Jan. 9, 2020
January 9th
I corrected many Japanese journals.
I am neither a professional teacher nor an especially intelligent person.
I just really like studying with people who are learning Japanese. :)
Also, I rewrote my past journals.
I really appreciate that so many people help me learn!
Thank you so much!
Today was a really good day!
I hope everyone has a wonderful day, and I hope tomorrow will be a lovely day as well. :)
Good night!
(Corrected on Jan. 13th)
私は日本語の日記をたくさん添削しました。私はプロの先生でも、特別知的な人物でもありません。ただ、日本語を学ぶ人たちと一緒に勉強するのが本当に好きなのです:) また、私は自分の過去の日記も書き直しました。たくさんの人が私の勉強を手伝ってくれることに感謝しています。本当にありがとうございます！
今日はとても良い一日でした。みなさんも素敵な一日になりますように。そして、明日もラブリーな一日でありますように。おやすみなさい！
9th, January 9th
I have corrected many Japanese journals.
I am neither a professional teacher nor an especially intelligent person.
without especially/particularly/etc is totally fine too, i just think it helps to clarify that you’re not saying that you’re not intelligent at all, but that you’re just normal :)
I just really like studying with people learning Japanese.
:)A I also I rewrote my past journals.
the other way around is fine too, but if the sentence is going to be short, I think this sounds better.
I really appreciate that so many people have helped me learn!
Jan. 9, 2020
Thank you for the correction!
Your explanations made sense to me.
I’m really happy to have such wonderful teachers here!😆💐
I hope everyone has a wonderful day ;)A, and I hope tomorrow will be a lovely day as well. :)¶
Good night!
As Bees mentioned, you shouldn't start a sentence with "and". However, you can combine sentences with "and" in order to get the same meaning.
But, I'd say that the way you wrote it is okay in this case because you weren't really starting another sentence, you were just splitting your sentence with ":)". However, you should remember that in proper English, you shouldn't start a sentence with "and".
Jan. 9, 2020
"who are learning Japanese" is more natural in this case.
Jan. 9, 2020
"so many people help me learn" is more natural in this case because the speaker is talking about a general fact that people *help* them and they are happy about that.
Jan. 9, 2020
Thank you for showing another sentence!
Yes, I’ll be more careful.
I really appreciate you took time for me. ☺️💐
9th,January 9¶
(The 9th of January)
I corrected many Japanese journals.
I am neither a professional teacher nor an intelligent person.
I just really like studying with people who learn Japanese.¶
(...who are learning Japanese).
I gave two options for the end of the sentence.
:)Also, I rewrote my past journals.
I really appreciate that so many people have helped me learn!
Thank you so much!
Today was a really good day!
I hope everyone has a wonderful day ;)And I hope tomorrow will be a lovely day as well. Good night!
You shouldn't start sentences with "and," and the "and" is made redundant by "as well" at the end of the sentence anyway.
Jan. 9, 2020
I just really like studying with people who learn Japanese.¶
(...who are learning Japanese).
"who are learning Japanese" is more natural in this case.
Jan. 9, 2020
I really appreciate that so many people have helped me learn!
"so many people help me learn" is more natural in this case because the speaker is talking about a general fact that people *help* them and they are happy about that.
Jan. 9, 2020
To Bees,
Thank you so much for the correction!
Oops, we Japanese really often start sentences with “And” or “But”.
I’ll be careful more!
Jan. 9, 2020
To Lorelei,
Thank you so much!
Your corrections are what I really wanted to say!
I appreciate that you respect what I meant!☺️💐
9th, January
I corrected many Japanese journals.
I am neither a professional teacher nor an intelligent person.
I just really like studying with people who learn Japanese.¶
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(alternatively: I really like to help people who are learning Japanese.)
:)Also I rewrote my past journals.
I really appreciate that many people helped me learn!
Thank you so much!
I hope everyone has a wonderful day ;)And I hope tomorrow will be a lovely day as well.Good night!
Feedback
Thank you for helping me today with my journal.
I hope your tomorrow will be as lovely as today :).
Jan. 9, 2020
Thank YOU for the correction!
Oops, I still make such an easy mistake...
I’ll keep on doing my best! :)
Thanks, same to you! I hope you have a lovely day too.☺️💐
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I am neither a professional teacher nor an intelligent person. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! I am neither a professional teacher nor an especially intelligent person. without especially/particularly/etc is totally fine too, i just think it helps to clarify that you’re not saying that you’re not intelligent at all, but that you’re just normal :) |
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:)Also I rewrote my past journals. This sentence has been marked as perfect! :)Also, I rewrote my past journals. :) the other way around is fine too, but if the sentence is going to be short, I think this sounds better. |
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I really appreciate that many people help me learn! I really appreciate that many people helped me learn! I really appreciate that so many people have helped me learn! I really appreciate that so many people have helped me learn! |
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I hope everyone has a wonderful day ;)And I hope tomorrow will be a lovely day.Good night! |
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I just really like studying with people learn Japanese. I just really like studying with people who learn Japanese.¶ I just really like studying with people who learn Japanese.¶ I gave two options for the end of the sentence. I just really like studying with people learning Japanese. |
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I hope everyone has a wonderful day ;)And I hope tomorrow will be a lovely day as well.Good night! This sentence has been marked as perfect! I hope everyone has a wonderful day ;) You shouldn't start sentences with "and," and the "and" is made redundant by "as well" at the end of the sentence anyway. I hope everyone has a wonderful day As Bees mentioned, you shouldn't start a sentence with "and". However, you can combine sentences with "and" in order to get the same meaning. But, I'd say that the way you wrote it is okay in this case because you weren't really starting another sentence, you were just splitting your sentence with ":)". However, you should remember that in proper English, you shouldn't start a sentence with "and". |
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January 9th |
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I am neither a professional teacher nor an especially intelligent person. |
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I just really like studying with people who are learning Japanese. |
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:)Also, I rewrote my past journals. |
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I really appreciate that so many people help me learn! |
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I hope everyone has a wonderful day, and I hope tomorrow will be a lovely day as well. |
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:)Good night! |
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(Corrected on Jan. 13th) |
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