June 15, 2025
It’s my first time on this website
Today, My sister, mother and I went to a shopping mall. There are a lot of people because today is Sunday. We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played crane games. I got a cushion of hotdog ! Shape of this cushion is like a hotdog. That’s very funny! I love this cushion. After that, we came back to our home. Tonight is my sister’s birthday party. Mom is going to make a lot of dishes so I’m so exciting! I have to help her, so this diary is stop here! Thank you for reading.
It’s my first time on this website
Today, Mmy sister, mother and I went to a shopping mall.
There awere a lot of people because today is Sunday.
We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played crane games.
I got a cushion of hotdog cushion!
SThe shape of this cushion is like a hotdog.
That’s very funny!
I love this cushion.
After that, we camewent back to our home.
Tonight is my sister’s birthday party.
Mom is going to make a lot of dishes, so I’m so excitinged!
I have to help her, so this diary isentry will stop here!
Thank you for reading.
Today, Mmy sister, mother and I went to a shopping mall.
There awere a lot of people because today is Sunday.
We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played crane games.
I've never used curly quotes before; that's a nice touch
I got a cushion of hotdog hot dog cushion!
This is more natural. People don't often use exclamation marks these days, it's your choice, though
SThe shape of this cushion is like a hot dog.
'The cushion was shaped like a hot dog' is better, in my opinion
I love this cushion.
After that, we came back to our home.
Tonight is my sister’s birthday party.
Mom is going to make a lot of dishes, so I’m so excitinged!
I have to help her, so this diary is stops here!
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Notwithstanding some minor mistakes, your English is very solid. I'm actually learning Japanese, but it's pretty hard 泣きそう. I don't feel like writing, and my reading speed is slow.
Today, Mmy sister, mother and I went to a shopping mall.
There are a lot of people because today is Sunday.
We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played crane gamon the claw machines.
I got a cushion ofstuffed hotdog !
Shape of this cushion is like a hotdog.
This sentence is not needed if the previous correction is made
After that, we camewent back to our home.
Mom is going to make a lot of dishes so I’m so excitinged!
I have to help her, so this diary iswill stop here!
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Today, My sister, mother and I went to a shopping mall. Today, Today, Today, |
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There are a lot of people because today is Sunday. There are a lot of people because today is Sunday. There There |
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We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played crane games. We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played We went to a Game Center called “Round1” and played crane games. I've never used curly quotes before; that's a nice touch This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I got a cushion of hotdog ! I got a I got a This is more natural. People don't often use exclamation marks these days, it's your choice, though I got a |
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Shape of this cushion is like a hotdog. Shape of this cushion is like a hotdog. This sentence is not needed if the previous correction is made
'The cushion was shaped like a hot dog' is better, in my opinion
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I love this cushion. I love this cushion. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After that, we came back to our home. After that, we After that, we came back After that, we |
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Tonight is my sister’s birthday party. Tonight is my sister’s birthday party. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Mom is going to make a lot of dishes so I’m so exciting! Mom is going to make a lot of dishes so I’m so excit Mom is going to make a lot of dishes, so I’m so excit Mom is going to make a lot of dishes, so I’m so excit |
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