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My favorite part of my trip was a little bit unusual.
It was our visit at The Tono Museum, in the North of Japan.
This museum is the first japanese museum dedicated to the folklore, that was open in 1980.
I love learn about the tales of different countries.
First of all, let's talk about Tono.
It was a little town really pretty, with old and traditional japanese houses, in the middle of nowhere.
Tono is the town of Kappa, a strange creature who looks like a turtle, not really friendly, because they eat little children if they approch rivers.
But they also help pregnant women. Strange duality, no?
I don't know why, but I felt good here, maybe because of the good energy.
We met a group of children, around eight, who were playing, and when they saw us, they all said "Hello!" with a big smile.
Apparently, they were too much old for Kappa.
Concerning the museum, we can saw a lot of different myths and legends about Japan.
Of course, everything was in Japanese, but thank you Google Translate!
The museum was not really big, but we could find some interesting interactives expositions.
My favorite part was the big bookcase with a lot of incredible books.
I passed a lot of time just open books and look at the illustration. Because, obviously, I couldn't read japanese.
After that, we visited a traditionnal house conserved by the museum.
It was the house of Kunio Yanagita, the foundator of folklore ethnology in Japan.
He wrote the Tôno Monogatari in 1910, the most important work about japanese folklore.
I had a real interest for this personality, but he sadly had a link with a political party that I don't share the ideas.
In conclusion, if you will go in this part of Japan, you need to go there!
Japan- Folklore
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This museum is the first jJapanese museum dedicated to the folklore, thaand it was opened in 1980.
I love learning about the tales of different countries.
Since it's a habit, something you do often, it should be learnING.
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I don't know why, but I felt good there, maybe because of the good energy.
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The sentence is a bit long and uses lots of commas. It would be better to split it into two.
Apparently, they were too much old forto be scared of the Kappa.
Concerning the museum, we can saw a lot of different myths and legends about Japan.
Of course, everything was in Japanese, but tit was fine. Thank you Google Translate!
The museum was not realln't very big, but we cfould find some interesting interactives expositionhibits.
"Expositions" and "exhibits" might mean the same thing technically, but "exposition" sounds very grand and formal. At a museum, there are "exhibits".
I passedspent a lot of time just opening books and looking at the illustrations.
Because, obviously, I couldn't read jJapanese.
Starting a sentence with "because", much like starting a sentence with "but" isn't technically correct when writing in English. You can combine this with the previous sentence.
After that, we visited a traditionnal house conserved by the museum.
It was the house of Kunio Yanagita, the foundatoer of folklore ethnology in Japan.
He wrote the Tôno Monogatari in 1910, the most important work about jJapanese folklore.
I had a real interest for this personality, but he sadly had a link with a political party that I don't share the ideasagree with.
In conclusion, if you will go invisit this part of Japan, you definitely need to go there!
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My favorite part of my trip was a little bit unusual. |
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It was our visit at The Tono Museum, in the North of Japan. It was our visit "Visit" here seems like a verb, so it needs "to" after it so it can connect with the rest of the information. |
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Because, obviously, I couldn't read japanese. Because, obviously, I couldn't read Starting a sentence with "because", much like starting a sentence with "but" isn't technically correct when writing in English. You can combine this with the previous sentence. |
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After that, we visited a traditionnal house conserved by the museum. After that, we visited a tradition |
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It was the house of Kunio Yanagita, the foundator of folklore ethnology in Japan. It was the house of Kunio Yanagita, the found |
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He wrote the Tôno Monogatari in 1910, the most important work about japanese folklore. He wrote the Tôno Monogatari in 1910, the most important work about |
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I had a real interest for this personality, but he sadly had a link with a political party that I don't share the ideas. I had a real interest for this personality, but he sadly had a link with a political party that I don't |
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In conclusion, if you will go in this part of Japan, you need to go there! In conclusion, if you |
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This museum is the first japanese museum dedicated to the folklore, that was open in 1980. This museum is the first |
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I love learn about the tales of different countries. I love learning about the tales of different countries. Since it's a habit, something you do often, it should be learnING. (examples: I learn a language. I learned a language. I'm learning a language. I love learning languages.) |
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First of all, let's talk about Tono. |
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It was a little town really pretty, with old and traditional japanese houses, in the middle of nowhere. It was a Saying your previous sentence out loud would be fine and casual. "Really pretty" in your sentence, when spoken, would be like a side comment. In writing, however, it doesn't work. |
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Tono is the town of Kappa, a strange creature who looks like a turtle, not really friendly, because they eat little children if they approch rivers. Tono is the "Home of the ___" is a common phrase. (It appears in the American national anthem: "For the land of the free and the home of the brave".) |
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But they also help pregnant women.
Starting a sentence with "but" in English writing isn't technically correct, though it's fine in speech. |
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Strange duality, no? Strange duality, Ending a sentence with "no" like this isn't wrong necessarily, but I wouldn't say it's common. People will understand, so you can say it if you like. |
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I don't know why, but I felt good here, maybe because of the good energy. I don't know why, but I felt good there, maybe because of the good energy. |
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We met a group of children, around eight, who were playing, and when they saw us, they all said "Hello!" with a big smile. We met a group of children, around eight, who were playing The sentence is a bit long and uses lots of commas. It would be better to split it into two. |
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Apparently, they were too much old for Kappa. Apparently, they were too much old |
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Concerning the museum, we can saw a lot of different myths and legends about Japan. Concerning the museum, we |
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Of course, everything was in Japanese, but thank you Google Translate! Of course, everything was in Japanese, but |
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The museum was not really big, but we could find some interesting interactives expositions. The museum was "Expositions" and "exhibits" might mean the same thing technically, but "exposition" sounds very grand and formal. At a museum, there are "exhibits". |
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My favorite part was the big bookcase with a lot of incredible books. |
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I passed a lot of time just open books and look at the illustration. I |
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