Nov. 5, 2021
It's getting late...
Now that the summer time is over, I really feel how the days are getting shorter and shorter! Today for example, it got dark at around 5 PM, which is a bit crazy to think about. Now we are getting around 9 and a half hours of daylight and every time this number is getting shorter and shorter every day!
I wonder how this affects the overall mood of people.
It's getting late...
Now that the summer time is over, I really feel how the days are getting shorter and shorter!
For seasons, we usually say the name of the season without reference to time.
Today for example, it got dark at around 5 PM, which is a bit crazy to think about.
Now we are getting around 9 and a half hours of daylight and every time this number is getting shorter and shorter every day!
"Every time" is redundant here.
I wonder how this affects the overall mood of peoplepeople's moods.
In English, we try to use the possessive as much as we can! Your sentence works grammatically, but it doesn't sound smooth in English.
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You have a good command of grammar! My only ideas for improvement are about style and smoothness, not correctness. This is really good!
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It's getting late... This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now that the summer time is over, I really feel how the days are getting shorter and shorter! Now that For seasons, we usually say the name of the season without reference to time. |
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Today for example, it got dark at around 5 PM, which is a bit crazy to think about. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now we are getting around 9 and a half hours of daylight and every time this number is getting shorter and shorter every day! Now we are getting around 9 and a half hours of daylight and "Every time" is redundant here. |
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I wonder how this affects the overall mood of people. I wonder how this affects In English, we try to use the possessive as much as we can! Your sentence works grammatically, but it doesn't sound smooth in English. |
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