Jan. 16, 2021
January 16
From today, I can’t write a long English diary like during the Christmas holidays. I have semester exams until February 3rd, so I want to allocate my study time to study for the exams. I want to get a good grade because it’s the last exam at my school.
これからは冬休み中のような長い英語日記は書けない。2月3日までセメスターがあるから勉強時間を試験勉強に割り当てたい。最後の試験だからいい点数を取りたいな。
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Starting today, I can’t write as much in my diary as I could during the Christmas holidays.
We usually just compare something between times as "more" or "less."
I have semester exams until February 3rd, so I want to allocate my study time to study for the exams.
I want to get a good grade because it’s the last exam at my school.
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Terrific job!
Jan. 17, 2021
Thank you so much!
January 16
From today on, I can’twon't be able to write a long English diary likeentries like I did during the Christmaswinter holidays.
"from today" isn't really something we say, instead you can use "from today on" or "starting today" or "from today onwards". In a business or at work, they often say "Effective today", instead. Also, I changed the tense from present to future, since you are talking about something that is going to happen in the future (in the future, you won't be able to write long diary entries).
"a long English diary" sounds like you mean a whole entire diary, so hundreds of pages long. I think you meant just a single diary entry or page in your diary, so that's why I changed it.
I can't remember hearing people say "Christmas holidays", it didn't sound natural to me. I think "冬休み" can be translated as "winter holidays" or even "winter break" if you are talking about a break/vacation/holiday from school.
I have semester exams until February 3rd, so I want to allocate my study time to study for the exams.
I want to get a good grade because it’s the last exam at my school.
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Good luck on your exams! You did a great job writing this. At my school, we had our semester exams last month in December, and now the new semester just started this month.
Jan. 16, 2021
Thank you for correcting!
I hope you will get good grades on your exams.
Good luck!
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From today, I can’t write a long English diary like during the Christmas holidays. From today on, I "from today" isn't really something we say, instead you can use "from today on" or "starting today" or "from today onwards". In a business or at work, they often say "Effective today", instead. Also, I changed the tense from present to future, since you are talking about something that is going to happen in the future (in the future, you won't be able to write long diary entries). "a long English diary" sounds like you mean a whole entire diary, so hundreds of pages long. I think you meant just a single diary entry or page in your diary, so that's why I changed it. I can't remember hearing people say "Christmas holidays", it didn't sound natural to me. I think "冬休み" can be translated as "winter holidays" or even "winter break" if you are talking about a break/vacation/holiday from school.
We usually just compare something between times as "more" or "less." |
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I have semester exams until February 3rd, so I want to allocate my study time to study for the exams. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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