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sota

Jan. 3, 2021

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January 3rd

Christmas holidays are going to finish in four days from today. Normally I don’t want to finish the Christmas holidays, but this time is completely different. At the beginning of February, I’m going to go back to Japan, so I hope the time will pass quickly.


あと4日で冬休みが終わってしまう。いつもなら冬休みは終わって欲しくないけど、今回は違う。2月の上旬に日本に帰るから早く時間が過ぎて欲しい。

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January 3rd

Christmas holidays are going to finishend in four days from today.

'End' is better put. 'Finish' is understandable but sounds weird.

Normally, I don’t want to finish the Christmas holidays to end, but this timeyear is completely different.

Or:
"....I don't like when the Christmas holidays end"

At the beginning of February, I’m going to go back to Japan, so I hope the time will pass quickly.

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I'm sorry your holiday has not been so enjoyable. My relatives have remarked that Christmas had felt very ordinary to them.

I think in place of "Christmas holidays", you can also say "Christmas time" or even "Christmas season".

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sota

Jan. 3, 2021

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Thank you for correcting!
I had fun but I want to go back to Japan as soon as possible.

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kvningen

Jan. 3, 2021

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Understandable.

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January 3rd

The Christmas holidays are going to finish in four days from today.

When you just say "in XX days," it is understood to mean from today, so the "from today" is typically left out.

Normally I don’t want to finish the Christmas holidays to end, but this time is completely different.

since the Christmas holidays don't end as a result of something you do, it's more appropriate to say that they end.

At the beginning of February, I’m going to go back to Japan, so I hope the time will pass quickly.

The original sentence is correct, but it is generally redundant to say "going to go" when you've already made it clear that this will happen in the future.

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sota

Jan. 3, 2021

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Thank you for correcting!

January 3rd


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Christmas holidays are going to finish in four days from today.


The Christmas holidays are going to finish in four days from today.

When you just say "in XX days," it is understood to mean from today, so the "from today" is typically left out.

Christmas holidays are going to finishend in four days from today.

'End' is better put. 'Finish' is understandable but sounds weird.

Normally I don’t want to finish the Christmas holidays, but this time is completely different.


Normally I don’t want to finish the Christmas holidays to end, but this time is completely different.

since the Christmas holidays don't end as a result of something you do, it's more appropriate to say that they end.

Normally, I don’t want to finish the Christmas holidays to end, but this timeyear is completely different.

Or: "....I don't like when the Christmas holidays end"

At the beginning of February, I’m going to go back to Japan, so I hope the time will pass quickly.


At the beginning of February, I’m going to go back to Japan, so I hope the time will pass quickly.

The original sentence is correct, but it is generally redundant to say "going to go" when you've already made it clear that this will happen in the future.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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