(They must have gotten the information somewhere) I, who was not so interested in the train could assist this exceptional moment,. I think the life is not just not for me. (They must have gotten the information somewhere) I, who was not so interested in the train could assist this exceptional moment. I think the life is just not for me.

(They must have gottenfound the information somewhere). I, who was not so interested in the train, could assistnot appreciate this exceptional moment,. I think theat life is not just. They must have found the information somewhere. I, who was not so interested in the train, could not appreciate this exceptional moment. I think that life is not just.

The parentheses are not needed. "Found" would work better in the sentence I am not sure what you mean by "could assist". I changed the sentence to clarify that you felt you did not enjoy the experience as much as the train fans would have.

(They must have gotten the information somewhere) I, who was not so interested in the train could assistexperience this exceptional moment,. I think theat life is not just. (They must have gotten the information somewhere) I, who was not so interested in the train could experience this exceptional moment. I think that life is not just.

I'm guessing a bit as to what you meant by assist, I think it was experience

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MonitorGuided Tour 1 Guided Tour 1

I didn't catch this reviewing the other piece, I just assumed it was a brand name, but Monitor Tour is 和製英語 - in English we would say Guided Tour

Since this train was exclusively reserved for the participants of this tour, the time table was not typical so there was a moment that 2 trains crossed where they never did it. Since this train was exclusively reserved for the participants of this tour, the time table was not typical so there was a moment that 2 trains crossed where they never did.

Since thise train was exclusively reserved for the participants of thise tour, the time table was not typical so there was. This resulted in a moment that 2where two trains crossed where they never did itin a place they would not normally. Since the train was exclusively reserved for the participants of the tour, the time table was not typical. This resulted in a moment where two trains crossed in a place they would not normally.

I broke it into two sentences and changed the ending to sound more natural. It does not work well as one long sentence.

Since this train was exclusively reserved for the participants of this tour, the time table was not typical so there was a moment that 2 trains crossed where they never did iormally would not. Since this train was exclusively reserved for the participants of this tour, the time table was not typical so there was a moment that 2 trains crossed where they normally would not.

Never is too strong here, as it implies that it has never happened before.

I participated in a monitoring tour organized by the tourist association of my city. I participated in a monitoring tour organized by the tourist association of my city.

I participated in a monitorguided tour organized by the tourist association of my city. I participated in a guided tour organized by the tourist association of my city.

The tour was divided into 2 sections; Ta tour with the local train and a visit of 3 sake breweries. The tour was divided into 2 sections; a tour with the local train and a visit of 3 sake breweries.

When using a semicolon you don't need to capitalize the next word. When listing things like you are here, it flows better to include an article

The tour was divided into 2 sections; TA tour with theon a local train and a visit tof 3 sake breweries. The tour was divided into 2 sections; A tour on a local train and a visit to 3 sake breweries.

I am not a lover of the train but since I had almost never tookaken this local train, I was just curious. I am not a lover of the train but since I had almost never taken this local train, I was just curious.

I amdo not a lover of the trains, but since I almost never took this local train, I was just curiousI was curious since I have only rarely taken this local train. I do not love trains, but I was curious since I have only rarely taken this local train.

Using "the train" sounds like you specifically don't like that one train. If you mean all trains in general you don't need the "the" I change the ending to sound more natural

I am not a lover of the traintrain lover but since I almost never took this local train, I was just curious. I am not a train lover but since I almost never took this local train, I was just curious.

I saw there were 2 trains fans with their cameras awaiting that moment. I saw there were 2 train fans with their cameras awaiting that moment.

I saw there were 2two trains fans/(enthusiasts) with their cameras awaiting that moment. I saw there were two train fans/(enthusiasts) with their cameras awaiting that moment.

For numbers under 10, we need to write them out Another word for "fans" could be "enthusiasts"

I saw there were 2 trains fans with their cameras awaiting that moment. I saw there were 2 train fans with their cameras awaiting that moment.