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Jan. 17, 2021

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January 17

The amount of people infected with the Coronavirus in Spain is increasing again. Therefore, I was thinking about going to my favourite Korean restaurant next week, but I can’t go now because of the Coronavirus. I want to eat Bulgogi.


スペインのコロナ感染者がまた増えてきた。そのせいで、美味しい韓国のレストランに来週行こうと思っていたのに行けなくなった。プルコギを食べたい。

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Therefore, I was thinking about going to my favourite Korean restaurant next week, but I can’t go now because of the Coronavirus.

"Therefore" sounds a little strange in this context. Leaving it out sounds better.

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What you wrote is very good and I totally sympathize with you! Good job!

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sota

Jan. 19, 2021

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Thank you so much!

January 17

The amountnumber of people infected with the Ccoronavirus in Spain is increasing again.

We tend to use “number” when it refers to something countable.

Therefore, I was thinking aboutof going to my favourite Korean restaurant next week, but I can’t go now because of the Ccoronavirus.

“Therefore” suggests that you’re introducing an argument or conclusion that follows. While I suppose you are indeed doing that, it doesn’t make sense here because it sounds like “I was thinking of going to my favourite Korean restaurant” is the result of what is described in the previous sentence. If you wanted to keep the “therefore,” you could instead write something like: “Therefore, I had to give up on my idea of going to my favourite Korean restaurant next week.”

I want to eat Bulgogi.

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sota

Jan. 17, 2021

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Thank you for correcting!

January 17


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The amount of people infected with the Coronavirus in Spain is increasing again.


The amountnumber of people infected with the Ccoronavirus in Spain is increasing again.

We tend to use “number” when it refers to something countable.

Therefore, I was thinking about going to my favourite Korean restaurant next week, but I can’t go now because of the Coronavirus.


Therefore, I was thinking aboutof going to my favourite Korean restaurant next week, but I can’t go now because of the Ccoronavirus.

“Therefore” suggests that you’re introducing an argument or conclusion that follows. While I suppose you are indeed doing that, it doesn’t make sense here because it sounds like “I was thinking of going to my favourite Korean restaurant” is the result of what is described in the previous sentence. If you wanted to keep the “therefore,” you could instead write something like: “Therefore, I had to give up on my idea of going to my favourite Korean restaurant next week.”

Therefore, I was thinking about going to my favourite Korean restaurant next week, but I can’t go now because of the Coronavirus.

"Therefore" sounds a little strange in this context. Leaving it out sounds better.

I want to eat Bulgogi.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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