Jan. 27, 2021
Jan. 26, 2021 Different education systems
There are many different education systems in the world. Today, Alex gave us a presentation about the education in Canada and Japan. One thing that was surprised me was that the number of students in a classroom of a kindergarten is more than the number of students in a classroom of an elementary school or a high school. I don’t know if it’s the same in Japan, but it’s the opposite in China. It was maximal number of students in my son’s kindergarten was 30 in a classroom, and there were 2 teachers and 1 child-care worker. The maximal number of students in a classroom of his elementary school was 35, and it was 40 students in a classroom when he went to grade 6 which is the middle school. And I think it would be 50 in most of high schools, even more. Maybe we think when children grow up, it will be easier to manage them. Canadians might think it on another way. I believe that other places have their own ways too.
Jan. 26, 2021 Different education systems
There are many different education systems in the world.
Today, Alex gave us a presentation about the education in Canada and Japan.
One thing that was surprised me was that the number ofre are more students in a classroom of a kindergarten is more than the number of students in a classroom of an elementary school or akindergarten classrooms than in elementary or high schools.
What you wrote was technically correct, but this is more concise.
I don’t know if it’s the same in Japan, but it’s the opposite in China.
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The maximalum number of students in a classroom of his elementary school was 35, and it was 40 students in a classroom when he went to grade 6six, which is the middle school.
And I think it would be 50 in most of high schools, perhaps even more.
Maybe we think when children grow up, it will be easier to manage them.
Canadians might think it on another wadifferently.
I believe that other places have their own ways, too.
Jan. 28, 2021
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There are many different education systems in the world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today, Alex gave us a presentation about the education in Canada and Japan. Today, Alex gave |
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One thing that was surprised me was that the number of students in a classroom of a kindergarten is more than the number of students in a classroom of an elementary school or a high school. One thing that was surprised me was that the What you wrote was technically correct, but this is more concise. |
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I don’t know if it’s the same in Japan, but it’s the opposite in China. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was maximal number of students in my son’s kindergarten was 30 in a classroom, and there were 2 teachers and 1 child-care worker.
Convention: write out numbers from one through nine, use numerals for 10 and over. Exception: if the number starts the sentence, spell it out, even if it's over 10. |
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The maximal number of students in a classroom of his elementary school was 35, and it was 40 students in a classroom when he went to grade 6 which is the middle school. The maxim |
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And I think it would be 50 in most of high schools, even more. And I think it would be 50 in most |
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Maybe we think when children grow up, it will be easier to manage them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Canadians might think it on another way. Canadians might think |
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I believe that other places have their own ways too. I believe that other places have their own ways, too. |
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