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My favorite book.

When I was a child ( about a year ago , now I am a mature and grown man already) I found a book without a cover in the very old house in mountains, where we were staying on summer vacancion.

I started reading it and spent several wonderful evenings with this book, reading in bed before sleep.

It was a story about a young boy who lived a nice but boring life in a small village.

One day he was hosting a passing by group of older guys ( some of them were with beards already) from a neighbour country.

These older guys wanted to make a trip to an exotic place with a big sacred mountain and have some fun on the way, combining business and pleasure.

So this young guy decided to go with them .

They have had a lot of interesting adventures and a lot of fun. They even fought with other guys and found some money.
Then they returned home tired and happy.

I really liked this story. However some things were strange to me.
I could not understand why they were traveling several months ( almost a year actually). Don't they have a work to do ?
Also they were smoking pipes which is a disgusting habit at their age.
The young guy age has been mentioned as 50 which is definitely a mistake.

Anyway it was a veru nice story and I liked it very much. I wish this story will be taught in school instead of math.

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When I was a child ( about a year ago , now I am a mature and grown man already) I found a book without a cover in the very old house in mountains, where we were staying on summer vacanction.

You were a child last year, and this year you are a mature man?

In English we normally talk about children then teenagers then adults seperately. So children are <13, teenagers are 13-19, and adults are 18+ (or 20+, or 21+... depends a little on local culture). So normally there would be at least a 5 year gap between being described as a child and being described as an adult.

Or perhaps you meant "some years ago" rather than "about a year ago"?

I started reading it and spent several wonderful evenings with this book, reading in bed before sleeping.

One day he was hosting a passing by group of older guys passing through ( some of them were withhad beards already) from a neighbouring country.

"passing by" is like a momentary interaction, like passing someone on the street in a couple of minutes. If they stayed long enough to be hosted, then "passing through" is more natural.

"neighbouring" is the adjective of "neighbour"

These older guys wanted to mtake a trip to an exotic place with a big sacred mountain and have some fun on the way, combining business and pleasure.

So this young guy decided to go with them .

They have had a lot of interesting adventures and a lot of fun.

I could not understand why they were traveling for several months ( almost a year actually).

Don't they have a work to do ?

The young guy's age hwas been mentioned assaid to be 50 which is definitely a mistake.

Anyway it was a veruy nice story and I liked it very much.

I wish this story will beas taught in school instead of math.

When I was a child ( aboutwhich was more than a year ago , nowas I am now a mature and grown man already) I found a book without a cover in thea very old house in mountains, where we were staying on summer vacancion.

I started reading it and spent several wonderful evenings with this book, reading in bed before I fell sleep.

One day he was hosting a passing by group of older guys who were passing by ( some of them were withhad beards already) from a neighbouring country.

These older guys wanted to make a triptravel to an exotic place with a big sacred mountain and have some fun on the way, combining business and pleasure.

So this young guy decided to go with them .

They haved had a lot of interesting adventures and a lot of fun.

I could not understand why they were traveling for several months ( almost a year actually).

Doidn't they have a work to do ?

The young guy age has been mentioned as 50was described as being 50 years old, which iwas definitely a mistake.

Anyway it was a veruy nice story and I liked it very much.

I wish this story willcould be taught in school instead of math.

My favorite book.


One day he was hosting a passing by group of older guys ( some of them were with beards already) from a neighbour country.


One day he was hosting a passing by group of older guys who were passing by ( some of them were withhad beards already) from a neighbouring country.

One day he was hosting a passing by group of older guys passing through ( some of them were withhad beards already) from a neighbouring country.

"passing by" is like a momentary interaction, like passing someone on the street in a couple of minutes. If they stayed long enough to be hosted, then "passing through" is more natural. "neighbouring" is the adjective of "neighbour"

These older guys wanted to make a trip to an exotic place with a big sacred mountain and have some fun on the way, combining business and pleasure.


These older guys wanted to make a triptravel to an exotic place with a big sacred mountain and have some fun on the way, combining business and pleasure.

These older guys wanted to mtake a trip to an exotic place with a big sacred mountain and have some fun on the way, combining business and pleasure.

So this young guy decided to go with them .


So this young guy decided to go with them .

So this young guy decided to go with them .

They have had a lot of interesting adventures and a lot of fun.


They haved had a lot of interesting adventures and a lot of fun.

They have had a lot of interesting adventures and a lot of fun.

They even fought with other guys and found some money.


Then they returned home tired and happy.


I really liked this story.


However some things were strange to me.


I could not understand why they were traveling several months ( almost a year actually).


I could not understand why they were traveling for several months ( almost a year actually).

I could not understand why they were traveling for several months ( almost a year actually).

Don't they have a work to do ?


Doidn't they have a work to do ?

Don't they have a work to do ?

Also they were smoking which is a disgusting habit at their age.


The young guy age has been mentioned as 50 which is definitely a mistake.


The young guy age has been mentioned as 50was described as being 50 years old, which iwas definitely a mistake.

The young guy's age hwas been mentioned assaid to be 50 which is definitely a mistake.

Anyway it was a veru nice story and I liked it very much.


Anyway it was a veruy nice story and I liked it very much.

Anyway it was a veruy nice story and I liked it very much.

I wish this story will be taught in school instead of math.


I wish this story willcould be taught in school instead of math.

I wish this story will beas taught in school instead of math.

When I was a child ( about a year ago , now I am a mature and grown man already) I found a book without a cover in the very old house in mountains, where we were staying on summer vacancion.


When I was a child ( aboutwhich was more than a year ago , nowas I am now a mature and grown man already) I found a book without a cover in thea very old house in mountains, where we were staying on summer vacancion.

When I was a child ( about a year ago , now I am a mature and grown man already) I found a book without a cover in the very old house in mountains, where we were staying on summer vacanction.

You were a child last year, and this year you are a mature man? In English we normally talk about children then teenagers then adults seperately. So children are <13, teenagers are 13-19, and adults are 18+ (or 20+, or 21+... depends a little on local culture). So normally there would be at least a 5 year gap between being described as a child and being described as an adult. Or perhaps you meant "some years ago" rather than "about a year ago"?

It was a story about a young boy who lived a nice but boring life in a small village.


I started reading it and spent several wonderful evenings with this book, reading in bed before sleep.


I started reading it and spent several wonderful evenings with this book, reading in bed before I fell sleep.

I started reading it and spent several wonderful evenings with this book, reading in bed before sleeping.

Also they were smoking pipes which is a disgusting habit at their age.


I started reading it and spent several wonderful evenings with this book, reading a part of it in bed before sleep.


When I was a child I found a book without a cover in the very old house in mountains, where we were staying on summer vacancion.


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