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I want to be more colloquial, please!:)

Do you know why I hate parents call me away when I playing game? Imagine that League of Legends is a game of pickup basketball on the street; it’s a 5 on 5.  Midway through, said pickup game is interrupted by a parent, who walks into the middle of the court and grabs their son, telling everyone else they’ve got to go now, and could everyone else please pause the game? Then said player never comes back. Well, first of all, the game doesn’t stop. The opposite five players pounce on the opportunity and quickly defeat the team that’s down one player. The sheer irritation that evokes in the other four players on that team is kind of like the league of legends. They will take it out on the player who’s missing, even if it’s not his fault.  
Just like most other boys, playing computer games are my best amusement during my different steps of my life. What’s more, some games are famous for their strategy and maneuverability, as time goes by, they are becoming called e-sport. A game called league of legends is my favorite game. I’m really craze about it. I have been played it for 7 years and it really gave me a lot of fun. It was very popular around all the China and even the world. At the past Time, I often ran fast to the Internet bar with my classmates in case there were no seats to play. As the ages we are growing, The most attractive of the game is that it can give us more chance to get together with our best friends. The more I growing, the more lonely I feeling. We less like most girls enjoy shopping or hanging around. Instead, we boys enjoy playing games together. We shout, we laugh, we feel excited together and all the stress or annoyance disappear as well. It’s really the best way for us get along and spend the precious night we had. Simply said, I regard league of legends as a friend, less like a computer game.

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Instead, weus boys enjoy playing games together.

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I want to be more colloquial, please!:)

Imagine that League of Legends is a game of pickup basketball on the street; it’s a 5 on 5.

Midway through, said pickup game is interrupted by a parent, who walks into the middle of the court and grabs their son, telling everyone else they’ve got to go now, and could everyone else please pause the game?

Then said player never comes back.

Well, first of all, the game doesn’t stop.

The opposite five players pounce on the opportunity and quickly defeat the team that’s down one player.

They will take it out on the player who’s missing, even if it’s not his fault.

Instead, we boys enjoy playing games together.

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Then said player never comes back.

Well, first of all, the game doesn’t stop.

The opposite five players pounce on the opportunity and quickly defeat the team that’s down one player.

They will take it out on the player who’s missing, even if it’s not his fault.

A game called league of legends is my favorite game.

I’m really craze about it.

Instead, we boys enjoy playing games together.

We shout, we laugh, we feel excited together and all the stress or annoyance disappear as well.

It’s really the best way for us get along and spend the precious night we had.

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I want to be more colloquial, please!:)


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Do you know why I hate parents call me away when I playing game?


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Imagine that League of Legends is a game of pickup basketball on the street; it’s a 5 on 5.


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Midway through, said pickup game is interrupted by a parent, who walks into the middle of the court and grabs their son, telling everyone else they’ve got to go now, and could everyone else please pause the game?


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Then said player never comes back.


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Then said, the player whose parent showed up will never comes back. Then, the player whose parent showed up will never come back.

Well, first of all, the game doesn’t stop.


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The opposite five players pounce on the opportunity and quickly defeat the team that’s down one player.


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The opposite five playersng team will pounce on the opportunity and quickly defeat the team that’s down one player. The opposing team will pounce on the opportunity and quickly defeat the team that’s down one player.

The sheer irritation that evokes in the other four players on that team is kind of like the league of legends.


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They will take it out on the player who’s missing, even if it’s not his fault.


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They will take it out on the player who’s missing has to leave, even if it’s not his fault. They will take it out on the player who has to leave, even if it’s not his fault.

Just like most other boys, playing computer games are my best amusement during my different steps of my life.


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What’s more, some games are famous for their strategy and maneuverability, as time goes by, they are becoming called e-sport.


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A game called league of legends is my favorite game.


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I’m really craze about it.


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I’m really craze about it.

I have been played it for 7 years and it really gave me a lot of fun.


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It was very popular around all the China and even the world.


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At the past Time, I often ran fast to the Internet bar with my classmates in case there were no seats to play.


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As the ages we are growing, The most attractive of the game is that it can give us more chance to get together with our best friends.


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Instead, we boys enjoy playing games together.


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Instead, weus boys enjoy playing games together. Instead, us boys enjoy playing games together.

We shout, we laugh, we feel excited together and all the stress or annoyance disappear as well.


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We shout, we laugh, we feel excited together and all the stress or annoyance disappears as well. We shout, we laugh, we feel excited together and all the stress or annoyance disappears as well.

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It’s really the best way for us get along and spend the precious night we had.


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It’s really the best way for us get along/together and spend the precious nights we hadve. It’s really the best way for us get along/together and spend the precious nights we have.

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Simply said, I regard league of legends as a friend, less like a computer game.


Simply said, I regard league of legends asmore like a friend, and less like a computer game. Simply said, I regard league of legends more like a friend, and less like a computer game.

Simply said, I regard league of legends as a friend, and less like a computer game. Simply said, I regard league of legends as a friend and less like a computer game.

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