Jan. 16, 2021
I love cats. They are always around my side, and scratch my feet gently. But my mother disagreed with me that I could keep a cat. she said " keeping a cat needs a lot of patience which you don't have. what's more, you're using my money to keep a cat." well. I think she is right. I will definitely keep a cat once I worked.
I want to keep a cat
I love cats.
They are always aroundby my side, and scratch my feet gently.
They are always by my side and scratch my feet gently.
But my mother disagreed with me that I could keep a cat.
But my mother disagreed that I could keep a cat.
sShe said, " kKeeping a cat needrequires a lot of patience whichthat you don't have.
She said, "Keeping a cat requires a lot of patience that you don't have.
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What's more, you would be using my money to keep a cat."
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I think she is right.
I will definitely keepget a cat once I workedhave my own money.
I will definitely get a cat once I have my own money.
I want to keephave a cat
I want to have a cat
They are always aroundby my side, and scratch my feet gently.
They are always by my side and scratch my feet gently.
But my mother disagreed with me that I could keepoes not want me to have a cat.
But my mother does not want me to have a cat.
sShe said " keephaving a cat needtakes a lot of patience which you don't have.
She said " having a cat takes a lot of patience which you don't have.
wWhat's more, you're using my money to keephave a cat."
What's more, you're using my money to have a cat."
wWell, I think she is right.
Well, I think she is right.
I think she is right.
I will definitely keepget a cat once I workedhave a job and my own money.
I will definitely get a cat once I have a job and my own money.
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Great job! Especially the gerund with "having a cat takes a lot of patience"--not always the easiest grammar structure! Generally, you "have a pet" if you're talking about a long time, and you "get a pet" if you're talking about the start of having a pet.
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I want to keep a cat
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I love cats. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They are always around my side, and scratch my feet gently.
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They are always |
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But my mother disagreed with me that I could keep a cat.
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But my mother disagreed |
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she said " keeping a cat needs a lot of patience which you don't have.
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what's more, you're using my money to keep a cat."
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well.
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I think she is right.
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I will definitely keep a cat once I worked.
I will definitely
I will definitely |
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