One day he was hosting a passing by group of older guys who were passing by ( some of them were withhad beards already) from a neighbouring country. One day he was hosting a group of older guys who were passing by (some of them had beards already) from a neighbouring country.

One day he was hosting a passing by group of older guys passing through ( some of them were withhad beards already) from a neighbouring country. One day he was hosting a group of older guys passing through (some of them had beards already) from a neighbouring country.

"passing by" is like a momentary interaction, like passing someone on the street in a couple of minutes. If they stayed long enough to be hosted, then "passing through" is more natural. "neighbouring" is the adjective of "neighbour"

These older guys wanted to make a triptravel to an exotic place with a big sacred mountain and have some fun on the way, combining business and pleasure. These older guys wanted to travel to an exotic place with a big sacred mountain and have some fun on the way, combining business and pleasure.

These older guys wanted to mtake a trip to an exotic place with a big sacred mountain and have some fun on the way, combining business and pleasure. These older guys wanted to take a trip to an exotic place with a big sacred mountain and have some fun on the way, combining business and pleasure.

So this young guy decided to go with them . So this young guy decided to go with them.

So this young guy decided to go with them . So this young guy decided to go with them.

They haved had a lot of interesting adventures and a lot of fun. They had had a lot of interesting adventures and a lot of fun.

They have had a lot of interesting adventures and a lot of fun. They had a lot of interesting adventures and a lot of fun.

I could not understand why they were traveling for several months ( almost a year actually). I could not understand why they were traveling for several months (almost a year actually).

I could not understand why they were traveling for several months ( almost a year actually). I could not understand why they were traveling for several months (almost a year actually).

Doidn't they have a work to do ? Didn't they have a work to do ?

Don't they have a work to do ? Don't they have work to do ?

The young guy age has been mentioned as 50was described as being 50 years old, which iwas definitely a mistake. The young guy was described as being 50 years old, which was definitely a mistake.

The young guy's age hwas been mentioned assaid to be 50 which is definitely a mistake. The young guy's age was said to be 50 which is definitely a mistake.

Anyway it was a veruy nice story and I liked it very much. Anyway it was a very nice story and I liked it very much.

Anyway it was a veruy nice story and I liked it very much. Anyway it was a very nice story and I liked it very much.

I wish this story willcould be taught in school instead of math. I wish this story could be taught in school instead of math.

I wish this story will beas taught in school instead of math. I wish this story was taught in school instead of math.

When I was a child ( aboutwhich was more than a year ago , nowas I am now a mature and grown man already) I found a book without a cover in thea very old house in mountains, where we were staying on summer vacancion. When I was a child (which was more than a year ago, as I am now a mature and grown man) I found a book without a cover in a very old house in mountains, where we were staying on summer vacancion.

When I was a child ( about a year ago , now I am a mature and grown man already) I found a book without a cover in the very old house in mountains, where we were staying on summer vacanction. When I was a child (about a year ago, now I am a mature and grown man already) I found a book without a cover in the very old house in mountains where we were staying on summer vacation.

You were a child last year, and this year you are a mature man? In English we normally talk about children then teenagers then adults seperately. So children are <13, teenagers are 13-19, and adults are 18+ (or 20+, or 21+... depends a little on local culture). So normally there would be at least a 5 year gap between being described as a child and being described as an adult. Or perhaps you meant "some years ago" rather than "about a year ago"?

I started reading it and spent several wonderful evenings with this book, reading in bed before I fell sleep. I started reading it and spent several wonderful evenings with this book, reading in bed before I fell sleep.

I started reading it and spent several wonderful evenings with this book, reading in bed before sleeping. I started reading it and spent several wonderful evenings with this book, reading in bed before sleeping.