Nov. 7, 2019
It's been half a year since I konmari'd my place.
My first post in English! Please correct any mistakes I made and any unnatural sounding wordings I chose.
I grew up in a hoarder's house. A very filthy one. I had always been surrounded by trillions of stuff, all kinds of bugs and mice as a child. I had never learned how to clean my place and how often I should. I would vacuum a square meter in my messy place and be done.
As a clueless adult that continued until I found the Konmari method this year right after I quit my job. Her method just clicked for me and I had plenty of time at the time.
My life has totally changed. This is what relaxing at home truly feels like. This is how everyone lives their daily lives. People were not faking their clean houses as I thought. It still blows my mind that I had not known this my entire life.
Now I'm trying to learn how to clean every corner of my house. I'm trying to develop a habit of cleaning and trying to come up with a cleaning routine that suits me. I'm slowly becoming a normal person and this is such a nice feeling.
こんまりしてから半年が経ちました。
初めての英語での投稿です。間違いや不自然な言葉遣いがあったら直してください。
I had always been surrounded by trillions of stuffthings, all kinds of bugs and mice as a child.
Her method just clicked for me and I had plenty of time at the time.
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It's been half a year since I konmari'd my place.
My first post in English!
Please correct any mistakes I made and anyand unnatural -sounding wordings I chose.
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I grew up in a hoarder's house.
AI grew up in a hoarder’s house—a very filthy one.
This is not a necessary correction, but I think it flows more naturally to combine this sentence and the one before it with this type of punctuation.
I had always been surrounded by trillions of stuff, all kinds of bugs, and mice as a child.
I had never learned how to clean my place andor how often Iit should be cleaned.
As a clueless adult, thatis continued until I found the Konmari method this year right after I quit my job.
Her method just clicked for me, and I had plenty of time at the time.
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This is what relaxing at home truly feels like.
I'm trying to develop a habit of cleaning and trying to come up with a cleanings week as a routine that suits me.
I'm slowly becoming a normal person and this, which is such a nice feeling.
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I konmari’d my wardrobe this year! It felt so nice to get rid of a bunch of stuff and have an organized closet. Good luck in creating your cleaning routine!!
Nov. 9, 2019
I'm trying to develop a habit of cleaning and trying to come up with a cleanings week as a routine that suits me.
Oh no, this should say *as well as a routine
My bad for making corrections on my phone!
MThis is my first post in English!
Adding "this is" makes it sound a bit more natural
Please correct any mistakes I've made and any unnatural sounding wordings I chose.
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I think this is the simplest way of saying it
I had always been surrounded by trillionsa plethora of stuff, all kinds of bugs and mice as a child.
Plethora is a fancy word meaning a lot of. You can also say I have always been surrounded by a lot of stuff/things.
I had never learned how to clean my place andor how often I should.
Sounds more natural to me
As a clueless adult that continued until I found the Konmari method this year right after I quit my job.
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This was a very interesting read. I am also interested in learning more about this method. My parents also hoarded stuff.
It's been half a year since I konmari'd my place.
My first post in English!
Please correct any mistakes I made and any unnatural sounding wordings I chose.
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I grew up in a hoarder's house.
I hadve always been surrounded by trillions of stuff,; all kinds of bugs and mice as a child.
I hadve never learned how to clean my place and how often I should.
I would vacuum a square meter in my messy place and be done.
As a clueless adult, that continued until I found the Konmari method this year right after I quit my job.
Her method just clicked for me and I had plenty of time at the time.
back then.¶
My life has totally changed.
This is what relaxing at home truly feels like.
This is how everyone lives their daily lives.
People were not faking their clean houses as I thought.
It still blows my mind that I had not known this my entire life.
Now I'm trying to learn how to clean every corner of my house.
I'm trying to develop a habit of cleaning and trying to come up with a cleaning routine that suits me.
I'm slowly becoming a normal person and this is such a nice feeling.
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