Jan. 9, 2021
January 9
My butt and back hurt from sitting on a chair so long lately. Sometimes, I stand up and walk around my room, but it doesn’t have any effects on my body. I want to hang out with my friends in PE soon.
最近椅子に座りすぎていて、背中や腰が痛い。時々立ち上がって部屋を歩いたりしているが、効果はあんまり無い。早く体育で友達と遊びたい。
My butt and my back hurt from sitting on a chair for so long lately.
Sometimes, I stand up and walk around my room, but it doesn’t have any effects on my body.
Instead of "doesn’t have any effect on my body", I think it's more natural here to say that it "doesn't have any effect on my pain" or something similar to that.
Jan. 9, 2021
Thank you for correcting!
January 9
MRecently, my butt and back hurtave been hurting from sitting on a chair sofor long latelyperiods.
"lately" implies this is not a one-off thing, but "so long" indicates it's a one-off.
Sometimes, I stand up and walk around my room, but it doesn’t have any effects on my bodythe pain.
It has an "effect on my body": your body moves when you stand up and walk around.
I want to hang out with my friends in PE soon.
Jan. 10, 2021
Thank you for correcting!
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My butt and back hurt from sitting on a chair so long lately.
"lately" implies this is not a one-off thing, but "so long" indicates it's a one-off. My butt and my back hurt from sitting on a chair for so long lately. |
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Sometimes, I stand up and walk around my room, but it doesn’t have any effects on my body. Sometimes, I stand up and walk around my room, but it doesn’t have any effect It has an "effect on my body": your body moves when you stand up and walk around. Sometimes, I stand up and walk around my room, but it doesn’t have any effect Instead of "doesn’t have any effect on my body", I think it's more natural here to say that it "doesn't have any effect on my pain" or something similar to that. |
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I want to hang out with my friends in PE soon. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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