During the day he is a normal employee of thea company. During the day he is a normal employee of a company.

This is the first time you've mentioned the company, so "a company" is more natural than "the company".

But at night, Elliot hacks various criminanls. But at night, Elliot hacks various criminals.

He dreamings about world revolution and destroying big companyies. He dreams about world revolution and destroying big companies.

"Company" is an irregular noun. The plural form is "companies".

He also suffers from social phobia and talking withs to himself. He also suffers from social phobia and talks to himself.

(1) Social phobia is more commonly known as social anxiety. (2) I think "talks to" is more natural here. "Talks with" might be used in situations where there is more than one person.

One day Elliot baecomes a member of a hacker group., One day Elliot becomes a member of a hacker group,

You can merge this sentence with the one below.

Tthe purpose of which is to destroy "E E-Corp" (E -Corp is the biggest corporation in the world of Mr. Robot). the purpose of which is to destroy E-Corp (E-Corp is the biggest corporation in the world of Mr. Robot).

You don't need quotation marks around company names.

FThe first season was beautiful. The first season was beautiful.

A Show That Disappointed Me A Show That Disappointed Me

RI recently I finished watching a show. I recently finished watching a show.

To me, this sounds more natural.

Thate shows has name was called "Mr. Robot". The show was called "Mr. Robot".

It's only one show, so you should use the singular "show" and not the plural "shows".

Interesting characters and plot, riddles, and a paranoid atmosphere. Interesting characters and plot, riddles, and a paranoid atmosphere.

But then something happeneds. But then something happened.

SThe second season was mostly slowly. The second season was mostly slow.

"Slowly" is an adverb, used to describe an action. The adjective is "slow".

Sometimes characters doingid illogical things, and there were many empty conversations. Sometimes characters did illogical things, and there were many empty conversations.

[But this seasons has realy god series, who can surprised viewer.]? [But this seasons has realy god series, who can surprised viewer.]?

I'm not too sure about what you meant to convey here. If you can provide me the native text in Ukrainian, I can help you further.

Thirdy season. Third season.

AThe atmosphere fisrrom the first season is gone, alsos well as the logic. The atmosphere from the first season is gone, as well as the logic.

The plot continues moving because it needs a writer. The plot continues moving because it needs a writer.

I'm not too sure how the plot needing a writer causes it to continue moving forward.

Elliot`'s story could have ended many times if not for deus ex machina. Elliot's story could have ended many times if not for deus ex machina.

The grand finale in this epic story. The grand finale in this epic story.

All the seasons feelslt like they were geared towards young adults. All the seasons felt like they were geared towards young adults.

I'm not 100% sure what you meant by this sentence, but I took my best guess at it.

Many "characters lacked a real function", stupidthe plot twist, was stupid logic, and so was the main antagonist. Many characters lacked a real function, the plot twist was stupid, and so was the main antagonist.

I'm not too sure what you meant by "character function", but I again took my best guess. Are you trying to say that many characters had no real function in the plot?

In general season feeling likeOverall, it felt like it was warming up before something bigger. Overall, it felt like it was warming up for something bigger.

The real problems are just beginning. The real problems are just beginning.

The show lost it's character. The show lost its character.