Rabndom story 3 : Queen of the Swamps Random story 3 : Queen of the Swamps

I think you were trying to write random instead of rabdom.

- Ragnar Stormbreaker - Our group went throwugh the Swamps. - Ragnar Stormbreaker - Our group went through the Swamps.

Throw is not the correct word here.

The wood road was long and wide. The wood road was long and wide.

I think when you refer to "the wood road" you are referring to a bridge

Everything was dark and miysterious. Everything was dark and mysterious.

spelling error.

It was almoust dark when we heard wieird noises. It was almost dark when we heard weird noises.

We stopped... Gebrin wanted to say something but I shuted him down and listened. We stopped... Gebrin wanted to say something but I shut him down and listened.

all verbs need to be in past tense. Shut is the past tense instead of shutted.

We trurned around and saw humean whith a mask. We turned around and saw human with a mask.

Then he threw a something that exploded. Then he threw something that exploded.

Something flows better than a thing. explode needs to be in past tense.

In oOne moment there was onliy one persone, but then there were lots of strange people with guns and explosives. One moment there was only one person, but then there were lots of strange people with guns and explosives.

Than starteden, a big fight started. Then, a big fight started.

rearrange words.