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sota

Jan. 13, 2021

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January 13

I’ve been very busy lately. I have plenty of school projects, assignments and tests. I have too much to do and I don't know what to do. I'm also running out of time to write an English diary.


最近すごく忙しい。学校でプロジェクトや課題、テストがあるからだ。しなきゃいけない事が多すぎて、何をすればいいかわからない。英語日記を書く時間も無くなってきている。

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January 13

I’ve been very busy lately.

I have plenty of school projects, assignments and tests.

I have too much to do and I don't know what to do.

I'm also running out of time to write an English diary entry.

Like the other reviewer, writing an entire diary is not something you would do all at once. You could also say:

I'm also running out of time to start an English diary.

which also implies you are not completing the entire diary at once.

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Overall this is excellent.

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sota

Jan. 14, 2021

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Thank you for correcting!

I’ve been very busy lately.

I have plentylots of of school projects, assignments and tests.

"plenty of" usually has positive meanings in English. Examples might be: I have plenty of food. I have plenty of friends. So because this is a negative thing to have a lot of, "lots of" is probably better.

I have too much to do and I don't know what to do about it.

I think the original could be left uncorrected, but it sounds a bit odd to repeat "to do" like that, so I added some words to make it sound a bit more natural.

I'm also running out of time to write an English diary entry.

"An English diary" would refer to writing the entire diary. So you can't really write one, because it is too much to write in one go.

So you can either say:

"Running out of time to write an English diary entry." Which means writing one individual post in the diary.

OR

"Running out of time to keep an English diary." The verb keep is the term used to refer to the act of maintaining a consistent habit of writing in your diary.

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I think overall your English was very good, there were just small mistakes to clean up. Sorry to hear about your busy times, but do your best, and it will eventually pass!

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sota

Jan. 13, 2021

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Thank you for correcting!
Your explanations are very easy to understand.
I'll do my best!

January 13


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’ve been very busy lately.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have plenty of school projects, assignments and tests.


I have plentylots of of school projects, assignments and tests.

"plenty of" usually has positive meanings in English. Examples might be: I have plenty of food. I have plenty of friends. So because this is a negative thing to have a lot of, "lots of" is probably better.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have too much to do and I don't know what to do.


I have too much to do and I don't know what to do about it.

I think the original could be left uncorrected, but it sounds a bit odd to repeat "to do" like that, so I added some words to make it sound a bit more natural.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm also running out of time to write an English diary.


I'm also running out of time to write an English diary entry.

"An English diary" would refer to writing the entire diary. So you can't really write one, because it is too much to write in one go. So you can either say: "Running out of time to write an English diary entry." Which means writing one individual post in the diary. OR "Running out of time to keep an English diary." The verb keep is the term used to refer to the act of maintaining a consistent habit of writing in your diary.

I'm also running out of time to write an English diary entry.

Like the other reviewer, writing an entire diary is not something you would do all at once. You could also say: I'm also running out of time to start an English diary. which also implies you are not completing the entire diary at once.

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