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January 16th

I had a salad bowl for lunch today.
This is my favorite on a working day. I can order it through my smartphone before visiting the shop, freely customize the ingredients, and also choose two types of dressings.
The only negative point is the cost. This salad bowl is a little bit too expensive for lunch.
That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the day when I really work hard or face too many tasks.

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January 16th

I had a salad bowl for lunch today.

This is my favorite on a working day.

I can order it through my smartphone before visiting the shop, freely customize the ingredients, and also choose two types of dressings.

The only negative point is the cost.

This salad bowl is a little bit too expensive for lunch.

That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the day when I really work hard or face too many tasks.

January 16th

I had a salad bowl for lunch today.

This is my favorite on a working day.

I can order it through my smartphone before visiting the shop, freely customize the ingredients, and also choose two types of dressings.

The only negative point is the cost.

This salad bowl is a little bit too expensive for lunch.

That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the days when I really work hard or face too many tasks.

"On the day" implies only one day. Here, you can choose to write either "on the days" or "on a day".

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Well-written.

January 16th


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I had a salad bowl for lunch today.


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This is my favorite on a working day.


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This is my favorite on a working day.

I can order it through my smartphone before visiting the shop, freely customize the ingredients, and also choose two types of dressings.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The only negative point is the cost.


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This salad bowl is a little bit too expensive for lunch.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the day when I really work hard or face too many tasks.


That's why I get this as a small gift for myself on the days when I really work hard or face too many tasks.

"On the day" implies only one day. Here, you can choose to write either "on the days" or "on a day".

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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