Jan. 27, 2021
January 27
There is an online live concert of my favorite artist on Sunday. I'm wondering whether I should watch it or not, because I'm currently in the exam period until next Wednesday, but I want to watch it, so I will.
好きなアーティストのオンラインライブが今週の日曜日にある。テスト期間中だから見ようかどうか悩んだが、見たいので見ようと思う。
There is an online live concert of my favorite artistMy favorite artist is having a live concert online on Sunday.
I gave another way to write this sentence. Your sentence is correct but natives would use the active tense instead of the passive tense when expressing a thought like this.
I'm wondering whether I should watch it or not, because I'm currently in thean exam period until next Wednesday, b. But I want to watch it, so I will.
Here's another way of writing it. I broke up the sentence so that it's not so long.
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Great job as always!
Jan. 28, 2021
Thank you so much!
January 27
There is an online live concert of my favorite artistMy favourite artist is performing a live concert online on Sunday.
I'm wondering whether I should watch it or not, because I'm currently in the exam period don't finish my exams until next Wednesday, but I want to watch it, so I will.
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Both of your sentences make sense, but I just changed them a little to make it sound a little bit more natural. Good job!
Jan. 27, 2021
Thank you for correcting!
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January 27 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There is an online live concert of my favorite artist on Sunday.
I gave another way to write this sentence. Your sentence is correct but natives would use the active tense instead of the passive tense when expressing a thought like this. |
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I'm wondering whether I should watch it or not, because I'm currently in the exam period until next Wednesday, but I want to watch it, so I will. I'm wondering whether I should watch it or not, because I I'm wondering whether I should watch it or not Here's another way of writing it. I broke up the sentence so that it's not so long. |
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