Jan. 16, 2021
Jan. 16, 2021 About spam emails.
I watched a Ted speech that was speeched by James Veitch. He talked about spam emails.
I think James Veitch is funny and brave. When I receive spam emails, I just do one thing that is to delete them, I think the most people are doing the same things with me. But he did something different, in a funny way. In his talk, his tones and emotions made that their emails sounded funnier. The things what he did are may not a big thing, but, like he said, he had some fun, and he wasted them time to give other’s behalf.
Jan. 16, 2021 About spam emails.
I watched a Ted talk speech that was speechedgiven by James Veitch.
He talked about spam emails.
I think James Veitch is funny and brave.
When I receive spam emails, I just do one thing that is to delete them, I think the most people are doing the same things with me.
When I receive spam emails, I just do one thing and that is to delete them, I think that most people do the same thing as me
But he did something different, in a funny way.
In his talk, his tones and emotions made that their emails sounded funnier.
In his talk, his tone and emotions made it so their emails sounded more funny
The things what he did are may not a big thing, but, like he said, he had some fun, and he wasted them time to give other’s behalf.
The things which he did may not have been much, but, like he said, he had some fun and he wasted their time on other people's behalf
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Very strong and fluidly written! :)
Jan. 18, 2021
Thank you for your corrections! It's helpful!
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Jan. 16, 2021 About spam emails. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I watched a Ted speech that was speeched by James Veitch. I watched a Ted talk speech that was |
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He talked about spam emails. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think James Veitch is funny and brave. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I receive spam emails, I just do one thing that is to delete them, I think the most people are doing the same things with me. When I receive spam emails, I just do one thing that is to delete them, I think the most people are doing the same things with me. When I receive spam emails, I just do one thing and that is to delete them, I think that most people do the same thing as me |
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But he did something different, in a funny way. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In his talk, his tones and emotions made that their emails sounded funnier. In his talk, his tones and emotions made that their emails sounded funnier. In his talk, his tone and emotions made it so their emails sounded more funny |
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The things what he did are may not a big thing, but, like he said, he had some fun, and he wasted them time to give other’s behalf. The things what he did are may not a big thing, but, like he said, he had some fun, and he wasted them time to give other’s behalf. The things which he did may not have been much, but, like he said, he had some fun and he wasted their time on other people's behalf |
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