Jan. 11, 2021
In our culture, people believe when they died, they will get reincarnation. That means you will born as an another person or maybe an another species, like an animal. When the first time I knew that, I was thinking that I would like to be a big tree if I can choose the next life. A tree that's big, straight and tall. A tree that never moves, doesn't matter how the environment changes. A tree that always stable, kind and reliable.
Jan. 10, 2021 The Tree
In our culture, people believe when they died, they will getbe reincarnationed.
That means you will be reborn as an another person or maybe an another species, like an animal.
"Born" is grammatical, but "reborn" makes more sense here.
When the first time I knewheard that, I was thinking that I would like to be a big tree if I canould choose the next life.
"Know" implies a continued state, so it doesn't make sense to talk about a "first time."
A tree that's big, straight and tall.
A tree that never moves, doesn'tno matter how the environment changes.
A tree that is always stable, kind and reliable.
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Jan. 10, 2021 The Tree This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In our culture, people believe when they died, they will get reincarnation. In our culture, people believe when they die |
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That means you will born as an another person or maybe an another species, like an animal. That means you will be reborn as an another person or maybe an another species, like an animal. "Born" is grammatical, but "reborn" makes more sense here. |
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When the first time I knew that, I was thinking that I would like to be a big tree if I can choose the next life. When the first time I "Know" implies a continued state, so it doesn't make sense to talk about a "first time." |
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A tree that's big, straight and tall. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A tree that never moves, doesn't matter how the environment changes. A tree that never moves, |
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A tree that always stable, kind and reliable. A tree that is always stable, kind and reliable. |
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