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January 24th

I visited some Kimono rental shops today to prepare for my graduation celebration.
Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed a chance to take a photo wearing a Kimono at the time.
In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear Kimono for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremony or graduation.
It's so exciting to choose a favorite.
Unfortunately, I didn't find one I liked today, so I might visit another shop next time. I hope I can make time.

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Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed a chance to take a photo wearing a Kkimono at the time.

kimono is a category (as opposed to a brand or something) so doesn't take a capital letter

In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear Kkimonos for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremonyies or graduations.

kimono's plural form in English is kimonos. While Japanese does not have plural forms, Japanese loan words in English do.

January 24th

I visited some Kimono rental shops today to prepare for my graduation celebration.

Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed a chance to take a photo wearing a Kimono at the time.

In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear a Kimono for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremony or graduation.

It's so exciting to choose a favourite.

Unfortunately, I didn't find one I liked today, so I might visit another shop next time.

I hope I can make time.

January 24th

I visited some Kimono rental shops today to prepare for my graduation celebration.

Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed athe chance to take a photo wearing a Kimono at the time.

In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear a Kimono for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremony or graduation.

It's so exciting to choose ayour favorite one.

Unfortunately, I didn't find the one I liked today, so I might visit another shop next time.

I hope I can make it this time.

January 24th


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I visited some Kimono rental shops today to prepare for my graduation celebration.


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Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed a chance to take a photo wearing a Kimono at the time.


Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed athe chance to take a photo wearing a Kimono at the time.

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Actually, I graduated from the university about two years ago, but I missed a chance to take a photo wearing a Kkimono at the time.

kimono is a category (as opposed to a brand or something) so doesn't take a capital letter

It's so exciting to choose a favorite.


It's so exciting to choose ayour favorite one.

It's so exciting to choose a favourite.

In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear Kimono for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremony or graduation.


In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear a Kimono for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremony or graduation.

In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear a Kimono for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremony or graduation.

In Japan, especially for females, it is common to wear Kkimonos for celebrations like the coming-of-age ceremonyies or graduations.

kimono's plural form in English is kimonos. While Japanese does not have plural forms, Japanese loan words in English do.

Unfortunately, I didn't find one I liked today, so I might visit another shop next time.


Unfortunately, I didn't find the one I liked today, so I might visit another shop next time.

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I hope I can make time.


I hope I can make it this time.

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