Aug. 29, 2022
It's not real, just practice some word.
My work place was unpleasant atomosphere before. My boss was ambitious and hard-working, but also he was nosy, over-sensitive and impatient. He micromanaged everything team member did. But he spent time to hear about detail of project progress, he couldn't give us appropriate feedback. If someone made a mistake under such a situation, he got angry for about 2 hours one on one. It was so awful.
It's noThis isn't real, just to practice some words.
My work place wasonce had an unpleasant atomosphere before.
My boss was ambitious and hard-working, but also he was also nosy, over-sensitive and impatient.
He micromanaged everything team memberhis employees did.
ButAlthough he spent time listening to thear about detail of project progres progress of our projects, he couldn't give us appropriate feedback.
If someone made a mistake underin such a situation, he got angry at us for about 2 hours one on oneindividually.
It was so awful.
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I think many people could relate to this a little!
It's not real, just practice some word.
Maybe "it's not serious, I'm just practicing" will convey what you want?
My work place washad an unpleasant atomosphere before.
My boss was ambitious and hard-working, but also he was also nosy, over-sensitive and impatient.
This looks more natural.
He micromanaged everything team memberhat the team did.
But hHe spent time to hear aboutlisten to details of project progress, but he couldn't give us appropriate feedback.
If someone made a mistake underin such a situation, he got angry for about 2 hours, one on one.
The above correction is grammatically sensible, but I would consider dropping the 'one on one' and adding something else.
It was so awful.
It's not real,; I'm just practiceing some words.
My work place washad an unpleasant atomosphere before.
動詞を変わりましたが、「was」を使う場合は "My workplace was unpleasant before."
My boss was ambitious and hard-working, but also he was also nosy, over-sensitive and impatient.
この訂正を説明が足りない感じです。
He micromanaged everything team members did.
But hHe spent time to hearing about the details of the project's progress, but he couldn't give us appropriate feedback.
If someone made a mistake underin such a situation, he got angry for about 2 hours in one -on -one meetings.
It's not real, just practice some word practice.
My work place washad an unpleasant atomosphere before.
My boss was ambitious and hard-working, but also he was also nosy, over-sensitive and impatient.
He micromanaged everything team members did.
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He micromanaged everything the team members did.
But he spentWhen he took the time to hear about the details of how a project progressed, he couldn't give us appropriate feedback.
If someone made a mistake under such a situationcircumstances, he got angry for about 2 hours one on one.
わー！
It was so awful.
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I'm glad this isn't real. This really does sound awful. 上手に書けています！
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It's not real, just practice some word. It's not real, just It's not real It's not real, just practice some word. Maybe "it's not serious, I'm just practicing" will convey what you want?
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My work place was unpleasant atomosphere before. My work My work 動詞を変わりましたが、「was」を使う場合は "My workplace was unpleasant before." My work place My work place |
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My boss was ambitious and hard-working, but also he was nosy, over-sensitive and impatient. My boss was ambitious and hard-working, but My boss was ambitious and hard-working, but この訂正を説明が足りない感じです。 My boss was ambitious and hard-working, but This looks more natural. My boss was ambitious and hard-working, but |
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He micromanaged everything team member did. He micromanaged everything team members did. or He micromanaged everything the team members did. He micromanaged everything team members did. He micromanaged everything t He micromanaged everything |
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But he spent time to hear about detail of project progress, he couldn't give us appropriate feedback.
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If someone made a mistake under such a situation, he got angry for about 2 hours one on one. If someone made a mistake under such わー！ If someone made a mistake If someone made a mistake The above correction is grammatically sensible, but I would consider dropping the 'one on one' and adding something else. If someone made a mistake |
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