
Past participle.

Next to the television, there wasere four request books with the list of movies, cosplays, lingerie and..

need preposition when describing placement relative to something else.

Subject verb agreement → 4 books = plural therefore its WERE

others accessories.

Obviously, everything needed an additional payment, except the condoms next to the bed.

add is the verb. additional is the adjective.

again preposition when describing placement.

The man knocked on the door and putted the food on the ground.

put is irregular. past tense of put = put

It wasn't very good, but we hadwere hungry.

hungry describes a feeling → we use "To be" when describing most feelings.

I WAS angry.
They WERE tired.
She WAS surprised.

A strange things was the coke with a vanilla ice ball inside :

Strange THING= singular.

I appreciated all the free luxury products on the bathroom and the night pyjama.

multiple productS
pyjamas for a set of pyjamas.