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January 16th, 2023: Sentences.

Once a friend of mine almost die drowned while trekking up to the mountain with me and another friend. A flood coming from the highest part of the stream hit his legs throwing him into the the deep waters. We could rescue him, but he's definatelly not willing to go on the next adventure.
I realy get upset with folks who try to sel thenselves like playful, but can not deal with a single joke or someone laughting at him for a second.
I could understand, after a while, that compliments can be dangerous at some extent. That's why we should be careful with people who only praise the others all the time.
She aren't taken food to her work everyday, so she buys something to eat in the supermarket nearby at her lunch time when is necessary.
I took my sister to the bus station yesterday morning. I'll get her again tomorow when she arrive.

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Once a friend of mine almost die drowned while trekking up to the mountain with me and another friend.

A floodcurrent coming from the highest part of the stream hit his legs throw, pushing him into the the deeper waters.

We could were able to rescue him, but he's definaitelly not willing to go on the next adventure.

I really get upset with folks who try to sell thenmselves likeas playful, but can not deal with a single joke or someone laughting at hithem for a second.

I could understand, after a while, that compliments can be dangerous ato some extent.

That's why we should be careful with people who only praise the others all the time.

She areisn't takening food to her work everyday, so she buys something to eat in the nearby supermarket nearby at her lunch time when it is necessary.

I took my sister to the bus station yesterday morning.

I'll getpick her up again tomorrow when she arrives.

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joaorocha

Jan. 17, 2023

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Thank you a lot.

January 16th, 2023: Sentences.

Once a friend of mine almost died by drowneding while trekking up (to) the mountain with me and another friend.

A flood coming from the highest part of the stream hit his legs, throwing him into the (the) deep waters(s).

“Deep waters” is possible, but “deep water” sounds more natural.

We could were able to rescue him, but he's definaitelly not willing to go on the next adventure.

I really get upset with folks who try to sell thenmselves likeas playful, but can not deal with a single joke or someone laughting at hithem for a second.

I could understanood, after a while, that compliments canould be dangerous ato some extent.

That's why we should be careful with people who only praise the others all the time.

She aredoesn't taken food to her work every day, so she buys something to eat in the supermarket nearby at (her) lunch time when is necessary.

I took my sister to the bus station yesterday morning.

I'll get her again tomorrow when she arrive.s / returns.

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January 16th, 2023: Sentences.


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Once a friend of mine almost die drowned while trekking up to the mountain with me and another friend.


Once a friend of mine almost died by drowneding while trekking up (to) the mountain with me and another friend.

Once a friend of mine almost die drowned while trekking up to the mountain with me and another friend.

A flood coming from the highest part of the stream hit his legs throwing him into the the deep waters.


A flood coming from the highest part of the stream hit his legs, throwing him into the (the) deep waters(s).

“Deep waters” is possible, but “deep water” sounds more natural.

A floodcurrent coming from the highest part of the stream hit his legs throw, pushing him into the the deeper waters.

We could rescue him, but he's definatelly not willing to go on the next adventure.


We could were able to rescue him, but he's definaitelly not willing to go on the next adventure.

We could were able to rescue him, but he's definaitelly not willing to go on the next adventure.

I realy get upset with folks who try to sel thenselves like playful, but can not deal with a single joke or someone laughting at him for a second.


I really get upset with folks who try to sell thenmselves likeas playful, but can not deal with a single joke or someone laughting at hithem for a second.

I really get upset with folks who try to sell thenmselves likeas playful, but can not deal with a single joke or someone laughting at hithem for a second.

I could understand, after a while, that compliments can be dangerous at some extent.


I could understanood, after a while, that compliments canould be dangerous ato some extent.

I could understand, after a while, that compliments can be dangerous ato some extent.

That's why we should be careful with people who only praise the others all the time.


That's why we should be careful with people who only praise the others all the time.

That's why we should be careful with people who only praise the others all the time.

She aren't taken food to her work everyday, so she buys something to eat in the supermarket nearby at her lunch time when is necessary.


She aredoesn't taken food to her work every day, so she buys something to eat in the supermarket nearby at (her) lunch time when is necessary.

She areisn't takening food to her work everyday, so she buys something to eat in the nearby supermarket nearby at her lunch time when it is necessary.

I took my sister to the bus station yesterday morning.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'll get her again tomorow when she arrive.


I'll get her again tomorrow when she arrive.s / returns.

I'll getpick her up again tomorrow when she arrives.

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