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My fFirst eExperience My First Experience

Since nNovember, I've lived in Canada. Since November, I've lived in Canada.

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Since nNovember, I have lived in Canada. Since November, I have lived in Canada.

We capitalize the name of the months.

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Here iIt is very cold then Ire, but I recently discover aed hot chocolate. It is very cold here, but I recently discovered hot chocolate.

Hot chocolate is a veritabley delicious hot drink, and it is athe best way to reduce the cold. Hot chocolate is a very delicious hot drink, and it is the best way to reduce the cold.

Hot chocolate is a veritable delicious hot drink,; it is athe best way to reduce the cold here. Hot chocolate is a veritable delicious hot drink; it is the best way to reduce the cold here.

Hot chocolate is a veritabletruly delicious hot drink, i. It is athe best way to reduce the cold. Hot chocolate is a truly delicious hot drink. It is the best way to reduce the cold.

"Veritable" is technically correct but that's a much more formal word for this casual essay. "Truly" is more natural.

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I change it to "box" from "bottle", because most hot chocolate is made from a powdered mix or just cocoa. Neither come in a bottle.

I verywould very much like that Io buy a bottle of chocolate to, so that I can do int by my self at home. I would very much like to buy a bottle of chocolate, so that I can do it by myself at home.

I very like that Io buy a bottle of chocolate to do inmake for my self at home. I like to buy a bottle of chocolate to make for myself at home.

Thanks you. Thank you.

Thanks you. Thank you.

Thanks you. Thank you.