Aug. 2, 2025
Day 1st
Today I’ve found this site and decided to use it for updating my language and improving writing. I’m going to write every day.
But I don’t know what about I will write. Don’t have any idea. To describe own thoughts is looked as not productive.
Okey. I’ll try to tell about this day. I woke up at half past eight. Today was cloudy, so I was sleepy. Had a tea, did exercises and went to work in the garden. I cropped the garlic and thinned out the carrots. I prepared a soup with vegetables from the garden. I took a saucepan and boiled chicken, then I peeled and cut potatoes, cabbage and added to the soup. Peeled the carrots, grated, cut the onions and fried them,then added to the soup. At the end of cooking I added finely chopped parsley and dill. It was tasty.
Day 1st
Today I’ve found this site and decided to use it for updating my language skills and improving my writing.
I’m going to write every day.
But I don’t know what about I will write about.
DI don’t really have any ideas.
To describe your own thoughts is looked as unot productive [in my culture/family/something else].
If you specify who thinks it is unproductive to describe your own thoughts, that would make the sentence sound better and be clearer.
Okeay.
I’ll try to tell you about this my day today.
I woke up at half past eight.
Today was cloudy, so I was sleepy.
HI had a cup of tea, did exercises and went to work in the garden.
What exercises? If you mean physical activity, it would be: "I did some exercise." If you mean grammar exercises or some other learning activity, it would be best to specify, eg. "did some grammar exercises"
I cropppruned the garlic and thinned out the carrots.
Then, I prepared a soup with vegetables from the garden.
I took a saucepan and boiled some chicken, t. Then I peeled and cut some potatoes, and cabbage and added them to the soup.
PNext, I peeled the carrots,. Then I grated, and cut the onions and, fried them,then and added them to the soup.
At the end of cooking I added finely chopped parsley and dill.
It was tasty.
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Day 1st Day 1 |
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Today I’ve found this site and decided to use it for updating my language and improving writing. Today I’ve found this site and decided to use it for updating my language skills and improving my writing. |
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I’m going to write every day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But I don’t know what about I will write. But I don’t know what |
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Don’t have any idea.
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To describe own thoughts is looked as not productive. To describe your own thoughts is looked as un If you specify who thinks it is unproductive to describe your own thoughts, that would make the sentence sound better and be clearer. |
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Okey. Ok |
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I’ll try to tell about this day. I’ll try to tell you about |
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I woke up at half past eight. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Today was cloudy, so I was sleepy. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Had a tea, did exercises and went to work in the garden.
What exercises? If you mean physical activity, it would be: "I did some exercise." If you mean grammar exercises or some other learning activity, it would be best to specify, eg. "did some grammar exercises" |
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I cropped the garlic and thinned out the carrots. I |
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I prepared a soup with vegetables from the garden. Then, I prepared a soup with vegetables from the garden. |
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I took a saucepan and boiled chicken, then I peeled and cut potatoes, cabbage and added to the soup. I took a saucepan and boiled some chicken |
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Peeled the carrots, grated, cut the onions and fried them,then added to the soup.
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At the end of cooking I added finely chopped parsley and dill. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was tasty. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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