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Jan. 12, 2021

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It's Really Cold

In Japan, it's really cold this winter. Compared with last year, it snows more and temperatures are lower. I prefer winter to summer, but excessive cold is also annoying because I don't want to go out and feel sluggish even in my room. I watched the news that water pipes burst all over Japan because the water frozen in the pipes. If it occurs in my room, a waterfall will appear from the ceiling. It must be terrible.

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I watched the news that water pipes burst all over Japan because the water frozen in the pipes.

Or alternatively "...because the water was frozen in the pipes."

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Added a small correction. Keep up the good work!

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ponta

Jan. 13, 2021

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Thank you so much!

I watched the news that water pipes burst all over Japan because the water frozen in the pipes.

If ithat occursred in my room, a waterfall willould appear from the ceiling.

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Very good job!

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ponta

Jan. 13, 2021

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Thank you!

It's Really Cold


In Japan, it's really cold this winter.


Compared with last year, it snows more and temperatures are lower.


I prefer winter to summer, but excessive cold is also annoying because I don't want to go out and feel sluggish even in my room.


I watched the news that water pipes burst all over Japan because the water frozen in the pipes.


I watched the news that water pipes burst all over Japan because the water frozen in the pipes.

I watched the news that water pipes burst all over Japan because the water frozen in the pipes.

Or alternatively "...because the water was frozen in the pipes."

If it occurs in my room, a waterfall will appear from the ceiling.


If ithat occursred in my room, a waterfall willould appear from the ceiling.

It must be terrible.


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