Jan. 4, 2021
Grafitti - a Crime or Street Art?
In my opinion, graffiti is a street art that can express themselves. I respect the talented people in this art. An ordinary layman would easily make some mistakes. I think that graffiti give colors the gray and smog-filled big city and small towns. However paintings should only refer to the permitted devices and be suitable for the entire environment. A street art also cannot be such as historical monuments, churches or museums. In such a case, graffiti is an act of vandalism.
I always admire paintings in buildings or blocks which have some a message and which can be interpret in their own way. However, I do not like grafitti, which are meaningless and ugly, consisting only of profanity or inscriptions. Grafitti should be removed and reported. Unfortunately, I still see buildings disfigured by vandals. I will never understand that the official ignore such problems.
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Graffitti - aA Crime or Street Art?
Graffiti - A Crime or Street Art?
In my opinion, graffiti is a street art that can express themselvesshow self-expression.
In my opinion, graffiti is a street art that can show self-expression.
I respect the talented people inwho perform this art.
I respect the talented people who perform this art.
An ordinary layman would easily make some mistakes. An ordinary layman would easily make some mistakes.
I'm not entirely certain, but I think you could just say "layman" instead of "ordinary layman" because the "ordinary" is implied.
I think that graffiti gives colors to the gray and smog-filled big cityies and small towns.
I think that graffiti gives color to the gray and smog-filled big cities and small towns.
However paintings should only refer to thebe created in permitted deviceareas and be suitable for the gentireeral environment.
However paintings should only be created in permitted areas and be suitable for the general environment.
A street art also cannot be on certain buildings, such as historical monuments, churches, or museums. A street art also cannot be on certain buildings, such as historical monuments, churches, or museums.
"cannot" is often written/spoken as "can't".
In such a case, the graffiti is an act of vandalism. In such a case, the graffiti is an act of vandalism.
I always admire paintings ion buildings or blocks which have some a message and which someone can be interpret in their own way.
I always admire paintings on buildings or blocks which have some a message and which someone can interpret in their own way.
However, I do not like grafitti, whichthose graffiti that are meaningless and ugly, consisting only of profanity or inscriptions.
However, I do not like those graffiti that are meaningless and ugly, consisting only of profanity or inscriptions.
GThat type of graffitti should be removed and reported.
That type of graffiti should be removed and reported.
Unfortunately, I still see buildings disfigured by vandals.
I will never understand that thehow officials ignore such problems.
I will never understand how officials ignore such problems.
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Grafitti - a Crime or Street Art?
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In my opinion, graffiti is a street art that can express themselves.
In my opinion, graffiti is a street art that can |
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I respect the talented people in this art.
I respect the talented people |
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An ordinary layman would easily make some mistakes. An ordinary layman would easily make some mistakes. An ordinary layman would easily make some mistakes. I'm not entirely certain, but I think you could just say "layman" instead of "ordinary layman" because the "ordinary" is implied. |
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I think that graffiti give colors the gray and smog-filled big city and small towns.
I think that graffiti gives color |
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However paintings should only refer to the permitted devices and be suitable for the entire environment.
However paintings should only |
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A street art also cannot be such as historical monuments, churches or museums. A street art also cannot be on certain buildings, such as historical monuments, churches, or museums. A street art also cannot be on certain buildings, such as historical monuments, churches, or museums. "cannot" is often written/spoken as "can't". |
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In such a case, graffiti is an act of vandalism. In such a case, the graffiti is an act of vandalism. In such a case, the graffiti is an act of vandalism. |
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I always admire paintings in buildings or blocks which have some a message and which can be interpret in their own way.
I always admire paintings |
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However, I do not like grafitti, which are meaningless and ugly, consisting only of profanity or inscriptions.
However, I do not like |
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Grafitti should be removed and reported.
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Unfortunately, I still see buildings disfigured by vandals. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I will never understand that the official ignore such problems.
I will never understand |
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