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sabina45fd

July 14, 2023

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Hi there! Today, we're talking about the future. I think for mowt people the future is the most important thing in their life. What do you think? This topic is becoming more and more popular. People being at a reasonable age start to think about their hobbies, future profession and more. People are criticized for their clothes,weight, voice,profession, and dreams. When a person has learned to cope with this,he no longer cares about the opinion of others. But why do people care about the opinions of others? Why for them it's so important? I think it's because people grow up with this pressure from others. And how I can heal my morale state? As psychologists and scientists say,you need to learn to hear only yourself and don't listen what the others say. I hope your future will be the best!

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(it's like a podcast )

Hi there!

Today, we're talking about the future.

I think for mowst people the future is the most important thing in their life.

What do you think?

This topic is becoming more and more popular.

People being at a reasonableat a young age start to think about their hobbies, future profession and more.

People are criticized for their clothes,weight, voice,profession, and dreams.

When a person has learned to cope with this, he no longer cares about the opinion of others.

But why do people care about the opinions of others?

Why for themis it's so important? for them?

I think it's because people grow up with this pressure from others.

And how I can heal my morale state?

As psychologists and scientists say, you only need to learn to hear onlylisten to yourself and don't listen what the others say.

I hope your future will be the best!

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sabina45fd

July 14, 2023

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Thanks!

Hi there!

Today, we're talking about the future.

I think for mowst people the future is the most important thing in their life.

What do you think?

This topic is becoming more and more popular.

People being at a reasonable age start to think about their hobbies, future profession and more.

People are criticized for their clothes,weight, voice,profession, and dreams.

When a person has learned to cope with this,he no longer cares about the opinion of others.

But why do people care about the opinions of others?

Why for them, it'ss it so important?

It is = statement
Is it = question

This sounds really fancy like something from a book but perfectly correct.in natural conversation, I'd probably say why is it so important for/to them

I think it's because people grow up with this pressure from others.

And how I can heal my morale statstate of morale?

I don't think we say morale state but I could be wrong there. Not something I talk about very often

As psychologists and scientists say,you need to learn to hear only yourself and don't listen to what the others say.

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Your English is great in this writing. As the topic is pretty "deep" I may have missed some nuance in your meanings so I apologize for that but very well written

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sabina45fd

July 14, 2023

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Thank you!

(it's like a podcast )


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Today, we're talking about the future.


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I think for mowt people the future is the most important thing in their life.


I think for mowst people the future is the most important thing in their life.

I think for mowst people the future is the most important thing in their life.

What do you think?


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This topic is becoming more and more popular.


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People being at a reasonable age start to think about their hobbies, future profession and more.


People being at a reasonable age start to think about their hobbies, future profession and more.

People being at a reasonableat a young age start to think about their hobbies, future profession and more.

People are criticized for their clothes,weight, voice,profession, and dreams.


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When a person has learned to cope with this,he no longer cares about the opinion of others.


When a person has learned to cope with this, he no longer cares about the opinion of others.

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But why do people care about the opinions of others?


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Why for them it's so important?


Why for them, it'ss it so important?

It is = statement Is it = question This sounds really fancy like something from a book but perfectly correct.in natural conversation, I'd probably say why is it so important for/to them

Why for themis it's so important? for them?

I think it's because people grow up with this pressure from others.


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And how I can heal my morale state?


And how I can heal my morale statstate of morale?

I don't think we say morale state but I could be wrong there. Not something I talk about very often

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As psychologists and scientists say,you need to learn to hear only yourself and don't listen what the others say.


As psychologists and scientists say,you need to learn to hear only yourself and don't listen to what the others say.

As psychologists and scientists say, you only need to learn to hear onlylisten to yourself and don't listen what the others say.

I hope your future will be the best!


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