One of the things that I love to do in this life is listening to music,. I can't lastay a minute without listening to a song. One of the things that I love to do in life is listen to music. I can't last a minute without listening to a song.

One of the things that I love to do in this life is listening to music, I can't stay a minute without listening to a song. One of the things that I love to do in this life is listening to music, I can't stay a minute without listening to a song.

One of the things I love to do in life is listen to music. I can't go a minute without it. 1. After "love to," we use the base verb form, not the -ing form. Correct: love to listen. Other examples: I love to dance. I love to sing. 2. You have two separate sentences joined by a comma. We call that a "comma splice error." To fix this, we make it into two separate sentences. Sometimes we use a semi-colon, but that is more advanced. 3. In English, the common phrase is "go a minute without (something)." We would normally say it as the pronoun for (music) to make the sentence less repetitive.

One of the things that I love to do in this life is listening to music, I can't staygo a minute without listening to a song. One of the things that I love to do in life is listening to music, I can't go a minute without listening to a song.

In English, you can just say "in life", "in this life" still makes sense but it is commonly used more so either in a comedic context or when someone is implying that one lives multiple lives. "I can't go" rather than "I can't stay" because it's in reference to "going on with life" and you're saying that you "can't go on with life" without listening to music.

One of the things that I love to do in this life is to listening to music, I can't staygo a minute without listening to a song. One of the things that I love to do in life is to listen to music, I can't go a minute without listening to a song.

There’s a few tiny errors here, but most of it comes down to just sayings and phrases that are said in English that you said incorrectly/oddly

It is therapeutic, calms your from stress, enhances your emotions, and soothes your soul. It is therapeutic, calms your stress, enhances your emotions and soothes your soul.

Third person singular present tense of verbs in English typically add an -s eg. to calm, I calm, he/she/it calms. Use an 'and' before the last item in the list.

It is therapeutic, calm you from stress, enhance your emotions, soothe your soul. It is therapeutic, calm you from stress, enhance your emotions, soothe your soul.

It is therapeutic, calms your stress, enhances your emotions, and soothes your soul. 1. Verb agreement: The subject is singular (it; referring to music). So all verbs must agree with a singular subject → they need -s endings. In this case: calms, enhances, soothes. Another example: The book is helpful, explains things clearly, and makes learning fun. 2. When listing items (over 2) in a sentence, the last two items listed are separated by and. So: enhances your emotions, and soothes your soul. Another example: She goes to the grocery store and picks up pineapples, apples, oranges, and bananas.

It is therapeutic, calms you from stress, enhances your emotions, and soothes your soul. It is therapeutic, calms you from stress, enhances your emotions and soothes your soul.

Just a few verb endings and you'd typically use "and" for the last topic in a list.

It is therapeutic, calm you from stresit decreases your stress levels, enhances your emotions, and soothes your soul. It is therapeutic, it decreases your stress levels, enhances your emotions, and soothes your soul.

1. “Calm you from stress” has a grammatical error, it should be “calms you from stress” as you should use the simple presents tense. But this phrase sounds odd so you should use something like “decreases your stress levels” or “relaxes you” 2. Like the last phrase, all of these clauses should be in the present simple tense as you are talking about what music does for you

So when I can´t sleep, I use to play a song inon my cell phone, i. It doesn't matter which one,. I just play it with low volume and program my sSpotify to stop playing in twenty minutes,. I fall asleep before that. So when I can´t sleep, I play a song on my cell phone. It doesn't matter which one. I just play it with low volume and program my Spotify to stop playing in twenty minutes. I fall asleep before that.

So when I can´’t sleep, I used to play a song ion my cellphone, i. It doesn'’t matter which sone,g. I just play it withat low volume and programset my sSpotify to stop playing inafter twenty minutes, I. I always fall asleep before thatit stops. So when I can’t sleep, I used to play a song on my phone. It doesn’t matter which song. I just play it at low volume and set my Spotify to stop after twenty minutes. I always fall asleep before it stops.

So, when I can´'t sleep, I use toually play a song ion my cellphone, i. It doesn't matter which one, I just play it with a low volume and program my sSpotify to stop playing in twenty minutes, and I fall asleep before that. So, when I can't sleep, I usually play a song on my cellphone. It doesn't matter which one, I just play it with a low volume and program my Spotify to stop playing in twenty minutes and I fall asleep before that.

Only small corrections here in terms of a bit of grammar. In English, you capitalise proper nouns such as "Spotify".

So wWhen I can´ouldn’t sleep, I use to play a song iwould play music on my cellphone, it doesn'idn’t matter which sone,g, I’d just play it with low volume and programset my spotify to stop playing in twenty minutes, I’d usually fall asleep before thaten. When I couldn’t sleep, I would play music on my phone, it didn’t matter which song, I’d just play it with low volume and set my spotify to stop playing in twenty minutes, I’d usually fall asleep before then.

1. You’re talking about something you’ve done before (a.k.a in the past), so you should use words like “couldn’t” and “would”. I changed the rest of the sentence to be in the past tense 2. “Cellphone” works, but most native speakers just say “phone”, it sounds more natural

If you suffer from insomnia, I recommend toyou do this everyday. If you suffer from insomnia, I recommend you do this everyday.

If you suffer from insomnia, I recommend to do this everyday. If you suffer from insomnia, I recommend to do this everyday.

If you suffer from insomnia, I recommend doing this every day.

If you suffer from insomnia, I recommend toyou do this everyday. If you suffer from insomnia, I recommend you do this everyday.

When recommending something to someone, it’s normally said “I recommend you do ___ everyday”. Since you’re talking to someone, you should say “you” instead of “to”